Forever

For every day that passes.
One dies, one is born.
Reincarnation repeats.
Doomed are we forever to be here.

Listening to priests.
Singing to birds.
Breathing and dying together.
Being forced to repeat.

Death being faulty.
Sacrifice is unknown.
Caring is unheard of.
Dying as one, Living as none.

Memories are lost with time.
Time we live and die.
Where everyone we know is already there.
See. Feel. Touch. Care.

Abuse. Hitting. Slapping.
Kicking. Yelling. Interal harm.
Break. Scream. Shout. Hurt.
Breathe. Smell. Hear. Die.

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  • Chanel xxxx
    March 28
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    I didn't really like it because the last paragraph is weird how it's like one word, full stop, one work, full stop etc, like I know you were trying to give it an effect by doing that but it just didn't sound like a real poem and I didn't like it at all.


  • SAVAGEshark.
    February 7
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    Beutifull poem.


  • September Daydreams
    January 18
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    I really liked the dark feeling in it .Nice job

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