I am a 13-year-old girl. I've been writing fiction since I learned to read and write. Mostly, I base my stories off adventures I've had, or wish I've had. A lot of times, I even base characters in my stories off people I really know.
Please feel free to give me feedback on the bits of my stories I've put in here. I'm working to type up more of all 4, but usually I'm just writing more in my notebooks by hand. I want every criticism you have, especially about historical accuracy. Don't hold back if you want to be nice, because I don't care.
In my story, Anssuria , Sam is an eleven-year-old girl who gets sick and tired of her everyday life. Her heart yearns for more adventure, and her family's ranch doesn't offer nearly enough opportunities for her spirit to be fulfilled. When she decides that her only hope is to run away, she packs her bags and heads to the only place she'd ever known to be the right setting for her wild imagination. As soon as she gets there though, Sam runs into trouble, and wakes up to find herself in a strange place she doesn't recognize. Soon, Sam has met some strange characters, and is caught in the middle of what seems to be a war-in-the-making. Now maybe this pre-teen has found herself too much adventure! I'm about half-way finished with this story, but only have some of the first chapter typed up and entered here.
In The Shandery , my main character is Kristyn, a pre-teen girl with two younger siblings, one brother and one sister. For her, when one of her friends invites her and others to a cabin in the Rocky Mountains, an average day turns into a mystery involving possible treasure, and maybe more danger than she or her friends had bargained for! I've only just started this, but I'm working on typing up more of what I've already written.
The Valley Worker is the story I've been working on the longest. Anna is the main character, living with her mother and younger brother, Teddy. Her father and older sister, Clarissa, are missionaries in Mexico. One night, her mother tells Anna some horrible news concerning her father, and the girl's life starts falling apart. Everything I've written is typed up on here, but I'm still working on writing more of this story too.
In Candyland: The True Story, I've taken four average teens, and landed them in a world completely unlike their own. Could it be the long-lost Candyland of their childhood board games? You've got to read it and decide for yourself. I've also added teen romances to throw a twist into their friendships. I know how the story will end, but I'm still working on transferring it from paper to her. I should have it finished by the end of the summer.
I'm also going to add a short story I entered into a PBS contest this last year. I'll get it on here as soon as I can, so be looking for it!
Please feel free to give me feedback on the bits of my stories I've put in here. I'm working to type up more of all 4, but usually I'm just writing more in my notebooks by hand. I want every criticism you have, especially about historical accuracy. Don't hold back if you want to be nice, because I don't care.
In my story, Anssuria , Sam is an eleven-year-old girl who gets sick and tired of her everyday life. Her heart yearns for more adventure, and her family's ranch doesn't offer nearly enough opportunities for her spirit to be fulfilled. When she decides that her only hope is to run away, she packs her bags and heads to the only place she'd ever known to be the right setting for her wild imagination. As soon as she gets there though, Sam runs into trouble, and wakes up to find herself in a strange place she doesn't recognize. Soon, Sam has met some strange characters, and is caught in the middle of what seems to be a war-in-the-making. Now maybe this pre-teen has found herself too much adventure! I'm about half-way finished with this story, but only have some of the first chapter typed up and entered here.
In The Shandery , my main character is Kristyn, a pre-teen girl with two younger siblings, one brother and one sister. For her, when one of her friends invites her and others to a cabin in the Rocky Mountains, an average day turns into a mystery involving possible treasure, and maybe more danger than she or her friends had bargained for! I've only just started this, but I'm working on typing up more of what I've already written.
The Valley Worker is the story I've been working on the longest. Anna is the main character, living with her mother and younger brother, Teddy. Her father and older sister, Clarissa, are missionaries in Mexico. One night, her mother tells Anna some horrible news concerning her father, and the girl's life starts falling apart. Everything I've written is typed up on here, but I'm still working on writing more of this story too.
In Candyland: The True Story, I've taken four average teens, and landed them in a world completely unlike their own. Could it be the long-lost Candyland of their childhood board games? You've got to read it and decide for yourself. I've also added teen romances to throw a twist into their friendships. I know how the story will end, but I'm still working on transferring it from paper to her. I should have it finished by the end of the summer.
I'm also going to add a short story I entered into a PBS contest this last year. I'll get it on here as soon as I can, so be looking for it!
- Last seen on Jul 22 6:01 PM. Member since May 3.
- I am a 13 year old girl from Colorado (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm reading or hanging with my friends..
My Stories
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They jumped and stared at where Jackie’s seat had been just moments before. All they could see was a black hole.
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"Anna you are at an age where you should know what is happening. Your father has been...well, kidnapped.”1600 words, May 3. In Fantasy, Historical fiction
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“Liz’s grandparents invited us to come to their house in Colorado over break!” I said, all in one breath.
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blindmouse2 : hey on May 18I will have to read your stories as soon as i can.
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don't have the time recently, but you know how i am
I don't like to read it if it isn't finished so it may be a while.
You are doing great though, keep writing. -
CactusJack on May 3Hi Katie-bug,
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