The Tragic Hero(Prewrites Allowed)

I don't want your typical hot, loving and courageous hero ala Harry Potter or something.

I want a hero who is not a villian, but has certain villainous characteristics or other negative qualities.

For example in the Bengali tragedy 'Devdas'. You do feel quite sorry for Dev, but there's no disputing-he was a great coward and an even greater alcoholic.

Another example is in the tragic movie Baazigarr, where despite being a genuinely loving and caring person, the lead character murders his nemesis' daughter even though she had no hand in what her father did to his family. He even fools her sister, though he falls for her later.

Rules

1:I will be lenient with grammar but strict with spelling
2: PlEaSE no TyPiNG like THiS. No chat speak either.
3*: Realistic Characters
4:The character must be a male, and fit my description of a tragic hero. The latter quality is left to my own judgement however.
5:Brownie points for adding a psychological angle. Major brownie points for making it as gut wrenching as possible without using too much gore or violence.
6:I can handle anything, but no Adult labels please. Be as subtle as possible.


Thank you!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 2
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Hello everyone! I loved your stories! Unfortunately, the ultra-strict side of me could choose only two stories

    The Lemurian Hourglass-For being so surreal .I love such stories

    He Walked a Fine Line-For the psychological angle.

    Thank you for entering!

Contest Winners

  1. by Rune Morose 5000 words, 16 comments, on Mar 18 6:51 AM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, Other, Sad, Spiritual, Strange, War, Weird
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 193834, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • SilentMoonDance
    February 16
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    Hey...

    I've entered a story, I hope it meets your rules and standards.(:


  • SaintJimmy
    February 16
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    Matt's Sacrifice

    Hey, I hope I didn't miss any errors. I'm not that good about looking for errors on a computer screen and my printer was out of oh-so-expensive ink so...
    And a little side note by the way, I read the description of this contest and thought "Hancock" . I haven't heard of either of the examples but Hancock is what came to mind for me just fyi.

    • Cupcake14
      February 17
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      You can proofread your stories using Microsoft Word. But it's so freaking annoying when your spelling is different from the american ones.
      I haven't seen Hancock, so no comments.


    • Cupcake14
      February 22
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      Can you please remove Matt's Sacrifice? It's Adult, so I can't read it. Sorry.
      Thank you for entering anyways


  • Peachy
    February 17
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    Do you mean like 'Dexter'? I'd say he's got some very strong villainous characteristics.
    I'll see what I can come up with; sounds like a challenge! *rubs hands together eagerly*


  • Rune Morose
    March 2
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    Wow! Thank you so much for the trophy, the points...and for enjoying my story, of course!

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