These are not chapters...well not yet so far these are just scenes that I think I can work to gether...here is a run down on the characters....the story switches back and forth from each of there points of view
1. Amy- so far main narrator tall five foot seven, athletic build, slim long red hair. A year younger than the rest. Best friends with Sarah dating Blade Realist who has her whole life planned out.
2. Sarah-tall five foot eight slim short pin straight black hair Best friends with Amy dating Alex Realist that just lives day to day with out planning out her future
3. Alex-short for a guy five foot seven, super skinny, not very built but strong green eyes kinda shaggy blonde hair, smart but clueless (blonde) sweet, but tries to hard to be cool bipolar
4. Blade tall six-foot athletic soccer player. Short shaggy dark brown almost black hair. Creamy hazel eyes. Silky smooth skin, six pack tan dating Amy realist/idealist mix.
5. John average height 5’9” slim tan long brown hair down to his eyes Gay Down to earth. Dating Shane. Crazy hyper, Blue eyes actor in training
6. Shane- tall 6’2” model’s body tan short spiked blonde hair. Gay dating John, mellow Green eyes
each entries is labeled with 2 numbers, 1 that tells the order that I wrote them, although there will be gaps and another written in [] that will tell the where this is from that characters point of view...like the 4th scene from Amy's POV and the 5th scene I wrote would be titled like this "The Loss of Reason" Amy [4] 5
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200 words, 2 comments, on Jun 18 4:44 PM 2008. In , Love, Romance, Straight, Teen, The loss of reason
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400 words, 4 comments, on Sep 28 8:03 PM 2008. In Independence, Life, Love, Other, Teen, The loss of reason, Young adult
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When it's not 3am, I will come back here and read all of these.
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sounds good to me...I could use some feedback...but I don't blame you for going to sleep I would be too...lol....but I've got a story to finish for a contest....


