Depressing poetry

OKay, I'd like stuff that can be a story, or a poem
guys, please dont make it long
i hate to have to read forever
so no more than 750 words.. you can go over it a bit if u absolutly need to
but i like to keep it short
like 1/2 pages on word no spacing
mk?
uhm, u guys can talk about wutever u like, but id like to hear the fear, anger, depression, sadness, whatever feeling.. just no happy.. lol
erotica is allowed, but only a tiny bit, so please dont turn it into just a story with just that
go ahead and swear but dont be stupid by swearing every other word
nOnE Of Diz ShIt, Ya nO>? its so annoying, and takes forever to read..
alright guys, get writing
be poetic, dark
even abuse can be in there
i want it to seem real, with pain, or numbness, but with something there

you can talk about cutting, depression, eating disorders (which would be nice for a change), anything thats good..

if you are in my finalists, i will check for pledgarism!!!!
if i find out that you have copyed somebody else's poem/story you will be removed from the contest.. if you have copyed somebodys work,please just get rid of your poem/story already and save me the trouble.. thank you

PS
NO VAMPIRES or magical creatures
im a human, id like to read about humans
thanks again

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 3
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 15, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    All of the people in the finalists.. amazing. It was so hard to judge them, because I think everybody in that list could have been gold. Really, I'm not lying. There were also some very great poems in the entries, but I just didn't think that they could match the ones in the finalists. Great job everybody.. I was really really pleased by the poems I got.

Contest Winners

  1. by Twilight101 100 words, 1 comment, on Jan 15 12:04 PM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by armysinger 100 words, 6 comments, on Jan 22 12:48 PM. In Dark, Depression, First person, Poetry, Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by asthray.heart 100 words, 26 comments, on Mar 25 5:27 AM 2007. In , Depression, Suicide, Young adult
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. by lenore2010 200 words, 12 comments, on Jan 18 4:26 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 244182, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. i cry one thousand tears,1
    by LynksTryforceGurl 100 words, 22 comments, on Nov 7 4:52 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by xXSongxxofxxLifeXx 700 words, 7 comments, on Jul 29 4:56 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. The razor gleams like sunlight,1
    by Neolittlefish 200 words, 20 comments, on Sep 24 11:50 AM 2008. In , Dark, Depression, Poem, Poetry, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. I walk in on you 1
    by Sgs 100 words, 9 comments, on Dec 8 3:14 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • beezy92
    January 9
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    I have another entry I'd really like to enter, but I can only enter one entry at a time so if you don't like Sometimes I Hate You, let me know, and I'll replace it with the other one. (: I like this idea!


  • InksterMoxy
    January 9
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    ditto on beezy92


  • Kagamine Rin
    January 12
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    How many times may you enter? Once?

  • SilentMoonDance
    January 14
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    Hi...

    The stuff I wrote used to be a poem, but I turned it into a song, is that still okay?


    • try2changeme
      January 14
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      no problem, go ahead.. as long as it flows, has a point, and has good meaning, enter it


  • Dawn Bon
    January 18
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    mine is not very depressing but it was hard for me to write it myself personally

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