Comment on a fellow poet's work

I too will not stop Poppet. It is such an uphill battle and my flesh fights against my spirit every inch of the way. I may not understand some things, and probably never will. Suffering is a hard pill to swallow for anyone. But in order to find peace to understand what peace truly means we must over come suffering to simply know the relief of peace when we reach it. Uncertainty is part of faith I believe. I actually have tested Papa. That is why I stand so tall now. Simply because I tested Him. Now tell me how amazing is it that God the person that made you and I would allow me to test Him and prove to me His worth so that I may trust Him. I used to see Papa as a man, there for He had to earn my trust. It's a complicated battle I fight with my mind, and it is constant, never ending. Nonetheless it is a battle I will win for I do not fight alone. It is easy to get lost and caught up in how you are SUPPOSED to be as a Christian or a Spiritual person, so much so that you forget who you are. Papa knows who we are and who we can be. Only he has the power in my life to determine the future. I can only be WHO I AM at this moment. So many of us look to the future of even moments from now that we forget each moment we are blessed enough to breathe in and out. I wake up each morning and thank Papa, because if not for the glory of how he made me, I could not be here to do what I love and help people I love the most along the way. It is a very very strong write that has brought out a lot in me Poppet, sorry for the ramble. Hope you do well in the contest Ti Amo!1


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http://allpoetry.com/poem/57950874

above is the link to the work that this comment was posted on. I was encouraged to post this apparently it influenced someone

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  • awannabepoet
    October 14
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    As so it should, excellent commentary prose you know. It has its own merrit as is.

    Thank you for sharing this for all to read.

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