Got a prewrite that has never been commented on? New a good, honest review? Well do I have something for you. Simple enter your prewrite with no comments, I'll review them and whoever has the best story wins! Easy right? If you enter the contest and someone then comments before me, that's fine. I will check the dates though.
All the usual rules, but be aware that I am slightly nit picky when it comes to grammar and spelling. However, this contest is to help you revise and enhance your stories so I will be okay with some errors. Only two per person.
That's about it. Go crazy!
All the usual rules, but be aware that I am slightly nit picky when it comes to grammar and spelling. However, this contest is to help you revise and enhance your stories so I will be okay with some errors. Only two per person.
That's about it. Go crazy!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 4
- Rewards: Gold: 100
- Final notes: Contestjudged by moderator, based on placement already made by host.
Contest Winners
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A student's day at school, from his own unique point of view.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by paperparadox 1800 words, 5 comments, on Oct 17 10:19 PM 2008. In Depression, Fiction, First person
Silver trophy winner
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by Maui Jane 1200 words, 14 comments, on Dec 10 3:42 PM 2008. In Depression, Fiction, Other, Suicide, Tragedy, Young adult
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Entries [37]
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Lucia Costa's headache refused to go away.1 / It stayed with her through her shower that morning, the long drive to Albom, and now it was pounding at her temples, during the funeral.by Rainy.Day.Kisses 500 words, 3 comments, on Jun 7 9:14 PM 2008. In Dark, Death, Family, Fiction, Pain, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Do you believe in dragons?1
by LynksTryforceGurl 100 words, 14 comments, on Nov 7 4:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by LynksTryforceGurl 100 words, 7 comments, on Nov 12 3:19 PM 2008. In First person, Life, Love, Personal, Poem, Romance, Sad, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hot For Teacher and Lost in Wonderland.by colormeimpressed 200 words, 1 comment, on Dec 6 8:32 AM 2008. In• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I walk in on you 1
by Sgs 100 words, 9 comments, on Dec 8 3:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Scaramouche. 200 words, 4 comments, on Nov 30 7:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There he lay. An anonymous black man about 6' 2'' with shaved hair with ashes, sweat, and blood stuck to his wounded skin. But he was still unconditionally gorgeous. His right arm in a sling and his left knee bandaged tightlyby Kyndal Laran 400 words, 5 comments, on Dec 20 6:36 PM 2008. In War love• Commented on by judge.
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"Love lasts," they say. "Always and forver." God, I hope that's true.by donuts-and-music 700 words, 2 comments, on Nov 24 5:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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High School Teen girl with an eating disorder.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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His feet ached more and more each time the worn sole of his tattered leather work boots so much as touched the cracked pavementby Duke1985 1300 words, 1 comment, on Dec 8 11:29 PM 2008. In Adventure, Post-apcolyptic, Science fiction, Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Heaven was supposed to be paradise. That’s what they’d said, way back then. That’s what the slightly obsessed priests and holy men had preaby LiveLoveJabberwocky 2200 words, 1 comment, on Nov 7 6:40 PM 2008. In Depression, Fantasy, Fiction, Love, Short story, Third person• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel nothing but void in my heart... Since that awful night… It’s all my fault...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An unwanted baby lives. Sylvia shows a mother's heart.by angellove 1700 words, 1 comment, on Oct 19 9:18 PM 2008. In Emotional, Family, Love, Mother, Noguest, Novel, Science fiction, Supernatural• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The knife rested in my hand. I glanced outside, the snow falling softly, resting on the ground. I looked to my phone, still silent. I set t• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The light twinkled along the short curved blade as she moved her arm in a back and forth sawing motion. The candle light flickered across h• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I could not believe my eyes, it was still 9th period. Time was practically standing still as it came closer to the end. I felt somethingby esimbf 1500 words, 10 comments, on Oct 27 5:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A light-hearted tale, set in a small town in South Africa.by Bernice DeLucchi 1900 words, 12 comments, on Oct 14 4:56 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by charmander13 1700 words, 1 comment, on Dec 9 3:15 AM 2008. In Crime, Fiction, Life, Love, Other, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She dove into the depths, closing her eyes she gracefully weaved in and out of the currents. Seaweed drifted past and silver fish darted in and out of her line of sight. The light broke through the waves like it sometimes doeby LilyMay 2700 words, 2 comments, on Dec 9 1:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Anja pulled her sword out of the defeated man’s chest. With slow ease she cleaned it lovingly. Soraya was the saber’s name. Through the entby InksterMoxy 3000 words, 4 comments, on Dec 13 9:51 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With each step he knew death drew close.
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Aly shivered in my arms. I hurried along the wet road avoiding what puddles that I could. The rain had begun less than half an hour ago yetby Writing0Freedom 3200 words, 1 comment, on Jun 30 11:17 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Prologue1 / Long ago in a time when queens and kings ruled the world and many creatures roamed its lands. A great evil arose in a man. The• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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man, i checked all my "stories" and they all have comments..too bad sry
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