Creature Comfort

We all know a lot of people have a love hate relationship with Vampires. However, I want to know which dark creature you love the most. Do you like the cunning of the Devil, the dark and mysterious Grim Reaper, a Greek mythological beast, or something you completely made up? Sometimes they are scary, but often they are misunderstood. Some even have a soft side.

The one in the frame; the M113 Creature from the "Star Trek" episode "The Man Trap" is mine. She is a creature that can take any shape, but usually that of a woman the men have loved in the past so she can get close to her victim and suck all the salt out of their bodies with her suction cup fingertips. I really felt a lot of sympathy for her, yet was scared of her at the same time. That's what I'd like to see here; your emotions over the creature.

So here's what I want you to do. Amazingly I don't want a full story. I just want your description and why you love that specific monster. I don't want a simple "I love vampires because they're cool." I want you to describe the creature in detail and why you love each of their attributes in detail! Don't give me some dry explanations, be creative with it.

I like learning about new creatures so keep that in mind. I'd really like to see no two of the same creatures in this contest if possible.

New writes only because, really, do people have something exactly like this laying around ready to be posted?
Between 200-1000 words. If it is under, it better be good, if it is over it better be worth it.
I typically abhor bad grammar in stories but in pieces like this I will let some of it slide. Try to at least write like a human.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 8
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    This was fun. While I didn't get as many creatures as I was hoping for you each gave me interesting ones to think about. Thank you all for entering. See you next time.

Contest Winners

  1. by lavanya 1800 words, 15 comments, on Mar 29 10:04 PM. In Adult, Dark, Fantasy, First person, For contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by senorchubbles 500 words, 17 comments, on Mar 25 7:19 PM. In Horror, Inspirational, Life
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The underwater wrath ofthe Krakan... in my own words ^^
    by Colourful 300 words, 4 comments, on Mar 25 3:51 PM. In Fantasy, Fiction, Mystery
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Some say that they are lost souls. Others plainly state that they are minions of the devil himself...1
    by Ghost of a Siren 200 words, 3 comments, on Mar 25 7:02 PM. In Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 269770, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. I absolutely adore Hades in Greek Mythology. I suppose he's more of a god than a "creature" but his overall appearance and personality is dark and I absolutely love that. Many people think that Hades, within Greek Mythology,
    by Hellcat Metal 400 words, 4 comments, on Mar 25 3:31 PM. In Mythical creatures hades greek
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  • CactusJack silver member
    March 25
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    Great contest idea. If I ever get ten seconds of peace I'll try to scribble something down resembling human writing.


    • tonialoise
      March 25
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      What? Jack write like a human? No, I'll let you write like the alien you are, just this once.

      • CactusJack silver member
        March 26
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        Where the heck did all these entries come from? Damn I better get my ass in gear if I want to enter this thing!
        I can't make up my mind. I've narrowed it down to Paris Hilton or Amy Winehouse, both terrifying in their own right. I hope nobody's used either one yet. Decisions, decisions...


        • tonialoise
          March 26
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          Hmmm... I don't know much about Amy Winehouse but if she's as scary as Paris that'd be great.


  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    March 25
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    I like this contest idea. Anyone who knows me will say my favorite creature is the vampire... but, I will not use that for this contest (I have a feeling it'll be used a lot anyway) I want to give my opinion on another 'creature' that fascinates me if that's okay

    • tonialoise
      March 25
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      hehe... yeah I think it's a lot of people's favorite and that's why I was trying to hint away from it and get other creatures.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    March 25
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    wow, that picture is about creepy!

  • Hey, I think I saw this Star Trek! I've only seen a few, when I was little, and this is one that I remember distinctly. It scared the bijeebiez out of me! (I honestly don't know why, though... ) Anyway, on a relevant subject, I will try to enter this contest, probably write something about the Grim Reaper. No promises, though...I have a lot of stuff going right now

    • tonialoise
      March 25
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      hehe, yeah she's probably scarier than the one that scared me as a kid (the horta, a blob of silicon that can burn through rocks, or humans)

      Anyway, looking forward to it.


  • lavanya
    March 26
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    wait for me ....i'll be there in a few....days


  • Colourful
    March 26
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    God, compared to all the rest, my Krakan seems pretty crap xD

    Love the contest idea, though ^^


    • tonialoise
      March 26
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      Don't put yourself down. I haven't read it yet, but you never know.


  • Bethany
    March 30
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    Wow, talk about bad timing, I just posted a story about 2 minutes ago about witches, just because i was bored
    stupid timing...

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