I like to think I am a well travelled and a worldly wise person. I have been to our garden gate and back; after all!
I again think I am an all round family man who is good at some thing and not so good at others.My wife my say different!
I have recently taken up writing as a pastime and an aid to stress relife, I have friends and family who have read some of my stuff and say that it needs to be out there not gathering dust in a drawer. Now I know they are just being nice to me.
So I would like you guys out there to give me brutal and honest feedback. If it sucks say so if it needs tweaking fine, lets not waste each others time.
I'm an easy going fellow and I don't mind the knock's look at the job I do!
So far the people I have had contact with on the site have been great.
Happy go lucky, that's me.Intrested in all sorts, Politics, Genderisim, nature, music, if it takes my fancy i'll have a go at it.
My main problem in writing is that I'm always mixing up my tense's and I always seem to get where/were mixed up. Look out for it and point it out. I shaln't be offended. I also have a tendency to write with my boxing gloves on and my eyes closed; so missing words plague me. I read my work through but still i miss them.(I've usualy had a glass or two of wine by then. That don't help matters!)
I guess I try to be a story teller but I do not manage no matter how much I try; to be a consumate story writer. I leave that to you guys out there. I am an also ran!
Some of you guys really should be published.
Oh and look out for the tongue in cheek humour I try to inject.
You just gotta have a laugh these day's.
Also I'm ever so nearly, lexdyslic!
For all those people who have bothered to come to this page, to find out more about who it is that writes all this trash. Then I say thank you for taking the time to read my work and if you have left a comment then even better.
It is nice to know somebody reads it, otherwise it would just lie in a drawer unread.
Thanks to you all be you writers or just readers, you make it worthwhile being here.
I again think I am an all round family man who is good at some thing and not so good at others.My wife my say different!
I have recently taken up writing as a pastime and an aid to stress relife, I have friends and family who have read some of my stuff and say that it needs to be out there not gathering dust in a drawer. Now I know they are just being nice to me.
So I would like you guys out there to give me brutal and honest feedback. If it sucks say so if it needs tweaking fine, lets not waste each others time.
I'm an easy going fellow and I don't mind the knock's look at the job I do!
So far the people I have had contact with on the site have been great.
Happy go lucky, that's me.Intrested in all sorts, Politics, Genderisim, nature, music, if it takes my fancy i'll have a go at it.
My main problem in writing is that I'm always mixing up my tense's and I always seem to get where/were mixed up. Look out for it and point it out. I shaln't be offended. I also have a tendency to write with my boxing gloves on and my eyes closed; so missing words plague me. I read my work through but still i miss them.(I've usualy had a glass or two of wine by then. That don't help matters!)
I guess I try to be a story teller but I do not manage no matter how much I try; to be a consumate story writer. I leave that to you guys out there. I am an also ran!
Some of you guys really should be published.
Oh and look out for the tongue in cheek humour I try to inject.
You just gotta have a laugh these day's.
Also I'm ever so nearly, lexdyslic!
For all those people who have bothered to come to this page, to find out more about who it is that writes all this trash. Then I say thank you for taking the time to read my work and if you have left a comment then even better.
It is nice to know somebody reads it, otherwise it would just lie in a drawer unread.
Thanks to you all be you writers or just readers, you make it worthwhile being here.
- Member since July 6, 2009.
- My mood is , and quote is "optimistic/bipolar".
- I am a 46 year old man (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Prison Officer.
- I support the site as a gold member
























- I have 177 comments, 5 contests, 47 poems, 70 stories
My Stories
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I was just finishing my cigarette in the kitchen and about to shuffle back into the front room to watch 'Deal or No Deal' which had become1000 words, 2 comments, January 24. In Crime, Fiction, Life, Sad, Short story, Starting idea, Tragedy
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Faintly, I heard your calling, it opened my eyes
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After last week and the corn field fire incident my brothers and me thought it best to keep a low profile for a while; seeing as anything t
My Poetry
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Rising from the verdant flora<100 words, 2 comments, January 24
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Aspasia77 : Happy Holidays! on December 28, 2009I hope you're enjoying the holiday season
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chrry-py on October 16, 2009Love the quote.
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Marta. on September 29, 2009HI. Nice page...I think I have read most of what you have written and like te way you write. Keep up the great work.

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Aiman Ahmad on September 14, 2009how are you uncle?

