The point of this contest is to make me cry my eyes out. Make me empathize with your characters. Make me feel their pain. Rip my heart out and smash it to a bloody, depressed pulp.
This, however, will not be as easy as it seems.
RULES:
1.)Two thousand words maximum
2.)Use correct spelling/grammar
3.)HAVE FUN!!!!!
4.)FUCKING USE CORRECT GRAMMAR
Stories will judged on how sad they make me feel.
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EDIT:
Okay, so it seems most of these entries (well, most of the ones I've been able to read so far) have made me laugh.
There was one that literally made me roll on the floor laughing.
This, however, will not be as easy as it seems.
RULES:
1.)Two thousand words maximum
2.)Use correct spelling/grammar
3.)HAVE FUN!!!!!
4.)FUCKING USE CORRECT GRAMMAR
Stories will judged on how sad they make me feel.
;D
EDIT:
Okay, so it seems most of these entries (well, most of the ones I've been able to read so far) have made me laugh.
There was one that literally made me roll on the floor laughing.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 27
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Contest judged by moderator
Contest Winners
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This is a recollection, couching some thoughts about dealing with, focusing on, a life perspective.by Gary Alexander 1500 words, 69 comments, on Nov 19 9:45 AM 2007. In First person, Life, Short story
Gold trophy winner
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"After all, what am I worth?" Hannah thought blankly, slumped on the floor against her white bedroom wall. / She'd recently gone through aby MoonRoseWolf 700 words, 47 comments, on Oct 15 10:25 AM 2007. In Bullying, Contests, Dark, Depression, Personal, Short story
Silver trophy winner
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This is a Game in the Family. A painful, cruel game. One where you put everything on the line to live. It's a game of Fate. I lost.by Lovlie 600 words, 2 comments, on Dec 2 4:37 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Depression, First person, Murder, Society, Strange, War
Bronze trophy winner
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King Size Reeses Cups1• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Honorable mention
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As I look at you, your dark, green eyes dance in the sunlight.1 / I see you smile, revealing your pearly, shimmering teeth.2 / Your blonde hair is swooped back, from• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Please, I need to know,
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by GattonDweller 400 words, 4 comments, on Sep 1 3:51 AM 2008. In Adult, Crime, Death, Depression, Love, Pain, Romance, Sad, Short story, Tragedy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What my mother told me when I turned 16.
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I was always told that it’s moments like these when your whole life flashes before your eyes, but I just wanted to know where Jimmy was. Down, then up again. My gaze was fixed. I couldn’t shake it. Down, again, then up. Whenby becomingme247 200 words, 1 comment, on Dec 12 11:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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by TNTrouble 700 words, 6 comments, on Nov 21 5:17 AM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Dark, Family, First person, Nonfiction, Pain, Personal, Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Hate has always been there for me"1by Self 800 words, 6 comments, on Dec 3 4:11 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A true story about friendship• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Slow down," Sara yelled from behind him. Jake hit the brake. It didn't slow. He tried two more times, it still wasn't working.
by donuts-and-music 500 words, 7 comments, on Nov 15 1:24 PM 2008. In Death, Love, Pain, Short story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Steam collected on the window where traffic passed by on the rainy street below his 5th floor apartment. His hand shook upon the white knobby adreamwithin 1000 words, 25 comments, on Nov 10 3:18 PM 2008. In Angst, Depression, Fiction, Gay, Life, Love, Romance, Teen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You never understand how much it hurts to have to pack up what she gave you until you have to do it yourself.by Matthew-Maldonado 1000 words, 29 comments, on Aug 27 1:40 AM 2007. In Angst, Depression, Life, Love, Personal, Romance, Sad, Third• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Much-Dipstick 2100 words, 14 comments, on Sep 24 5:02 AM 2008. In Death, First person, Friendship, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by LiveLoveJabberwocky 4600 words, 12 comments, on Nov 17 4:59 PM 2008. In Death, Depression, Love, Pain, Romance, Short story, Third person, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The year is 1999 and a cat girl princess was having her nine-hundredth birthday. The birthday was being held on an island called Ritzguard,by mordaky 3500 words, 5 comments, on Nov 19 9:52 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My tiny Grandma looked like she had gained twenty pounds.by JessiesDaughter 400 words, 15 comments, on Nov 14 4:31 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I fell asleep to the smell of death and incurable sickness that ravages the innocent. I awake in a stiff chair holding the hand of my comatby Writing0Freedom 500 words, 15 comments, on Sep 3 9:36 PM 2008. In• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'll dream so ardently until that forever, glowing new where you'll smile and I'll whisper, "Darling, I love ..."by XxRaindoshixX 2000 words, 7 comments, on Nov 20 9:15 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Death, Depression, Romance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It is always cruel to be trapped in an earthquake debris, and it definitely doesn't help if you are a deaf-mute...(edited to make it suitabby Kirin 900 words, 46 comments, on Dec 7 1:50 AM 2008. In Death, First person, Horror, Life, Pain, Sad, Short story, Tragedy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by charmander13 1700 words, 1 comment, on Dec 9 3:15 AM 2008. In Crime, Fiction, Life, Love, Other, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It’s almost funny because I hear the words coming out of her mouth and they’re coming over and over again as if she thinks I can’t hear herby CasperQueenofHoochie 900 words, 4 comments, on Dec 30 6:29 PM 2007. In First person, Personal, Unedited but read anyway =]• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I couldn't watch. I didn't want to watch. Seeing my sister kill herself wasn't something I was interested in. It did hurt, but no one it woby Artificial.Smiles. 1000 words, 5 comments, on Jul 13 12:24 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Other, Suicide, Teen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I can't take this anymore1by kaylaface 1100 words, 6 comments, on Dec 2 3:01 AM 2008. In Abuse, Dark, Death, Depression, Pain, Short story, Teen, Unedited• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The white coated men drug me into the room kicking and screaming. I fought with all my might to break free and escape but they had druggedby Fibe Kill-DFW Punk- 1000 words, 20 comments, on Dec 2 12:22 PM 2008. In Horror, Not for young readers, Phsycological• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The situation was always too difficult for her to deal with, I knew that from the beginning and if I was any kind of smart I would have backed off right away. At first the playful banter was cute and fun but then it became sby brittie 1100 words, 3 comments, on Oct 27 6:49 PM 2008. In Depression, Drama, Lesbian, Life, Love, Personal, Romance, Sad, Teen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Aw, shoot. I have one but it goes WAY over the limit...
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XD well, I really only put that because I'm really lazy and put off judging until the last possible day. I don't want to have to read 439602735084 stories that are ridiculously long.
I'm sure one won't hurt!
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Hmmm...I think I will enter...
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Sweet, buttery Jesus!
I kinda feel sorry since you'll get a horde of entries x:
I promised to enter, didn't I?
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XD I don't really know. I guess I started this contest to see if a story actually could make me sad.
All I can say is if I like the character, I'm much more likely to feel their pain.
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Mine is too long!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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EDIT:
Okay, so it seems most of these entries (well, most of the ones I've been able to read so far) have made me laugh.
There was one that literally made me roll on the floor laughing.
Haha don't you hate it when that happens? I had a contest like that once and it happened. Most of the stories were about melodramatic high schoolers running around hospitals and yelling at people or at home cutting themselves with razor blades for frivolous reasons and you can tell the author has never been through anything of any importance in their life.
Haha didn't mean to rant. I need a laugh. Point me in the right direction? -
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OH GOD THANK YOU!
I couldn't agree anymore than I already do!
They're all pretty hilarious, the things I laugh the most over, however, are the grammatical errors.
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GAH.
won't finish, sorry Dx
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