Peter Pan did not just forget Wendy. Sleeping Beauty did not just marry a man who woke her up. Cinderella did not get rid of her step sisters THAT easily. What really happened in these fairy tales I asks ya?! And honestly THE LADY OR THE FUCKING TIGER?! or did the princess kill the lady and elope with the man?
Did Peter pine and suffer, Aurora run away, Cinderella get kidnapped? Come on surely with the collections of brilliant minds in this place we should be able to come up with something...besides that I want to know!!!!!
Okay so I added some new rules and the previous submissions don't have to redo anything for this..just for the new people
Rules:
1.It must be a fairy tale/well known story where the true ending is not clear. Don't pick stuff like twilight because if I have to read about them I will shoot myself...or DQ you.
2.I don't care about swearing just as long as it doesn't come up as *bunny*
3.no erotica/ gay/ lesbian stuff(nothing personal I just don't want to read that)
4.Please no sticky caps.
5.Spelling and grammer must be readable/ to the best of your ability.
6.Make it interesting there is so much to work with.
7. just to be clear, I want the endings, after happily ever after because honestly they had to have some sort of life.
8. For drama, if its dramatic you better hope its silly. Don't make bad fanfiction, that's the best way I can discribe it.
Good:
"Prince Philip I love you!"
"...er alright.."
"WHAT ARE YOU SAYING YOU DON'T LOVE ME!?" Aurora put her hand over her heart, one of her multiple rings got caught in her dress and she couldn't undo it. She burst into tears and ran up to the tower. Philip plopped down on the throne and began to watch the court jester and the other women. He was perfectly content.
While outside princess aurora saw no reason to live and promptly threw herself off the tower, too bad she fell into a big lake where she became friends with merepeople and then fell in love once again.
Happily Never after.
Obviously that would need so much more detail and loads more but if its dramatic make it funny like soap operas.
Bad=[
"Aurora I love you. Marry me?" Prince Philip asked me. I smiled and replied with a yes, I left him to share the joyus news with my family. When I returned Prince Philip was chatting up a server. I screamed as I felt my heart break in two and promptly ran to the tower. I stood there feeling the cool breeze wash over me and I stood up on the edge. I waited until I was sure he knew I was here and then I jumped off and plumeted to my death, however I did not die because I landed in a lake. I began to let the heart break take me and I cried and cried and cried and bored natalie to death with this dumb contest entry...
Alright if you're still confused because I suck at explinations tell me.
Brownie Pointers!!!
I like love.
I like twists and turns, for instance, cinderella cheated on the prince for his cousin the duke of ____ and they had four children and then the prince found out(because he thought they were his naturally) and there was an epic battle between them and cinderella ended up getting caught in the middle and both parties left her and now she has to raise four children on her own.(don't use that)
Funny is nice.
Don't make it over dramatic like Peter Pan wants to kill himself and then does it with a mermaid because that obviously would not happen since Tink wouldn't allow it. But I do bet Wendy came back to neverland once or twice*HINT*
Alright have fun.. points may go up with entries.
Did Peter pine and suffer, Aurora run away, Cinderella get kidnapped? Come on surely with the collections of brilliant minds in this place we should be able to come up with something...besides that I want to know!!!!!
Okay so I added some new rules and the previous submissions don't have to redo anything for this..just for the new people
Rules:
1.It must be a fairy tale/well known story where the true ending is not clear. Don't pick stuff like twilight because if I have to read about them I will shoot myself...or DQ you.
2.I don't care about swearing just as long as it doesn't come up as *bunny*
3.no erotica/ gay/ lesbian stuff(nothing personal I just don't want to read that)
4.Please no sticky caps.
5.Spelling and grammer must be readable/ to the best of your ability.
6.Make it interesting there is so much to work with.
7. just to be clear, I want the endings, after happily ever after because honestly they had to have some sort of life.
8. For drama, if its dramatic you better hope its silly. Don't make bad fanfiction, that's the best way I can discribe it.
Good:
"Prince Philip I love you!"
"...er alright.."
"WHAT ARE YOU SAYING YOU DON'T LOVE ME!?" Aurora put her hand over her heart, one of her multiple rings got caught in her dress and she couldn't undo it. She burst into tears and ran up to the tower. Philip plopped down on the throne and began to watch the court jester and the other women. He was perfectly content.
While outside princess aurora saw no reason to live and promptly threw herself off the tower, too bad she fell into a big lake where she became friends with merepeople and then fell in love once again.
Happily Never after.
Obviously that would need so much more detail and loads more but if its dramatic make it funny like soap operas.
Bad=[
"Aurora I love you. Marry me?" Prince Philip asked me. I smiled and replied with a yes, I left him to share the joyus news with my family. When I returned Prince Philip was chatting up a server. I screamed as I felt my heart break in two and promptly ran to the tower. I stood there feeling the cool breeze wash over me and I stood up on the edge. I waited until I was sure he knew I was here and then I jumped off and plumeted to my death, however I did not die because I landed in a lake. I began to let the heart break take me and I cried and cried and cried and bored natalie to death with this dumb contest entry...
Alright if you're still confused because I suck at explinations tell me.
Brownie Pointers!!!
I like love.
I like twists and turns, for instance, cinderella cheated on the prince for his cousin the duke of ____ and they had four children and then the prince found out(because he thought they were his naturally) and there was an epic battle between them and cinderella ended up getting caught in the middle and both parties left her and now she has to raise four children on her own.(don't use that)
Funny is nice.
Don't make it over dramatic like Peter Pan wants to kill himself and then does it with a mermaid because that obviously would not happen since Tink wouldn't allow it. But I do bet Wendy came back to neverland once or twice*HINT*
Alright have fun.. points may go up with entries.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 25
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Alright everyone, I would like to give you all a hearty apology, I didn't get the message thing to tell me my contest had ended, which in itself is not a very good excuse but recently I found a good book and had loads of homework, and just accept my apology okay?! Anyway, you all did really well and I was so happy everyone entered, judging this was really tough so thanks for making it that way! Those are the winners. G'day!
Contest Winners
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After Happily Ever After...• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by WhySoSirius 600 words, 10 comments, on Oct 8 8:23 PM 2008. In Cinderella, Dark, Fun, Gay, Weird, Young adult
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by CelesteSanford 900 words, 3 comments, on Jan 1 6:44 PM. In Fairy tale, Uh weird
Bronze trophy winner
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How would Cinderella be in present times?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right and opened it. The dashing young lover and the audience remained apprehensive as the door slowly opened. All ears listened for the raging roar of a tiger, butby stardust3492 300 words, 2 comments, on Jan 7 3:28 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Once upon a time a long way away there was a girl. She was just a little baby and her parents cherished her with all her heart. But there was something terribly wrong. A wicked fairy visited the baby [Princess Aurora] and wasby Dawn Bon 1100 words, 21 comments, on Nov 17 12:22 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Ok, so this is obviously a different ending to the classic tale.
I actually wrote this in 8th grade... which was... 5 or 6 years ago? Soby seclusion 700 words, 1 comment, on Jan 11 1:30 AM• Commented on by judge.
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When you mean "over dramatic"...
Do you mean like stuff that is extremely unlikely to happen, or crazy emotional outbursts, or both? Just wondering. I might have the perfect story for this. Interesting contest, I might enter. Good luck with this one
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When I mean over dramatic..lol
Yeah it can be funny dramatic like bad acting the hand over the heart kind of classic I'm about to faint drama but not stuff like, omg I love you then five seconds later I AM GOING TO JUMP OFF THE CASTLE BECAUSE NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME!!!!!! WHAT A WORLD WHAT A WORLD. Not so dramatic its bad you know what I mean..
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On a side note the German version of Cinderella has a gory very unhappy ending for the two step sisters^^
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Darn, I can't enter my story cuz mine was about Peter Pan and a mermaid........dang. Jk cool contest
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lol kt
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haha...lady and the tiger...*muffles giggle* there is actually a sequel, and it's just as stupid. and it STILL doesn't tell you if it's the lady or the tiger. how's your vacation going?
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hahahaa. that makes me laugh hard. LOL mine is going welll...er and you????:]]
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pretty good...my older sister was just here, I got what I wanted for xmas (a tablet!!! xD)
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and that is?
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you use it to draw on a computer. you basically have a huge mousepad, like on a laptop, and you use a pen to draw on it instead of your finger. i'll show you sometime
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omg sweet!! lol i love how we have this conversation on my contest..
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hehe...it's completely random x3
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Lol darn. I was going to enter a Cinderella one but it's mild slash and I forgot you put in the rules that you didn't want slash XD
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Eh. Who cares I guess. Everyone's disregarding my rules anyhow XD. bring it on.
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LOL! Okay XD Thanks!
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