It's a hard battle, for the ultimate Poet ~
Qualifiers: Aya Uchida, TheBaronVVV, Delfishie, KiNNky Angel, Black Dragon14, The Celtic Bard, elfflower1989
Eliminated: Celeste Stanford, Christine Daae, bowmore bill, litolhumster
Those moving on, a hearty congratulations to you. You guys are brilliant and deserve everything great!
Now, it is the time to move onwards, onto Round II.
Round II is a test of merging ideas. I am going to give you story of a person, and you must use that story and describe it through poetic form using creativity, originality, imagery and most of all -- metaphors.
Aya Uchida
A person is faced with two different challenges. He is a religious man, but immigrated to some place where his religion was trashed. He wants to fit in desperately with other people, but how will he do so. Will he put his trust in society? Or in faith?
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The Baron VVV
A prostitute reflects on how she was forced to use her diginity, and to sell her modesty in order to live. What does she think of the society, the men and the women all around and how is she going to spend her future?
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Delfishie
A student that wanted a to be doctor, but couldn't pass the medical examinations. Now she's forced to withdraw from her dreams and live her life as an ordinary teacher. But she's restless! What's going on in her mind? How is she to deal with stress, broken dreams and this uncaring world?
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The Celtic Bard
A general that faces two options: help wage a war on Iraq or resign with the label of traitor.
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Black Dragon14
The world through the eyes of small girl. Her father is a crook, her mother is a run-away slave and she is caught between this tug-of-war for life itself!
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KiNNky Angel
A baby sees the world for the first time. What does he think, what does he sense? Truth and love and honesty, or the faint trace of hatred, cold and snide people.
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elflower1989
A child dies - but does not know so. He is on earth as a ghost. He stays with his family, shaking their hands and clothes to get some attention, but to no avail. What does he think?
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Remember everyone -- metaphors and creativity.
Rules:
~ No erotic, adult or abuse cateogrized entries.
~ No more than 40 LINES.
~ No graphic violence & gore.
Co-judge:
Madame callthexylophone. (grrrrowl)
DEADLINE:
~ Sunday. 18th November. 2007
Please submit within the deadline guys. I am expecting all of you as serious poets that are nice, commited and friendly, so stick to that.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 22, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 100
- Final notes: Sorry ~ My deepest apologies for being so late. I had my sendup exmainations -- humbly grateful ~ Me
The race is still on, hope this long break hasn't dimished your appetite for creativity and competition ~
We have ONE winner ~
Negotiations
Congratulations Author, you are SAFE from eliminations ~
As for the rest ~
I am excited ~
WHO -- will leave ~
Let's find out ....
In the Elimination Column -- coming soon ~
Contest Winners
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So maybe not.1 / So maybe there’s not a tree in the way of my path / and whoever felled it hasn’t screwed up again. / So maybe the leaves are not cutting me down / like an ego a fa• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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A child doesn't know he's dead / So he wanders, round and round / Lost in a cloud of fog / of loneliness1 / His voice is empty, he speaks /• Commented on by judge.
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God delivered me. 1 / he must have had so much in mind for me2 / with eyes as wide as a blue slate moon, 3 / with lips so tickle-me-pin• Commented on by judge.
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by I Dare to Dream 100 words, 12 comments, on Nov 18 9:56 AM 2007. In , Dark, Depression, First person, Young adult• Commented on by judge.
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War and glory... / Rebel and shame... / Made powerful by the blood of my foes. / Cast down at my wish for peace.1 / The greed of this natioby saphFIRE13 100 words, 1 comment, on Nov 18 7:29 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Is it only because you lay on a cold floor1 / Fearing death but it's the one thing you adore2 / Totally invisible and blind to the nation3by Leech 200 words, 9 comments, on Dec 8 1:05 PM 2007. In Idk just read it lol• Viewed by judge.
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1 / Hello, how is your subconscious23 / Say Goodb• Viewed by judge.
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Damn. I was just about to enter mine now. Eh, I'll just link to it in the comments and you can reopen it if you choose:
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Whoa, it's been a while. Asfand, have you forgotten us? D:


