Fanstasy

ok, so i am in the mood for some fanstasy stuff... so obviously, this is what i want...

vampires
werewolves
witches and wizards
elves
dragons
dwarfs
anything fantasy, including characters that you may have made up. my ap friend aikoflavored made up some creatures that are pretty freaking nifty, so it would be cool to see what other people come up with.

Rules:
-NO STICKY CAPS! it hurts my eyes...
-you may enter poetry, but if you do, please enter a story as well
-there is no word limit
-if it has any erotica, please label appropiatly.
-you may enter only three times a person
-so i know that you have not entered more than three times, please place your name in the AN
-i love reading, and i am looking for something to read, if you know of any good books that do with fantasy, please label those in your AN as well, please!!!
-THE MOST IMPORTANT RULE OF ALL: HAVE FUN!!!!!!

love and blessings
lessie


ok, so i am still in the process of reading the entries. i have so many!!! its great. i love all of the entries so far that i have read. this is going to be a hard contest to judge. i think the more points i get, the more honorable mentions i will add, because there are so many stories that just cant go by without some sort of prize. lol. again, keep having fun!

love and blessings
lessie

ok... so i have a rather stupid question to ask some people on here that might answer me... i wond silver membership for a week because i got third in the most comments or something like that... and i just wanna know what you can do as a silver member... i will give the first person that answers me 15 points... not much, i know, but still, its 15 points more that you didnt have...

sorry to break some peoples hearts, but i decided that from now on i wanted more fresh writes... so, no pre writes allowed for the next couple days.

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on December 7, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 30 people
• Final notes:
  hey guys, sorry it took me so long to judge this contest. i had so many entries in here, and they were all soooo good... i just wish that i had more points to give out. i really do. i regret being able to only give out 30 honorable mentions. i was shooting for 54 so that everyone would have a trophy, but sadly i do not have enough points for that. great job everyone! these stories were AMAZING!! and congrats to the winners big time, i reccomend that people check them out. and thank you for you much needed patience. best wishes
  lessie

Contest Winners

1. Leaving the Light Episode 1: Chapter 1

   by tonialoise 3000 words, 58 comments, on Jun 4 12:50 AM 2008. In Adult, Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Love, Romance, Vampire
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Conner (Chapter One)

   After all, he pondered as his victims unknowingly rode towards their fate, Isn't that what separates us from the animals? And that was ind

   by MoonRoseWolf 2700 words, 110 comments, on Aug 22 10:09 AM 2007. In Dark, Horror, Novel, Werewolves
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Dove. Chapter 6

   "So, what the fuck are we doing exactly?" Dove asks quietly, not wanting to wake the sleeping boys, I stare forward as the headlights light

   by aikoflavored 5500 words, 4 comments, on Nov 7 2:36 AM 2008. In Adventure, Dark, First person, Horror, Life
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 220352, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
5. Number 54

   by Kaira2 3200 words, 5 comments, on Nov 4 3:29 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Outer Erf, bit one.

   Somewhere on Universe's outer skirt, was a planet, a planet called - get this, Outer Erf.

   by DoozerDan 3500 words, 40 comments, on Sep 15 9:10 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Humor, Lord of the rings, Parody
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. First 5 chapters of One Dark Night

   by Thorn-on-the-Rose 2000 words, 18 comments, on Sep 28 8:50 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
8. The Search For Food

   We'd been in space for nearly seven moons. Even traveling at Uberwarp, it had taken us that long to reach the Ugaly solar system. The bes

   by Andy Stephenson 1300 words, 70 comments, on Aug 29 12:36 AM 2008. In Fantasy, First person, Humor, Scifi
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
9. The Feeding

   Their faces were no longer the faces of beautiful statues. They had changed. They were the faces of demons, the faces of hell...the faces o

   by Ghost of a Siren 3800 words, 58 comments, on Oct 29 3:40 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
10. The Human Fruit

    It was a morbid gamble every time he setfoot into her chamber just to see her eyes flutter open. Someday those eyes wouldn't open.

    by Ghost of a Siren 6200 words, 22 comments, on Sep 1 1:05 AM 2008. In Dark, Romance, Sad
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
11. Emerald Beach

    by SaffronGreenSpirit 1000 words, 18 comments, on Aug 23 2:44 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Horror
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
12. The Wyrm's Footprint

    by gezza 1500 words, 29 comments, on Jul 1 6:46 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Young adult
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
13. Cimiar's Last Challenge

    Cimiar the Alchemist lifted his weary legs to climb the last few steps to the top of his tower, and entered his Room of Contemplation.

    by gezza 900 words, 28 comments, on May 27 6:01 AM 2008. In Fantasy
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
14. Midnight's Disaster

    It's late, she's hungry, and not human. By Pepsi.Cola

    by SigningOff.ImOnline 700 words, 8 comments, on Oct 28 9:56 PM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Death, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Murder, Short story, Vampires
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
15. Story Of Spuria

    They sat together on the hill, overlooking the beautiful marble city, the sun setting to a brilliant orange and red. The moon sleepily peep

    by MoonRoseWolf 1700 words, 52 comments, on Feb 29 5:17 PM 2008. In Fantasy, History, Horror, Romance, Short story, Werewolves
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
16. Conner (Chapter Two)

    "Do you know what its like to run into the middle of nowhere, and feel completely free? To be at the top of a hill, looking down on woods,

    by MoonRoseWolf 1500 words, 42 comments, on Aug 31 4:32 AM 2007. In Dark, Horror, Novel, Unfinished, Werewolves
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
17. Embracing The Night

    The insistent drone of a clock
    chanting its mystical rhythm,

    by amanda vampiress 100 words, 35 comments, on Nov 14 9:12 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Poetry, Werewolves
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
18. Secret Admirer

    by BluesMan 900 words, 7 comments, on Dec 2 10:27 PM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Erotica, Vampire
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
19. MOONLIT NIGHTS: Chapter 1 "Randomness" [an original]

    by kcborja 1200 words, 1 comment, on Nov 22 12:26 PM 2008. In Adventure, Fantasy, Fiction, Humor, Mystery, Novel, Romance, Teen, Young adult
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
20. Feral Nights Part 1

    They slapped the handcuffs on her and pushed her head down so she wouldn't bump in on the door frame. It's not the first time she'd been i

    by tonialoise 1100 words, 58 comments, on Sep 6 12:44 PM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, Horror, Thrid person, Werewolf
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
21. Immortal Yearning...

    I am such a fool,
    so eager was I to embrace my immortality.

    by Fritz O skennick 600 words, 19 comments, on Aug 25 10:38 AM 2008. In Dark, Love, Story/poem hybrid., Vampire
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
22. Moon's Fury: Chapter One: The Sweet Smell of Attraction

    My eyes snapped open! 1
    

    by amanda vampiress 4400 words, 40 comments, on Oct 11 9:42 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Romance, Werewolves
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
23. Niquil Dreams (The call of Avalon)...

    This fever has weakened me and so in my desperation I drink heartily from the cup of this Nyquil potion. I shiver as icy fingers brush gent

    by Fritz O skennick 1700 words, 12 comments, on Apr 28 4:32 AM 2008. In Dark, Drama, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Humor, Short story
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
24. Sky of Shadows: Section One

    by Oblivion Kitty God 1700 words, 17 comments, on Mar 26 12:16 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Fragment, Unfinished, Young adult
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
25. A strange life

    It was the year of our lord 1802 Norwich England. I was fourteen years old and had just came into womanhood. Something I dreaded for a long

    by silverpen 3200 words, 9 comments, on Nov 15 4:36 AM 2008. In Fantasy, First person, Starting idea, Vampire, Werewolf
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
26. Vampire Innuendo

    by Serpentine 1200 words, 11 comments, on Oct 30 12:23 AM 2008. In Adult, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Vampires
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
27. Obsession

    She was like a foot print in sand that was erased by the smooth pressure of the seashore's foamy wave. Her existent was a translucent sec

    by bird-mad girl 1600 words, 13 comments, on Jul 28 8:16 PM 2007. In Vampires
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
28. The Faerie Princess

    Once upon a time, in a kingdom long ago, there was a beautiful princess named Venus. Her mother and father named her after the goddess of

    by Shadow06 5000 words, 21 comments, on May 27 11:11 AM 2008. In Fairytale, Fantasy, Love
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
29. Born of man and woman- written in mother’s perspective

    Each day moves by slowly. I feel that everything is my fault. It’s my responsibility to look after her, but every time I see her wretched f

    by Lady Michaella 500 words, 11 comments, on Nov 20 2:23 AM 2008. In
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
30. A Hunter's Moon

    by nicolelynn2010 400 words, 2 comments, on Oct 2 2:25 PM 2007. In Other, Scary, Young adult
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
31. Ash

    I got up from the table I inhabit practically every day and headed for the door. Something demanded my attention as I neared the exit. His eyes burned through my skull and I slowed down. What does he want his time? I didn’t l

    by nicolelynn2010 600 words, 1 comment, on Nov 19 3:10 PM 2008
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
32. True Friend

    I stared out the crystal window watching the downpour spitefully. Reese made it very clear that I was not to leave the house without an escort and even with one, there was still few that I could do. With seven people in the h

    by nicolelynn2010 400 words, 1 comment, on Nov 19 3:03 PM 2008
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
33. Changed

    by LiveLoveJabberwocky 4500 words, 16 comments, on Nov 14 8:56 PM 2008. In Contest, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Hope, Love, Young adult
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [46]

• Riding on the Backs of Seahorses

  A tale of a fairy bullied by elves and his one wish.

  by tonialoise 1100 words, 78 comments, on Dec 18 9:45 AM 2008. In Children's, Elf, Elves, Fairies, Fairy, Fantasy

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Macabre Dance

  “There's no time, Gretta, we have to leave at once.”
  
  The tone in his voice was so overpowering that I couldn't object. I trusted him.

  by Ghost of a Siren 5800 words, 19 comments, on Apr 8 5:39 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, First person, Horrorish, Humor, Vampire

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Anniversary

  by intoothandclaw 3500 words, 14 comments, on Oct 11 1:29 PM 2008. In Adult, Dark, Death, Erotica, Horror, Love, Murder, Pain, Werewolves

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Prologue: The Dwarf of Silver Peak

  The dwarf looked down from his perch on Silver Peak puffing on his long stemmed pipe contentedly.

  by DylanBranson 2100 words, 30 comments, on Jun 3 8:08 PM 2008. In Fantasy

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bond of blood

  by lavanya 1200 words, 49 comments, on Sep 23 8:50 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Inspirational, Love, Vempire

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Unicorns' Tale

  I peeked around the brush, the thick greenery concealing my hiding spot for the time being, as I gazed on the marvelous scene before me. Wh

  by Hellcat Metal 500 words, 12 comments, on Sep 30 12:19 PM 2008. In Contest, Fantasy, Magical, Unicorn

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Mistress of the Night

  A classic werewolf meets vampire story, only with a bit of a twist. All comments welcome.

  by Shimmerfairy 800 words, 21 comments, on Oct 27 7:00 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Humor

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Mistress of the Night: Deon

  A second chapter to Mistress of the Night. This reveals the truth behind Deon.

  by Shimmerfairy 600 words, 5 comments, on Oct 29 8:39 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Mistress of the Night: Leo

  A third chapter based around Leo.
  
  

  by Shimmerfairy 700 words, 5 comments, on Oct 29 6:20 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Origin of Evil: A Tale Of Entropy

  A tale of the mage Nivalaein, his descent into madness, his brother Roland who was destined to stop him, and their shared love Narissa.

  by WritersEffigy 20100 words, 19 comments, on Oct 27 7:58 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Humor

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Hitchiking

  by demonp3n 1400 words, 13 comments, on Jun 4 4:10 PM 2008. In Complete, Dark, Fiction, Horror, Third person, Werewolf, Young adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Moon's Fury: Chapter Three: Marked

  by amanda vampiress 3000 words, 35 comments, on Oct 19 7:22 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Romance, Werewolves

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Moon's Fury: Chapter Two: The Change

  I didn't know what I could do to save him or why this was happening! My hands shook as I gently shook his shoulders from side to side, repe

  by amanda vampiress 3000 words, 33 comments, on Oct 15 6:26 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Romance, Werewolves

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• After Life

  When I woke up it was still dark and I knew straight away that everything was different. I fumbled for my bed covers, but soon discovered t

  by Queen Lucy 1600 words, 1 comment, on Nov 16 7:42 AM 2008. In Fantasy werewolves

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  tonialoise
  November 4, 2008
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  Hi, you said we could enter up to three entries but it's only allowing one entry per person.
• • 
    poetry is soul
    November 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    well crap, i will go and change that, sorry
• 
  DoozerDan
  November 4, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  'Cause my internet browser doesn't like letting me edit my stories, the fantasy novels I'd suggest are: The Discworld series by Terry Pratchett.
  
  The stories I entered are:
  
  Mercenary of Racurse: Prologue.
  Outer Erf: Bit one.
  
  
• • tonialoise
    November 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Ooohhh... I've only read the first Discworld novel but I loved it. That's a good pick.
    
    And because I forgot to add mine... Terry Goodkind's Sword of Truth series is good, especially "Wizard's First Rule." (in fact they just aired the first episode of the tv show based off it, Legend of the Seeker, but definitely read the book first!).
  • • DoozerDan
      November 5, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      I strongly recommend them. They get better as he goes, his style settles down, and they get a lot more... complex... not in the way they read, just the amount of detail. In my opinion anyway.
• 
  tallblondie
  November 5, 2008
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  I've only entered one - The Dark Legacy. Enjoy!
• 
  Dawn Bon
  November 5, 2008
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  ewe...vampires.. but good luck with all your entries.
• • 
    poetry is soul
    November 5, 2008
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    lol thank you
• 
  WritersEffigy
  November 5, 2008
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  Oh how you shall regret that whole "no word limit" thing.
• • 
    aikoflavored
    November 7, 2008
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    I dont think she'll regret the no word limit thing.
    she's read all 5 chapters of my story, each over 5200 words long. I think she'll do fine :]
  • • 
      poetry is soul
      November 8, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      lol thanks aiko
  • poetry is soul
    November 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i have a lot of patience, and so far i have done pretty good... and im a fast reader... i think i will do ok. but thanks for the concern anyway.
    lessie
• aikoflavored
  November 7, 2008
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  OH! OH!
  I'm entering chapter 6, because it fully describes the monsters. and I really wanna enter this contest :]
  
  plus you haven't read chapter 6 yet.
  so
• • 
    poetry is soul
    November 8, 2008
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    great!!! cant wait to read it aiko!!!
• 
  Andy Stephenson
  December 7, 2008
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  Thanks

  Thanks for the honorable mention and points. I appreciate them. I hope that you enjoyed my story.
  
  Thanks for hosting.
  
  Andy
• 
  MoonRoseWolf
  December 7, 2008
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  Thank you so much for the points and the trophies-I really wasn't expecting that! It was a great contest, and I hope you enjoyed hosting it.
  
  Miranda xx