a bit of the old ultra violence

My last contest didn't do to well so I'm giving the contest thing a second try. This time around it's something very different.
What I want from you, my lovelies, is a story with a bit of the old ultra violence. Something along the lines of A Clockwork Orange. I don't just want buckets of gore, no I want good writing. It's not enough to simply try to gross out your friend and humble contest judge. I want there to be a point and plot to the story. I don't want shock value simply for the sake of shock value. If you would like to have erotica in your story then by all means, do include a bit of the old in and out. However, I'm not looking for strictly erotica. As the title says, I want violence.
It can be about a vampire, serial killer, violent teenager or any group of the above. It can be about a regular joe who snaps and releases his pent up rage in the form of ultra violence. Whatever suits your fancy. Now for the rules.
1. Decent spelling and grammar are a must. I won't be a Nazi about it, but it has to be decent.
2.Good description is a must. Make me feel as though I am there.
3. No chat speak or sticky caps for they drive your friend and humble contest judge insane.
4. I will comment on all entries.
5.Poetry is aloud as long as it contains a bit of the old ultra violence.
6. If you have any questions send me a message.
That's all my lovelies. Good luck.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 8
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    I have finally decided who's winning what. It was not easy my brothers. I thank you all for your great entries and I'd also like to thank Norea for her help in judging. I only wish I could give out more trophies.

Contest Winners

  1. The street is hard. The street is tough. If you make one wrong move your cheek gets to kiss the spit of the pavement.
    by the back row 500 words, 12 comments, on Apr 18 2:46 PM. In Action, Dark, Death, Drama, Pain, Society
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. For one death is the end, for another, it is a means of profit.
    by DoozerDan 3400 words, 92 comments, on Dec 29 8:31 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Fiction, Horror
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Anisha strives for the perfect life and the perfect partner. Take a ride through her fractured reality to learn the harrowing truth.
    by tallblondie 4200 words, 59 comments, on Feb 8 1:55 AM. In Dark, Horror, Mystery, Psychological
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Call Recieved: 3:46 AM 1
    by iliad 1800 words, 18 comments, on Aug 1 6:05 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Rope tenderly outlined the shape of her jaw
    Jilted lover’s laughing leer the last of light she saw
    by shadowchild25 1900 words, 1 comment, on May 5 6:40 PM. In Crime, Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. "Thanks again for coming out all the way from london to help out with our expidition", Cheerfully said Richard, the plant and insect expert
    by Fibe Kill-DFW Punk- 3700 words, 11 comments, on Feb 26 9:05 PM. In Horror, Not for squeemish readers, Zombie
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Freedom is a luxury that will soon be taken from me. Good. I don’t need it. I will be taken into custody and caged like the animal they thi
    by Boondock Saint 700 words, 4 comments, on Apr 15 11:48 PM. In Adventure, Crime
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by Andy Stephenson 2000 words, 66 comments, on Aug 9 7:51 AM 2008. In Adult, Cannibalism, Crime, Dark, Erotica, Explicit, Fiction, Horror, Serial killer
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Their faces were no longer the faces of beautiful statues. They had changed. They were the faces of demons, the faces of hell...the faces o
    by Ghost of a Siren 3800 words, 58 comments, on Oct 29 3:40 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. “There's no time, Gretta, we have to leave at once.”

    The tone in his voice was so overpowering that I couldn't object. I trusted him.
    by Ghost of a Siren 5800 words, 19 comments, on Apr 8 5:39 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, First person, Horrorish, Humor, Vampire
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Error: Unable to find finalist item 144822, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  12. by Ghost of Numf-El 4500 words, 15 comments, on Nov 20 7:16 AM 2006. In Adult, Dark, Death, Horror, Torture
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Silence. Drake stared restlessly up at the white washed ceiling and sighed.
    by BlackRoseFalling 600 words, 16 comments, on Apr 10 1:36 PM. In Axe, Blood, Crime, Death, Gore, Hmm, Horror, Insanity, Murder
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • is there a word limit?

  • my stories have plot and points, but they arent always directly shown to the reader. I leave it up to them to determine on their own


  • Rune Morose
    April 22
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    Ah, a right horrorshow tolchok on the gulliver. Brings out the red red kroovy.

  • TheRedPen
    April 23
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    hehe i just got a lightbulb when i read the first line.


  • Lady Patricia
    April 29
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    I dont tend to join contests with prewrites allowed. But I cannot wait to see its finalists. LOL. please send me word when it is over.

    Gracias.
    Lady Patricia

  • IM Speak

    My story starts out using IM text because the conversation between the two characters takes place over IM, but the entire story is not like that. I hope that that is acceptable.

  • Hi!

    Thanks to both of you for the honorable mention and points. I appreciate them. I'm glad you like my story.

    I'm also pleased that you enjoyed your contest.

    Thanks for hosting.

    Andy

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