My 2nd version of Redemption is collected here.
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The Man Called Truth.
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The Whisper of the Past.
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This better explains some of the things mentioned in the story about kierith's past. after i finish revising redemption, the story will flow better, have a better storyline, and be less comfusing. not to mention, the discovery of the name "kierith".
also, i have noticed that only the first word in these personal commentaries can be capitalized. odd.
The last online part of this version of redemption.
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