Halloween Thrillers!!

In the spirit of the approaching All Hallow's Eve i want creeptastic thrillers!

Not too much gore please- i want to jump out of my seat not look away from the screen squemishly (i don't want a remake of the texas chainsaw massacre). i don't mind people being killed but don't make it just about people being killed (or tortured to death like in Saw)

i want to be scared! Entice me! Terrify me! i want to feel chills go up my spine like there's a serial killer stood right behind me!

It can be any sort of scary story- monsters of a mythical kind or humans who are monsters!

the keywords here are EERIE and CREEPY

Prewrites are allowed, but read the criteria CAREFULLY!

In the spirit of the contest I am not going to read any of the stories until Halloween itself- when the contest ends
(yes, I have nothing better to do on halloween- it's not as big over in england )

i want doors creaking, haunted houses, witches, vampires, werewolves and pyschopaths are welcome!

basic rules:
no sticky caps
swearing is allowed but there is over 40,000 words in the english language- so not in every line please! and were appropriate- i don't want to hear a five year old telling the monsters under the bed to fuck off.
no gay/lesbian please- nothing against it, just don't want to read it. In fact no erotica, full-stop.
keep it under 3,000? too long and i might just give up.


remember- you have until halloween. and everything's possible on halloween. *Mwah-hah-hah-ha-Mwah-ha-ha-er, too much? thought so*

happy halloween...

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    thanks for entering everyone! there was so many great entries that i had to increase the honourable mentions!

Contest Winners

  1. I was walking down the white hall of the hospital, pushing a small cart filled with food-trays. My volunteer badge clanked constantly against the plastic handles I pushed. There was nobody else in the hallway. It felt dreadfu
    by bananajar 400 words, 2 comments, on Oct 20 6:22 PM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by RxxSpiritWolfxxJ 1300 words, 11 comments, on Oct 18 6:57 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Halloween, Supernatural, Young adult
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by MoonRoseWolf 1300 words, 10 comments, on Feb 29 6:08 AM 2008. In Horror, Other, Paranormal, Short story, Starting idea
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. MIRROR, MIRROR, ON THE WALL /A tale to REFLECT upon...A little..."LIGHT" reading...if you find...The TIME! Have fun!
    by Gary Alexander 1400 words, 144 comments, on Feb 18 7:32 AM 2008. In Horror, Science fiction
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Bill Kurtz escapes to the museum every Halloween to avoid the weirdos. Only this time the paintings seem to pull him in more than usual.
    by tonialoise 1200 words, 24 comments, on Oct 30 7:28 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Horror, Third person
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Those puny insects... insolent fools! All of them! They don’t know what’s coming for them. Yes, yes, definitely! I’ll squash them like the
    by Peachy 1100 words, 14 comments, on Sep 20 2:53 AM 2008. In Contest, Crime, Dark, Murder, Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Short, suspenceful write I had to do for an English project. ^.^ Very Edgar Allen Poe-ish. Lol.
    by RunningFromReality 2000 words, 9 comments, on Oct 28 5:26 PM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Love, Other, Short story, Suspense
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Celestial Rose
    October 20, 2008
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    Umm..

    Does it have to be related to Halloween?


    • Dreama
      October 21, 2008
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      it doesn't technically have to be related to halloween, as long as it scares me/makes me jump/wateva.


  • RunningFromReality
    October 28, 2008
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    My entry may not seem very gory/creepy/scary and it has a 'happy' ending...but it messes with your head (as does the main character's) so I hope it still fits for your contest. ^.^ If not, than I will not be offended if you DQ mine. >.<


  • RunningFromReality
    November 3, 2008
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    Thank you so much for HM!! and Congrats to the other winners! ^^