Show me how the world was created, how it was really created.

Well, this is my second contest.
Why do people always mention that? It doesn't really matter, or impact anything, and, yet, here I am.
Mentioning it.

I digress.

As the title of the contest implies, I want your stories about creation.
Your creation.
How the world, or, if you're feeling up to a challenge, universe, came into being.
This is a very simple contest.
What I do not want: Stories that are not about the creation of earth.
Stories that are about (1) Evolution, (2) big Bang (3) Or any of the other theories about how we came into existence.
I want it to be your story, I want it to be original.
Brownie points (honestly, I'm not just using the phrase, I will actually send you points) for people who use extreme creativity/originality.
Now, does this mean you cannot write a story about everything evolving from a small squid floating in grape jelly outside the milky way? No.
You simply cannot copy the theory of evolution too closely. Simple enough? And, when I say the creation of earth, I'm speaking about animals and humans as well.
Not just nature.
I also don't want stories about how you actually think the world came into being, just your own personal version. If you honestly believe that your picture of it is in fact the acurate version, more power to you.

So, heres what I'm looking for:
Vivid Descriptions. This story is all about descriptions, don't ruin it.
Creativity/Originality. This doesn't mean you have to write something wacky, you can take a basic creation myth and just make it your own. As long as it is, your own.

So, rules.
1 Put your screen name in the authors box.
2 I am allowing prewrites, but if I get a lot of entries that don't apply, that option will disappear.
3 Proper english and grammar, please.
4 Be polite. No bashing God or Evolution or any other belief.
5 If you want to put erotica in your story, be my guest. But please label it correctly so the kiddies cannot look at what they need not see.
6 It would be appreciated if you would smile for the camera.

I believe that is it.
So, paint me a moving, beautiful picture about this dear earth we all cherish so very much.
Go.
Write.

Enjoy.

Enter this contest

  • This is an anonymous contest - your name will be hidden from editors
  • Closes in 12 days, or after 20 more entries
  • One entry per person, newer submissions replace old ones
  • Rewards - Gold: 150, Silver: 75, Bronze: 25
  • Enter a pre-written story
  • Enter a new story

Entries [20]

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  • by tallblondie 100 words, 26 comments, on Oct 16 5:56 PM 2008. In Contest, Other, Reflective
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Oblivion Kitty God 300 words, 12 comments, on Oct 28 2:08 AM 2008. In Other, Science fiction
    • Commented on by judge.
  • To be honest, the world was not created. It was there, but it was just a rock. A very big rock to be exact. Well, there was a race of people, Granites, who as a hobby would make worlds inhabitable.
    They made sure that they ch
    by Arbiter94 100 words, 4 comments, on Oct 28 2:52 AM 2008. In Contest, Fantasy, Humor
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • In the beginning, there was a child. A child with no age...no purpose...no meaning. She lay, curled up in eternal slumber in the emptiness.
    by Electric-Blue 1100 words, 3 comments, on Jan 16 8:20 PM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Anaya Roma. A paleontological spoof?
    by Anaya Roma 1200 words, 10 comments, on Aug 22 10:13 AM 2007. In Perhaps humorous, Strange
    • Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • DÉJÀ VU DEJA VU...What's it REALLY like? Where does it all begin or end? Is space four dimensional? Is TIME a straight line? This guy seems
    by Gary Alexander 900 words, 37 comments, on Oct 8 6:34 PM 2008. In Science fiction
    • Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • It began as all things must.
    It began with a thought.
    by shan700 300 words, 1 comment, on Oct 30 4:52 PM 2008. In , Creation, Time
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • The Creator stared down onto a infinite black, cold, blank canvas. Nothing existed, no living objects.
    by Savage 400 words, 1 comment, on Nov 1 12:16 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Inspirational, Other
    • Not viewed by judge.
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    by Dun 600 words, 2 comments, on Nov 15 11:31 AM 2008. In
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • Zara lay by her eggs. She would have to keep them warm if she wanted them to have a good future. The air was crisp and the planet in which
    by Queen Duffy 600 words, 1 comment, on Nov 16 8:46 AM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • Once upon a time...there was a rather small chinchilla floating around in space. It had been there forever. After a while, the chinchilla started to become power hungry. He thought to himself "What is the point of being here
    by MeganDanielleJonas 200 words, on Nov 20 12:59 PM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • God was alone, with a blank canvas.1
    by Neolittlefish 200 words, on Nov 20 4:03 PM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • by anoetic poet 300 words, on Nov 30 8:51 AM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • In the beginning, there was nothing. Well, there was, because they were asleep, and had been for over twenty million years. This suggests that there is more than nothing, but I'm telling you that there was nothing. Other than
    by goopmonkey 200 words, on Dec 1 10:21 AM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • A small planet, engulfed in a constant battle between Good and Evil ... Life, as we know it, had begun.
    by Sailor Moon 500 words, 1 comment, on Dec 15 7:18 AM 2008. In Fiction, Hmm, Life, Science fiction
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • Imagine a world in which rules don’t apply, there is no one ruler, and there is no one to protect you from the things that go bump in the night. Now in this world we’ve imagined, there are creatures far worse than you could e
    by HowlingMidnightWolf 600 words, 2 comments, on Dec 16 2:23 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Life, Narrated
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • The largest festival in " Snorf " is a about to begin,but little did Lurk know that this festival could bring him to the end of his life.
    by someone25 500 words, 7 comments, on Dec 27 3:37 AM 2008. In , Fantasy, Fiction, Humor, Life, Science fiction
    • Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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    by iliad 500 words, on Dec 30 1:11 PM 2008
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • Once upon a time, in a universe not to different from ours, there lived curious creatures. Their skin was tan and freckled, and their eyes were green, purple, blue, or brown. They were peaceful and respectful creatures, and c
    by Storms 500 words, on Dec 30 5:03 PM 2008. In Hmm, Inspirational, Life
    • Not viewed by judge.
  • In the beginning, there was the loneliness of eternity.1
    by lovely nightmare 300 words, 1 comment, on Jan 4 8:18 PM
    • Not viewed by judge.

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  • DoozerDan
    October 28, 2008
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    Genesis chapter one sums it up pretty well.


    • Promethean Veracity
      October 28, 2008
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      Yes, it does.
      However, genesis chapter one is fairly brief,
      and not very poetic.
      I'm looking for something a bit more vivid in
      it's descriptions.

      Care to enter?

      • DoozerDan
        October 28, 2008
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        Heh, true that.

        Alas, I've not the time to write anything new at the moment, so I'm gonna have to decline this one.

        Hope you get some good stories.


        • Promethean Veracity
          October 28, 2008
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          A shame.

          I would have enjoyed reading something of yours.
          but, It's more then likely I'll get over it.

          Thanks. We'll see. ~:}

          • DoozerDan
            October 28, 2008
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            Mmm. I'd love to have more time. But life, ya know?

            If I wrote something it'd probably have ended up a satire which wouldn't have been popular with anyone who holds to an evolutionist point of view, haha. So prolly a good thing I'm not going to. xD

  • EZlats
    October 28, 2008
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    Awesome Picture, I'll try to enter something


  • Elvenfairy
    December 16, 2008
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    I just can't do this one. Eather i'd write the genesis story over again or I'd write CS Lewis' version over again. Eather way you don't want to read it. It's a cool idea though, and I hope my friend wins

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