mEnTaL kAlEiDoScOpE {W/i/t/h O/p/t/i/o/n/s}

Welcome to yet another contest by your fair princess. I promise this one will be much better! *cough*maybe**cough* Anyways, for some reason I've suddenly become interested in the world of surreal thoughts and mental illnesses (I might have one, so yeah XD) especially since watching that episode of Law and Order SVU last night called "Swing", I really cried while watching it, and I want to feel more of that emotion. I think it'd be interesting to see the world from another point of view, the surrealism and the madness which never seems to make any sense, but terrifying at the same time. Like Alice in Wonderland!

It's up to YOU to make me really feel these things. I'll give you some options so you can know exactly what I want, and some to spark your creativity while you're at it.

But First:

*~*~THE RULES~*~*

1. No profanity/bashing/etcetera. You can have characters who shun the mentally ill person but that's the only form of bashing I'll allow.

2. I know this is a contest about the insane and mentally ill, but please don't come here TyPiNg LiKe ThIs. Please proof read and spell check, and correct your grammar if it sounds funny, ok?

3. Word limit, let's say...5000? If you give me a 10, 000 worded entry, I might read it, but in your comments I'll slap you silly if you haven't touched me

4. It doesn't have to be a story, it can be a song, poem, script, quote, anything, just as long as it fits the contest requirements.

5. Adult, erotica, especially abuse welcome.

6. I don't want crazy, crappy entries, I want beautiful, heartfelt entries about crazy people (not limited to me).

7. If you want to enter a random, funny, crazy story to make this contest less depressing, ask me first and I might squeeze you in.

8. HAVE FUN!

Now for the ☺ Options ☻! (P.S: You can choose more than one if you want!)

1. ~♥!Characters!♥~

(A.) A Schizophrenic parent or sibling. [Brownie points]

(B.) A girl or parent with bipolar disorder. [Brownie Points]

(C.) A teen or child with some mental disorder.

(D.) A teen which has gained a mental disorder from an accident (like hitting their head severely, etcetera). [Brownie points]
Part 2 of D: This teen has a boyfriend/girlfriend who is trying to deal with what has happened.

(E.) A parent who struggles with a mentally ill child.

(F.) A person who struggles with having a sibling who has a mental disorder. [Brownie points]

(G.) A young girl who is trapped within an asylum.
Part 2 of G: A child who is thought to be mentally ill, and kept locked away, but in truth the isolation is what causes he/she to go mad.

(H.) A person who struggles with drug/alcohol addiction.

(I.) A mentally ill person who expresses their thoughts through art [Brownie Points]

(J.) A teen who has A.D.D or ADHD.

(K.) Someone with multiple personality disorder.


2. /*| Pictures |*\

(L.) http://dorodoro.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-50040867

(M.) http://alsature.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-Rhythm-52119953

(N.) http://messa.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-In-Love-34121102

(O.) http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee265/BlackhorseCherry/Gothic%20Galore/zortheotherLunnah_by_Anemyah.jpg

(P.) http://noistar.deviantart.com/art/See-Saw-surreal-mag-cover-19142624

(Q.) http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t138/plmarsg8/Surreal.png

(R.) http://swt-team.deviantart.com/art/Surreal-Euphonia-62448059

(S.) http://dorset.deviantart.com/art/The-glow-below-water-90822687

(T.) http://princess-of-shadows.deviantart.com/art/everytime-I-breathe-93165601

(U.) http://toounit.deviantart.com/art/Garden-In-My-Room-95229086

(V.) http://dieeis.deviantart.com/art/Remix-80228445

(W.) http://cryssy.deviantart.com/art/Spectacle-76494830


3. \*\*\Phrases\Sentences /*/*/ {You can also use them as titles, anything, just use em somewhere in your story if you want}

(X.) Living in the sun.

(Y.) Swimming with the birds.

(Z.) Swimming in the sky.

(AB.) Flying in the ocean.

(BC.) With death I can finally breathe.

(DE.) Breathing underwater.

(FG.) Colours of the wind.

(HI.) Black light.

(JK.) Escape into reality.

(LM.) Garden in my mind/room.

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So you get the drift, I want these entries to be very beautiful and touching. Ask me any questions you may have. Please enter ^^

~*Princess*~

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 250, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 13 people
  • Final notes:
    I finally ended the insanity! Um, no pun intended...

    (funny how the winning story doesn't have anything to do with a born disorder or mental development ...eh, please don't shoot meh other people o.o)

    Anyways, THANK YOU ALL! It was such an amazing experience reading these and I really enjoyed them

    Screw it, you gave me a hard time, so all of you are winners T_T It was soooo frikkin hard picking who should win silver and bronze, in the end, things worked out for themselves. *shrugs*

    Anyways, I really appreciate you entering this contest, and I encourage all of you to continue writing, because you all have a true gift and your writing touched my heart. In the end, I did enjoy this contest. Thanks again for a wonderful time, congratulations to all and keep on writing!

    xoxo
    ~*Princess*~

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 193834, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. I’m plunged
    Inside a dark abyss
    by Friesian 300 words, 10 comments, on Oct 26 6:58 PM 2008. In Bipolar, Deep, Depression, Hurt , Lissy, Lonely, Loss, Ocd, Poem
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. For the past three weeks, I have lived the life of a serial killer and felt the madness that filled his world. I usually do not wait so lon
    by angellove 3000 words, 31 comments, on Jan 28 2:51 PM 2007. In Fiction, First person, Horror, Love, Religious, Supernatural
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Sophia noticed the journal lying open on the desk as she vacuumed. Malcolm had told her to leave it alone. The idea of the journal, at his
    by NightVixen 800 words, 35 comments, on Nov 3 11:22 PM 2008. In Depression, Mental illness, Personal, Schizophrenia, Short story
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  5. I look around me and I don’t see anyone like me. I look around and I see perfection. I look around and I am the only one who doesn’t fit. I
    by Writing0Freedom 2200 words, 18 comments, on Mar 2 11:28 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Both taps were running, clear water slowly rising to cover the sore, worn hands that rested lightly in the sink.1 / For two hours now Jack
    by tony333 200 words, 11 comments, on Jun 20 5:32 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. I'm not a bad boy.
    So why are you crying?
    by cole3313 300 words, 30 comments, on Sep 25 4:26 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Strange, Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by moonwriter 1900 words, 16 comments, on Oct 16 11:10 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. by Quank 2000 words, 3 comments, on Oct 10 6:55 PM 2007. In Fiction, Short story
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. A long poem/short rhyming story.
    by Envy the Sin 300 words, 3 comments, on Oct 22 7:41 PM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Horror, Murder, Tragedy
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Was I Ever Normal…1 / Before it started when I was a little girl 2 / Who hadn’t seen what the world could do3 / To innocent bystanders
    by frostany 1100 words, 13 comments, on Nov 21 5:07 PM 2007. In Hurt , Life, Mental illness, Pain, Psychosis, Schizophrenia, Verse
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Thursday night, Stoned. Look up see the stars so many aways there till I am gone. Times paces people come go 4:20 on the beach smoke a bowl
    by TheRedPen 200 words, 10 comments, on Aug 12 3:09 AM 2008. In , Beat, First person, Love, Other, Poetry
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Error: Unable to find finalist item 217862, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  14. I watched as the little girl smiled over at me in the corner of the room, her long black hair hiding half of a round, cherubish face smudge
    by Whispers 1200 words, 3 comments, on Oct 27 3:47 PM 2008. In Bipolar disorder, Dark, Depression, Family, Teen
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  15. A contest entry. About a teenage girl with bipolar disorder.
    by Shimmerfairy 400 words, 2 comments, on Oct 26 5:32 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  16. Mary Alder sighed, shrugging her bag of groceries closer to her body. She was tired, ready to rest, but her apartment building was only a b
    by intoothandclaw 600 words, 8 comments, on Jun 25 3:29 AM 2008. In Dark, Death, Horror, Murder, Short story, Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Someday Hero. gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Question my dear...
    Is it okay if I use a picture AND a quote?

    -Lexie


    • Be.Your.Own.Hero
      October 26, 2008
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      Yes, my dear goat-sister You may mix and match options as much as you like.


      • Someday Hero. gold member
        October 26, 2008
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        Thank you, I hope to have entered something by the end of the day...or at least by tomorrows end.

  • Writing0Freedom
    October 26, 2008
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    what about a eating disorder which in a way is a mental thing?


  • Yeshua
    October 26, 2008
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    Kind of a spoiler...

    Hey... my entry is "he walked a fine line." It is one i wrote a while back, but it's perfect for this contest... Problem: If I tell you which option I used... it would kind of be a spoiler... so... umm... do I have to tell you which opt. I used?


  • moonwriter
    October 26, 2008
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    does our entry have to beautiful and touching? I have an MPD story, but it's not sweet and wonderful or anything like that.


    • Be.Your.Own.Hero
      October 26, 2008
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      Depends, what is it? Dark and horrifying, or funny and enlightening? You can enter either.


  • intoothandclaw
    October 26, 2008
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    Option I is... my entire body of work because that's what I am and what I do.

    Hard to decide what to enter...

    • Be.Your.Own.Hero
      October 26, 2008
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      Lol, good luck with that Try thinking of what you would say is your best work, or ask some of your friends for their opinions on your favourite pieces.

      • intoothandclaw
        October 26, 2008
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        Well, it's hard, because none of the stories is *about* a mentally ill person expressing themself in art, or *specifically* any of the prompts, exactly. I have serial killer stories, drug use stories (but not drug *abuse*)...


        • Be.Your.Own.Hero
          October 26, 2008
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          I'll accept psychopathic serial killers As long as it's crazy it's welcome here!

          • intoothandclaw
            October 26, 2008
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            Done. Hope that's what you were looking for. If you like Crazy People Art, though, I have to recommend my own work in general, both here and on AllPoetry. I vent a whole lot through writing.


  • Friesian
    October 26, 2008
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    wow!

    This sums me up in a nutshell! (I.) A mentally ill person who expresses their thoughts through art [Brownie Points] - I have bipolar, OCD, and depression, and I express myself through Art (writing) I am def. entering!

    • Be.Your.Own.Hero
      October 26, 2008
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      Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Wait - you're bipolar? Cool! I know someone who's bipolar now! *high fives you*

      You have depression? Awwww!

      Ria: -_- And yet Princess is crazier. What kind of world are we living in?

      *ahem* I look forward to your entry


  • moonwriter
    October 27, 2008
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    how many times can we enter?


  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    October 27, 2008
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    *has add*

    Lol, yay shiny If you give me a shiny trophy, I can stare at it for a while


  • PeachesNscreaM-rawr
    October 28, 2008
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    A teen who has ADD! OH PICK ME PLEASE! I AM ONE! O__o hehe.


  • Envy the Sin
    November 2, 2008
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    3 questions:

    1)I have a poem about Vampirism;

    2)I have a poem about a man who has been talking to monsters;

    3)I have a short story poem about a man out for revenge;

    Do any of those count? And if not Can I just enter them because they sound good for a contest about mental issues.

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