List: Raisa

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  • May name is Raisa and I am a closer.1 / To many a closer won't mean much. I'm not a case closer for the police or a lawyer. I don't go aro
    100 words, 62 comments, on Jun 24 3:58 PM 2008. In , First person
  • May name is Raisa and I am a closer.1 / To many a closer won't mean much. I'm not a case closer for the police or a lawyer. I don't go aro
    100 words, 62 comments, on Jun 24 3:58 PM 2008. In , First person
  • I was sleeping when the call came. I only remember because I was really enjoying this dream. The arms that were wrapped around be were str
    1000 words, 52 comments, on Jun 30 3:22 PM 2008. In First person
  • The apartment was a mess. The smell of gunpowder was heavy in the air almost like after a fireworks display and I wrinkled my nose as
    1100 words, 27 comments, on Jul 4 3:22 PM 2008. In First person
  • The bedroom didn’t have windows on the street side, so I ran out to the living room to the floor to ceiling windows. From there I looked t
    2000 words, 22 comments, on Jul 20 11:59 PM 2008
  • I made it home. As soon as I slid my key in the lock I instantly felt better. It was like a flannel blanket had been thrown around my shou
    1400 words, 15 comments, on Jul 27 12:28 AM 2008
  • “Kale?” I whispered. The dog had snuggled in beside and his warmth gave me comfort. “Kale, I can’t get back to my car. I’m sure they’re
    600 words, 20 comments, on Jul 30 9:46 PM 2008
  • The dog and I stood pressed against a bordering hedge. Its recently trimmed branches poked into my spine and the dog shifted every few sec
    400 words, 15 comments, on Aug 5 10:45 PM 2008
  • We sat in silence, with only the dog’s heavy breathing breaking the silence. It was crowded in the beamer, with the god, Kale, and me even
    800 words, 13 comments, on Aug 10 6:01 PM 2008
  • I was running again, only there weren’t any details. Shadows ran with me in a tunnel, but I knew I was still running in the alley. Beside
    1200 words, 11 comments, on Aug 16 11:19 PM 2008
  • I thought Kale was being a little paranoid when he slipped the ladder back chair from the vanity, under the doorknob. I closed the curtain
    800 words, 13 comments, on Aug 17 4:04 PM 2008
  • The mirror over the sink was fogged up and I did something I would have never done at my own place. I wiped away the steam. I watched as
    700 words, 9 comments, on Aug 18 12:40 AM 2008
  • As the books I so reverently read would say, my heart jumped into my throat and my stomach dropped. I just stood there with my heart pound
    700 words, 13 comments, on Aug 27 8:31 PM 2008
  • Kale’s car was not an option. So I lead Dugan around the corner of the mom and pop motel. Other travelers were busy packing up their cars
    1000 words, 19 comments, on Aug 27 9:54 PM 2008
  • Kale left the room and ran past the families packing up, past the vending machines and ice machine. As soon as he turned the corner, he he
    700 words, 14 comments, on Sep 28 11:13 PM 2008
  • A small compacted white car pulled into the deserted lot. Clouds of smoke puffed steadily from the blackened tailpipe. I'm not good at car
    700 words, 15 comments, on Oct 9 6:43 PM 2008
  • I almost fell over with surprise. I still had no idea what was happening.
    1000 words, 8 comments, on Oct 12 12:00 AM 2008
  • In the background low conversations buzzed about the Call Center. I was standing by a young recruit with pale blond hair, my hands rested
    300 words, 6 comments, on Oct 18 9:09 PM 2008. In
  • I don't expect anyone to really read this, but at least I know it is together
    14500 words, on Oct 29 2:04 PM 2008
  • 4100 words, 6 comments, on Feb 9 9:33 PM. In Drama, Mystery
  • I made it home. As I slid my key in the lock I instantly felt better. It was like a flannel blanket had been thrown around my shoulders. Warmth, security and safety surrounded me. My apartment door opened about the time my ce
    2300 words, on Aug 20 1:16 PM. In Action, Adventure
  • We sat in silence, with only the dog’s heavy breathing. Even though there was a back seat, it was crowded in the Beamer, with the dog, Kale, and me 1
    2800 words, 1 comment, on Aug 20 1:21 PM. In Action, Adventure
  • The mirror over the sink was fogged up and I did something I would have never done at my own place. I wiped away the steam. I watched as the beads of condensation formed on the surface. Some made small rivers, pooling at the
    2400 words, 1 comment, on Aug 20 1:26 PM. In Action, Adventure
  • Kale left the room and ran past the families packing up, past the vending machines and ice machine. As soon as he turned the corner, he heard her. Raisa was explaining her relationship with him.1
    2400 words, 1 comment, on Aug 20 1:31 PM. In Action, Adventure
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