Heartbreak

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 28
• Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 45, Bronze: 20
• Final notes:
  You were all amazing, and I know everybody says that, but I had some great stories and heartbreaks here. i wish i could give all of you some prize, but i can't, so congrats to the winners and for the others, maybe next time. thank you all for entering.

Contest Winners

1. There Is A Paper Airplane Race, In The Eye Of A Hurricane

   by SmileFromGlasgow 3100 words, 16 comments, on Jan 23 10:16 PM 2007
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Betty Jane

   by Cupcake14 1300 words, 7 comments, on May 13 1:31 AM. In Dark, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Weird, Young adult
   Silver trophy winner

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3. I Didn't Mean To

   I had taken such careful steps in getting Jamison to fall in love with me- or, at least, go on a date with me- that I was so sure there would be no error. And I was so joyful. So pleased with myself. So devoted. Finally, my b

   by ashandtears 1200 words, 4 comments, on May 13 10:32 PM
   Bronze trophy winner

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4. Like Mud and Water

   The twisted love story of a besottled rose bud and an arrogant Ulysses.

   by Violette 900 words, 23 comments, on Apr 6 11:22 PM. In Butterfly, Death, Depression, Drama, Irony , Life, Love, Rose, Tragedy

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5. His Destiny

   Kathy was walking down the road when her tear suddenly fell from her eyes. She touched her tears and looked behind her and remembering the

   by Satan-chan 800 words, 7 comments, on Mar 3 9:06 PM

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6. The Music Man and his Inspiration

   My beautiful nerd, his academic flirt. We are and always will be, just as we had and always have been...
   
   

   by IceIceBaby 1300 words, 16 comments, on Mar 16 9:57 PM

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8. Fighting and Crashing (Part One)

   I ran as fast as I could, trying to escape the yelling, trying to avoid the worst that had yet to come. I knew I should never have taken

   by Shadow-Kissed 1500 words, 4 comments, on May 5 1:27 PM 2008. In Death, Depression

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9. Unreachable

   His heart stolen and locked away, and I'll never know the combination.

   by Robin Omallia 700 words, 7 comments, on Nov 17 10:21 AM 2008. In First person, Love, Pain, Romance, Sad

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10. Bear With Me.

    by BeckyVilRoolZeVorld 500 words, 9 comments, on May 23 9:00 AM

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11. Unexpected Heartbreak

    A cold chill rolls down my spine while I wait for the school bus to come every morning. I know it's kinda dumb to be afraid to come to school and being so far from home, but for my school and my life, it's understandable. I'm

    by fairy lily 400 words, 1 comment, on May 15 8:43 PM. In Depression, First person, Heartbreak, Life, Love, Romance

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Entries [30]

• in the mist of sparkles

  "And it feels... And it feels... Like Heaven's so far away." 11
  

  by plurangel 1500 words, 7 comments, on Apr 23 1:31 AM. In Inspirational, Life, Love

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• A Boy And A Girl

  Lets tell a story. Once upon a time...1
  

  by Boondock Saint 300 words, 1 comment, on May 12 12:38 AM

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• Broken

  XD i don't know what i was thinking while i wrote this...

  by Rockerboy 800 words, 3 comments, on May 13 4:34 PM

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• Walking away

  by rinzu 1300 words, 4 comments, on Mar 14 8:05 AM. In Contest

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• Puppy Love

  by neutraltint 800 words, 4 comments, on May 13 9:05 PM. In Dark, Depression, Dog, Life, Sad, Story

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• Death of a king (Mario Suicide Fanfic)

  What happens when bowser's heart breaks? let's find out!

  by Winterchill 6000 words, 4 comments, on May 10 4:38 PM. In Dark, Death, Depression, Fiction, Mario, Pain, Sad, Tragedy

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• Sadness.

  We sit there, in the second row in the van, you there next to me.

  by ThereIsHope 400 words, 3 comments, on Apr 30 6:20 PM. In Depression, First person, Life

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• Dear Jon,

  by Murphable 100 words, 2 comments, on Mar 15 12:15 AM. In Contest, Letter, Love

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• "Goodbye"

  When I was young , just a little boy
  

  by whoudini 300 words, 63 comments, on May 15 5:42 AM. In Life and inspirational

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• Living Death (Extension)

  Living Death
  It is a cold, autumn day.  I stand there as I have every day since…since then.  No words break the silence.  The brisk wind wafts my curly blond

  by kidchameleon 1600 words, 28 comments, on Feb 16 5:40 PM 2006. In <200 lines, Depression, Fantasy, Romance

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• Who are you to call it love?

  You lie on me. Eyes to eyes to eyes, yours and mine. Yours are grey, one eyebrow raised, smiling into my lips even though I know you’re wishing I was someone else. Does that mean that I can wish you were someone else too? But

  by Donkey 700 words, 6 comments, on Apr 9 5:00 PM

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• the Last Phone Call

  Seventeen-year-old Peter Daniels woke up with a terrible start. He was dreaming about her again. He was dreaming that she was walking acros

  by Shadow06 1100 words, 2 comments, on Apr 29 2:12 PM. In Death, Grief, Hope, Inspirational, Love, Sad, Spiritual, Teen

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• The Traiter

  "please just go let me mourn Rose in peace!"J snapped."yes your majesty" The servant left the throne room. The crown prince looked off into space s the memory of that day slipped into his mind.
  "J wait up"Rose called running

  by Sakura-Fang 300 words, 1 comment, on May 18 2:42 PM

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• Josh

  Isn't it amazing how fast to lovers can fall for eachother. It's also amazing how fast it fades, but true love never fades.Oh, how do I know?1
  

  by yodog784 500 words, 5 comments, on Apr 3 4:17 PM

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• Slow Dance

  Slapping on the ground?
  Ever followed a
  butterfly's erratic flight?

  by Clary--Selene--Tayy 200 words, 20 comments, on May 17 1:30 AM

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• Shhhh, it happens

  James, my brother, lay still in the coffin impersonating a crib beside me. Motionless and emotionless. Eyes shut to the world. White robes

  by philroche1 900 words, on May 21 4:17 AM

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• Jane doe

  I'm not impressed by much, well nothing to be honest, So i ask you believe me when i tell you that her beauty was the most destructive i have ever seen. She walked with the shy stroll of a nun, but she had the striking beauty

  by Krick 100 words, 1 comment, on May 21 2:30 AM

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• Music Makers

  by shadowchild25 1900 words, 1 comment, on May 21 8:10 PM. In Crime, Love, Young adult

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• Photographs

  A picture lasts forever, but the people inside them never do.

  by Sa m m a HOOD 800 words, 2 comments, on May 22 1:13 AM. In Love, Romance, Tragedy

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• ll The Thing That Hurts The Most ll I'll Always Be There ll Psh... Whatever!

  Entry for LuvIsStrongers heartbreak contest

  by XXLiveLaughJonasXx 300 words, 2 comments, on May 23 12:03 AM. In Romance

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  whoudini
  May 19
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  interesting contest

  good subject too