Let's see who can do this right!!

Ok, first, before rules or prompts or anything!! You'll see every one of my points went into this contest and its not much....DONATIONS ARE SMILED UPON!!!

And you'd get brownie points!

Now, what I want...I've been reading vampire stories as I usually do and so many people make a huge cliche of the turning scene. And, as everyone knows, that's the best scene in a vampire story!!! So that's what I want. I don't care if its a prewrite or not, not extra points or frowns if it is. Write your best, that's all I ask. It can have sex, I don't care. I don't care if it's gay, straight, or whatever. I don't care if your characters are green alien vampires from Neptune (ok, I might give bonus points if you can pull this off, lol). The only require ment is there has to be a vampire and a creature that is not a vampire that gets turned into a vampire. The rest is up to you...USE YOUR IMAGINATIONS PEOPLE!!!!!

Rules

1. I already told you what it has to be about...I will delete you if it is off topic
2. Make it interesting, I've got a thing with stories, either they send me into fangirl mode cause they are really good or I just can't read them cause they're boring....if I don't finish your story cause it was boring then I won't comment on it. Take the hint. Make it interesting.
3. nO mOlEsTiNg YoUr ShIfT KeY....trust me, it doesn't like it either
4. Another thing I must request about the topic. No fanfiction. If you do fanfiction and its about a book I havent read and I don't realize it, then congrats, you got away with it. But if I catch you I delete you...and I HAVE read Twilight (team Jasper)
5. If you want me to give you a prompt, which I don't mind as I have plenty of stires in my head that I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see written, then message me and I'll give you one of them. No, I won't think badly of you nor will this help you in the contest.


DONATING POINTS WILL RESULT IN BROWNIE POINTS!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 4
  • Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 154, Bronze: 102
  • Final notes:
    Yeesh, to the finalists...this is one of the hardest ones I've ever had to judge. But I'm happy with the order I chose. To those who won, I'll probably be coming to find more of your work since I enjoyed what I saw.

    -Andi

Contest Winners

  1. Tonight is not your night
    I launched myself from the ground and everything was in red, even the shadows themselves.
    by DarkOneShadow 1100 words, 6 comments, on Apr 11 8:34 PM. In Crime, Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, Vampire
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Beautiful love
    by lavanya 1700 words, 16 comments, on Mar 10 10:26 PM. In Dark, Fantasy, For contest, Love, Vampire
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. The Drifter Prologue:
    Prologue to my story im writing.
    by Man With No Name 700 words, 2 comments, on Apr 10 2:02 PM. In Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Novel, Vampires
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 260812, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 275160, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • His.Golden.Eyes
    April 9
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    Perfect! I just wrote a story about this a few days ago!
    Oh, and I like Jasper, too(Well, he's not my team, but favorite Cullen/hale!).


  • Tiger-Lily
    April 9
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    Does teh human HAVE to turn all fanged and stuff in teh scene or do you just want the biting scene adn circumstances, like the human getting caught by the vamp? Cause often the changes take a while.


    • Andiness
      April 10
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      Ahh, I'd prefer turning, but you don't have to write out the whole thing since your right and it can take awhile. Like it can just get started, you know?

      But if you can write a really good biting scene then go for it!!


  • tonialoise
    April 9
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    Mine say's it's chapter one, but it starts right in the middle of her being turned, the part where he drains her is in the previous book, so I hope this is the part you want. I also hope you don't mind chapters. There's some stuff you might not understand but I think it stands alone pretty well.

    It's a bit long but it also includes her first feeding so you don't really have to read the whole thing if it doesn't hook you.


  • Rose Hathaway
    April 10
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    I have a story where a vampire male kills his human love. There is no name referance to Twilight and can or can't be associated with Twilight depending on the readers perception of the story. Would you accept this? You can DQ it if you don't like it.

  • V l
    April 10
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    I have a series were a rapest/seril killer gets trun into a vampire. he still dose his thing but is a vampire is that ok? it's call Blood Lust.


  • TyShade
    April 10
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    Can the person/vampire die right after? Or is that like bad?


  • DarkOneShadow
    April 10
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    Interesting

    You should see something from me soon. Good luck on the judging.

    DarkOneShadow


    • Andiness
      April 10
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      *tries and fails to hide the highly eager expression*


  • VioletConcept
    April 10
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    Yay... Go Team Jasper! Great contest...

    -Vio


  • chikarita2
    April 10
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    Ohhhh I need to enter!
    It has MOST of the requirements, but the one that is a little different is the turning point. Its the one about turning into a vampire. Tee hee~ Have fun reading my vamp story XD


  • poetry is soul
    May 2
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    i don't really wanna enter, but i have 400 points, so i am willing to donate 100

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