I don't care what your specialty is. Type it and put it in. You write and I'll read. I warn you right now. I will comment on every story. But I am a bit of a twisted critic. I sort of make those I critic want to prove me wrong and work harder. This isn't discrimination against anything.
I will read anything that is Fantasy, Sci Fi, Erotica, Lesbian, gay, Adult, Young adult, horror, poems, anything goes. Put in your feelings and don't enter for the points although I'm giving away points to the winner.
Enter for feedback. Enter for fun. Enter for yourself. And I know it's corny - but enter at your own risk. I don't want to hear it if I say something about your story that upsets you.
I will read anything that is Fantasy, Sci Fi, Erotica, Lesbian, gay, Adult, Young adult, horror, poems, anything goes. Put in your feelings and don't enter for the points although I'm giving away points to the winner.
Enter for feedback. Enter for fun. Enter for yourself. And I know it's corny - but enter at your own risk. I don't want to hear it if I say something about your story that upsets you.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 21
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 5, Bronze: 5
- Final notes: Thanks to all who entered...unfortunately my search for the best writer is just beginning. None of the writers who entered were good enough to make my standards. But every single one was very good and a potential of a great classic master.
Contest Winners
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“What are you doing?” she asks her voice wary, cautious and really frightened. 1• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by shadowgriffen 900 words, 6 comments, on Feb 8 2:40 PM. In Dark, Depression, Life, Love, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Jesus starts noticing that the people in his life around him mysteriously start dying. Jesus must hurry to find the answer to this phenomenby diablo13440 3400 words, 4 comments, on Jan 29 6:40 PM. In Fiction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Entries [53]
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by Eddie 4000 words, 80 comments, on Sep 14 11:24 AM 2008. In Fiction, First person, Love, Nuke, Romance, Tisaumi, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by tonialoise 3000 words, 58 comments, on Jun 4 12:50 AM 2008. In Adult, Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Love, Romance, Vampire• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Each step she took on the sand brought her closer to her fate. She stood stationary for a moment as the waves licked her toes. The white dr• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"I wish I could say I'll ever forgive you but I won't. I wish I could say that one day my heart will put itself back together- and the shreby Writing0Freedom 800 words, 21 comments, on Jan 27 6:31 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by VampireFriends 800 words, 22 comments, on Dec 23 6:48 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Fanfiction, Fiction, First person young adult, Gay• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Never again1 / Never again will we be broken / Our voices silenced by the pain / Never again our cries unspoken / Our tears washed away byby Writing0Freedom 6100 words, 20 comments, on Jul 20 2:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An evil woman can take control of anyone's mind using just one word.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by gypsywitch0187 800 words, 5 comments, on Feb 4 11:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was a warm, sunny afternoon but her body was cold. Her mind was frozen, she couldn't think. She collapsed against a tree trunk because s• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Simple, really. Logical. And certainly better than any explanation I can come up with.
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In the midst of a thousand street turns and a million different faces, there lies a green paradise. Once through these gates, the city of L• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by magicmonster00M 600 words, 3 comments, on May 17 8:47 PM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, First person, Horror, Humor, Other, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by magicmonster00M 1000 words, 10 comments, on May 17 7:24 PM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, Other, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A deep and thoughtful; description of one late summer's love
by Rose Hathaway 400 words, 53 comments, on Dec 29 2:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
One adventure in the 1st Rancel War. My first story. A Prologue to A Call to Armsby Lithron 3200 words, 15 comments, on Dec 1 12:37 AM 2008. In Action, Fiction, Science fiction, Short story, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Chapter One: “Sometimes goodbye is a second chance”1by alphamedic2006 2500 words, 7 comments, on Feb 8 12:21 PM. In Fiction, First person, Tactical action• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was a sunny day. Relentless rays shone down unhindered by office or apartment buildings, and that was because there were none.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Outside, birds chirp frivolously as the sun rises and falls, reminding me that the world can go on without her, that the world won’t stop s• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Melophobia: Fear, or hatred, of music. Symptoms include breathlessness; inability to think or speak clearly; becoming mad or losing controlby VampireFriends 1900 words, 8 comments, on Feb 5 4:30 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He was almost eighteen. In about another year or two he would be. He was tall, lanky and pale. The type of pale that happens after centurie• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He was born hearing the birds play in the morning sun. Born hearing his mother's voice sing him to sleep, the sound of his own cries at nig• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She opened her eyes-1
by Razy 700 words, 7 comments, on Jan 28 6:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sky was as blue as an amethyst dawn that never ends. I walked among the softly waving field of flowers that gave the feeling each small petal wanted to touch the blue haze for itself. There was a large gathering of people• Commented on by judge.
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None of them would understand her. None of them could understand her. She hid herself among all these people so well, that even she startedby angellove 3200 words, 65 comments, on Jan 28 3:40 PM 2007. In Aids, Fantasy, Noguest, Novel, Romance, Science fiction, Supernatural• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Stephen Crozier is on his way from work and a mysterious man walks out onto the road causing him to crash his car. When he wakes up in the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A story of a young man facing racism and violence in the late sixties in America.Warning-Contains graphic and hate filled languageby urbanronin88 2300 words, 10 comments, on Nov 5 12:34 AM 2008. In Contest, Drama, First person, Other, Short story, Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Come kids, it's time for church.1
by My Antonia 200 words, 8 comments, on Nov 6 10:58 AM 2008. In Church, Contest, Faking life, Family, Family that sucks, Life, Personal, Poetry, Teen• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alirah gazed at the crevasse forming within the folds of the fabric-- the fabrics of the universe. She clutched a hand to her stomach as heby amanda vampiress 3500 words, 52 comments, on Jan 6 10:14 PM. In Fantasy, Horror, Paranormal, Romance, Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by annemarie 1100 words, 15 comments, on Jan 16 4:25 PM. In Angst, Fiction, Humor, Life, Romance, Starting idea, Teen, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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As I walked in my Father’s garden, that always has been and ever shall be, I could not help but look in awe at the riotous growth and neverby graybeard 900 words, 2 comments, on Feb 17 2:18 PM• Commented on by judge.
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by August Rein 800 words, 5 comments, on Feb 20 5:19 AM. In Contest, First person, Humor, Life, Love, Teen, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My life is full of problems but not my own. I start my story with an unhappy beginning.It might seem wrong to start off with the problem buby supergirl2797 500 words, on Feb 19 7:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It's raining today, again. It's already been three days. Not that I have a problem with rain but I'm tired of things falling from the sky.by Sith Lord Alvarez 2000 words, 38 comments, on Aug 29 7:25 PM 2008. In First person, Science fiction• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It's funny, I guess.by beerstorecowboy 900 words, 33 comments, on Feb 7 6:11 PM. In Creeps, Descriptive, Dive bar, Drunk, Funny, Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It was cold. It was dark. It was rainy. All in all, a miserable night. A young woman wearing soaking jeans and a turtleneck was hammering aby Dreaming.of.reality 1700 words, 11 comments, on Dec 31 5:23 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Short story, Third person, Vampire• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I rolled the car windows down. The air's northernly direction swept up piles of orange, crinkled leaves and blew them straight into my car.by Queen Lucy 1200 words, on Feb 19 7:03 AM. In Recession animals future rspca• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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