Like most women I love reading about beautiful and sweet first dates between a couple. I always long to be a part of it. I can imagine it well, hearing what they hear, seeing what they see, and so on and so forth.
Unfortunately I’ve never been taken on one of those dates and have missed it. So I want to know of your dream date. Where would you go? Who do you long to have with you? When would you go? What would you do? Why do you choose that as your dream date?
Its not hard but I do expect some great use of imagination here. There is no lack of money for the date but don't forget sometimes the simplist things make fo more meaning. Make me want to be the one on the date and if its true make me jealous of your luck.
Rules:
1. Write it in story form.
2. 250 words to 2500 words (a few more or a few less will be accepted, don’t go completely crazy or it will be DQed)
3. Check your spelling, grammar, and punctuation well.
4. It’s a first date lets keep it semi clean, I’m not a girl to put out on the first date.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 25
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thanks for all of the entries to my contest. The winners were stories that really touched me and made me want to be the girl in the date.
Gold - First Date
Silver - A Dream Day with Ms Alee
Bronze - Raining Kisses
There were so many great stories entered, it was hard to choose. Keep up the great writing.
Contest Winners
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I pick you up at ten in my Mustang convertable and drive out to the stable where I keep my horses. I get on a black Arabian and you are mouby scifibob 300 words, 1 comment, on Jun 24 11:01 PM. In Contest, First date, Romance
Silver trophy winner
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A first kiss in a storm. Please read and comment.by Rose Hathaway 300 words, 15 comments, on Jun 11 3:02 AM. In Flashfiction, Life, Love, Rain, Romance, Storm
Bronze trophy winner
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How tragic is a twenty-four year old watching West Side Story on a Saturday night, eating Pop-Tarts dipped in Tapioca? And yes, they are ta• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I felt nervous.
by CallMeWhenUrRich 2300 words, 36 comments, on Jun 22 7:58 AM. In Life, Romance, Unrevised
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I hadn't really expected her to show up. The long conversations on the phone, the texts, the emails; somehow she was someone at a couple o• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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/ / "Are you going to the concert," asked Becca in a whisper with barely restrained excitement. She was a tall brunette sophomore and aby Andy Stephenson 1200 words, 42 comments, on May 24 7:34 AM 2007. In Fan fiction, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Humor, Inspirational, Romance Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
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For the fist date you should go to a romantic dinner at a great resturaunt. Then drive to a dance club. Nothing too big. Then you could go take a quick walk in the park. And as he drops you off he gives you a kiss on the chee• Commented on by judge.
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Awesome! I have been waiting to enter something like this! *jumps up and down with excitement* I stand with you for not having pre-writes. Good choice.
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Thanks, I was unsure how this would be accepted yet can't wait to read the entries.
Most of the time I'm ok with prewrites (unless they are ones i've read before) but think with this it will be better with fresh ideas.
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I'll start writing something tonight and hopefully will be able to hand an entrie by tomorrow. P.S What kind of date/guys do you have a soft spot for?
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hahaha, not telling. You'll just have to look through my stuff and my friends to find out what and who i like.
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I do like a challenge.
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You and TNTrouble eh? Grrrrr, that was the only thing I could dig up that might be useful to me.
I'll just have to craft an entrie based on my fantasies.
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LOL! Aye tis TNTrouble and i together, but you didn't think i would make it easy on you did you. Come on get that imagination going.
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No, but I think my fantasys might be enough to pull a good entrie together.
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Yes!
I've been wanting to write about something like this for a while and it sounds absolutely fun!
Bookmarked.
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intresting contest
! Good luck sweetheart.
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Thanks thought it would be interesting to see what others think of as a dream date.
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Hmm?
I've had five women throw(give) themselves at(to) me on the first date. I rather liked it, but they dumped me later
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Two questions: Does it have to be a first date? Would you let me know if you open to prewrites? I've got a story about a special date, but the couple had been seeing each other.
Andy
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I would love it to be a first date but if I don't have many replies within the next week I'll see about opening it to pre-written entries.
I'm not one of those girls that will throw myself at the fella on first date but glad you liked those that did, sorry they dumped you later. -
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Yeah!
I've never had a very long term relationship. I'm loyal, honest, and I guess unloveable
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Andy
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Awwww, I bet you're lovable. You just have to find the right girl/guy.
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Possibly.
I think a lot of the problem is that I don't look. I'm attracted to younger women, I don't have a car, but I do own a house. I spend most of my time at the computer. I have my cats and I hate rejection. I haven't been on a date since 2000.
If I should start selling my songs or my writing, who knows? Maybe I'll be able to afford a car again and have more occasion to get out.
Andy
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I've always heard its when your not even looking that love find you and can attest to that. I NEVER would have thought I would find love online and was just goofin off with a real life friend when i found a great group and started talking to them. Within that group i started getting to know a few and some how some way got closer and closer to one and then my heart was stolen by the man who is mine now. I never looked for T but am thanking God each and everyday that we found each other.
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Well,
as it stands, online is about the only way I'm likely to run into anyone.
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Online tis just as good as any. Tis where I met T and where we have to live our relationship until we are able to be together in the years to come.
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you sound like my ex-boyfriend lol
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How do i sound like your ex-boyrfriend?
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eh, you just do. It's ok, he's a cool guy.
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I'm just wondering how i sound like a guy really?
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lol it's hard to explaine. He was kind of a girly guy by the way, so it isn't saying mych as far as sounding like a guy goes
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Hey Andy,
I went ahead and opened it to prewrites. Go ahead and enter yours if you want. -
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I've only got one happy first date story,
but I've got one that's more of a perfect date kind, 'The Concert'. I'm entering it. Hope you don't mind
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Andy
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Don't mind one bit.
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I like the sound of this. I haven't ever been on a date, but a girl can dream can't she I'm gonna bookmark this.
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Anyone can dream of the perfect date, i know i do constantly.
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I had the weirdest, random dream and it kind of inspired me to write for this contest. So keep your eyes open for an entrie later on today!
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Sounds great! Can't wait to read it.
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I'm sorry I couldn'y get my entrie in today because I had to go birthday present shopping and that ate a massive chunk out of my afternoon. Tomorrow I have to go Grocery shopping as well so I will do my best to get it in ASAP.
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Thats fine you have plenty of time to write it.
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Wow, are you always online?
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feels like it sometimes, but nope you just seem to catch me when i am.
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Hmmm no fair ... you already know what Mine would involve. But I look forward to reading what the others come up with for this.
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Awwwwww, Come on Love not even gonna try to design a date for me. *pouts* And here i thought You would take me on a long ride on the back of Your motorcycle to surprise me with a few other things.
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Does it have to me with someone I am with already.
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Can be with someone you are already with or anyone you have ever fantasized about dating. You know its a great chance to plan that special date with that hottie in the movies (whichever you want) or even a character from a book. I could easily see MANY MANY young girls and guys writing about dating Edward Cullen or Jacob Black.
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Can I enter a flas-fiction, like the dream part of the dream date?
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Sure can, enter pretty much anything dealing with a dream date.
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I have officially satrted writing my entrie. I have to do homework now though *groans* I will work more on it later.
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I'll have to try and enter this later before it closes.... Great idea!
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Can't wait to see your entry, i did extend the time to get some more entries.
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Aw man! I originally wrote Skating On Ice for this contest specifically (it was a new story but I saved it as a draft) before my computer totally blacked out before I could put it in...
Now it's over...Damn. Honestly, I feel like banging my head on the table repeatedly coz I worked it till midnight just so it would be in time for the contest.
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Give it a try now, I have given two more days after that I have to close it down and judge.
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Yes!!!
Thanks a mil'!
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Hi Ms. Alee!
Thanks for the honorable mention and points. I appreciate them. I'm pleased you like my story.
Thanks for hosting.
Andy
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It was a great story. Sounds like something i would do, i love to be a kidder when it comes to giving someone what they want.
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It was a great story. Sounds like something i would do, i love to be a kidder when it comes to giving someone what they want.
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