Help me please! Title contest!

In the close-knit town of New Brooklyn, Pennsylvania, if you do something wild, everyone will know. But no one witnessed the murder of Reverend Michaels and his family.
Except Leah Gallagher.
It was HER drunk ex-step-brother who crashed into the house that snowy evening.
It was HER fault for going along with the joyride.
And it was HER mother who would be judging the case.
Leah can't seem to figure out how she's supposed to hide the secret while somehow trying to make everything okay.

YOUR job is to tell me a suitable title for this story! I'm planning on publishing it, so please also tell me if you like it!
Thanks!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 22, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 100
  • Final notes:
    I really think everyone did so well! "Title Suggestions for HamsterLover13" was in 1st place, where I chose 'Crash and Hide' as the winning title! Good job! "Titles" was in second, with my favorite being, 'Repent.' "I think these would sound cool" was in third, with 'Guilty As Charged." Thank you everyone for entering!

Contest Winners

  1. Title Suggestions for Hamsterlover13
    I like coming up with titles for stories. I hope this helps.
    by angellove <100 words, on Dec 17 4:42 PM 2008. In , Contest entry, Family, Fiction, Titles
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. Titles
    Titles for a awesome story! XD
    by Friesian 100 words, on Dec 17 7:54 PM 2008. In Contest
    Silver trophy winner
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  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 236560, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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  • WritersEffigy gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    How about "Just Another Pennsylvania Christmas".

  • quantumsurveyor
    December 17, 2008
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    Sorry, I am lost, how can one have an EX step-brother? Once a ste-brother always a step-brother.


    • MrsSpunkRansom
      December 17, 2008
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      Her mom divorced his dad after five years of marriage. Simple as that.


  • perfect paradox
    December 17, 2008
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    Question, how could no one notice the fact that a car crashed into a house?

    Shattering the Truth

    All I got.

    • MrsSpunkRansom
      December 17, 2008
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      They (the pastor and his family) live on the outskirts of town. Hard to explain. And their neighbors were out. And they were hit'n'runners.

  • Writing0Freedom
    December 17, 2008
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    I don't know but I'd go with something not cliche. Something that makes sense but pulls together a theme of the story. Figure out what message\moral you want the story to give people and go from there


  • The Insane Eraser silver member
    December 18, 2008
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    ok i'm just going of a whim here x.x

    how about

    Blood stained white Christmas? or Secrets of the Snow? x.x...just some suggestions. >.>

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