Ok! I am no longer a novice doing their first contest! I have discovered that running contests is the best, and i also love being able to give good writers the rewards they deserve.
Soooo, this time it's all about GOLD! Gold in a contest is great but some people (like me) have not yet won a gold, and some may just want another, which is fine too. So i want you to enter a story that can be new or prewritten that you think deserves the gold, and because of this gold is the only award up for grabs. However there are a few rules...
Well you didn't think it was going to be that easy did you? The rules are these:
RULES:
No Bashing of any sort
No swearing
No Erotica or Adult
No TaLkInG lIkE tHiS
So actually the rules aren't that hard to follow!
I will comment on all entries.
You can have any genre.
But most importantly have fun!
Hope you enter!
OK, I know i said there was just going to be gold, but there are way to many good stories in here to only give one award, there are also going to be 10 honorable mentions!
Soooo, this time it's all about GOLD! Gold in a contest is great but some people (like me) have not yet won a gold, and some may just want another, which is fine too. So i want you to enter a story that can be new or prewritten that you think deserves the gold, and because of this gold is the only award up for grabs. However there are a few rules...
Well you didn't think it was going to be that easy did you? The rules are these:
RULES:
No Bashing of any sort
No swearing
No Erotica or Adult
No TaLkInG lIkE tHiS
So actually the rules aren't that hard to follow!
I will comment on all entries.
You can have any genre.
But most importantly have fun!
Hope you enter!
OK, I know i said there was just going to be gold, but there are way to many good stories in here to only give one award, there are also going to be 10 honorable mentions!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 150, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Phew, sorry that I closed this contest early but I was very tired and I had picked my winners. Thankyou so much to everyone who entered and this decision was far from easy. But after a long long think and rereading ALL of the entries I decided that the overall winner had to be "Would I Say Yes". Thankyou so much again and congratulations to our gold winner and the 10 honourable mentions. Look out for another contest by me coming soon!
Contest Winners
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"Jet, I’m leaving now. Yes, yes I know. Alright I get it." Marcie snapped her cell phone shut and through it into her Louis Vitton bag. She tugged at her t-shirt then got into her car. The Volvo’s leather seat was cold on her• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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A highflying adventure of goosely proportions!by tonialoise 4200 words, 25 comments, on Aug 22 10:09 PM 2008. In Adventure, Fantasy, Fiction, Humor, Pirates, Science fiction
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Trust me my friend this is one story you don't want to miss. The story I'm about to tell you happened more than thirty years ago and yet I remember it like it was yesterday. I lived in the country on the outskirts of a smallby Brian Balzer 5600 words, 29 comments, on Oct 13 10:59 AM 2008. In Childrens, First person, Short story
Honorable mention
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THE SPECIAL ONES1
by Bernice DeLucchi 1400 words, 14 comments, on Oct 14 3:49 AM 2008. In Dark fiction Honorable mention
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by Envy the Sin 100 words, 4 comments, on May 27 6:59 AM 2008. In Clock, Onomatopoeia, Other, Poem, Poetry, Time Honorable mention
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Daisy is dead, a night out had an unhappy ending, and she knows Nicks blaming himself- whats a girl to do?by Dreama 2000 words, 3 comments, on May 15 2:45 PM 2008. In First person, Inspirational, Short story Honorable mention
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BLOSSOM IN THE DUST1
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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by elemental angel 700 words, 4 comments, on Oct 5 6:37 AM 2008. In Childrens• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A story I worked on for two years. Original, and very unique.
But, nobody wants to read it, because it's long...
by SaitoKojima 10500 words, 50 comments, on Sep 23 7:56 AM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hellish, primitive and all of this I observed at a glance. I’m not exactly sure what I observed but it was an allusion to something. I was sitting in the depths of Manhattan on the stone steps in-front of the IPod Store. In-fby williamfmorgan 400 words, 4 comments, on Oct 10 9:19 AM 2008. In Creative non-fiction, Humor, More• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by moonwriter 1000 words, 38 comments, on Jun 29 5:09 PM 2008. In Beach, Fiction, First person, Love, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Aeryn woke up to bright sunlight flooding into her room. The silvery walls of her bedroom seemed illuminated as she searched the room, tryiby ice wolf 1000 words, 18 comments, on Sep 22 4:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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After all, he pondered as his victims unknowingly rode towards their fate, Isn't that what separates us from the animals? And that was indby MoonRoseWolf 2700 words, 110 comments, on Aug 22 10:09 AM 2007. In Dark, Horror, Novel, Werewolves
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Irhal and Maeli meet a young noble along the road, and travel with him to a grand tournament.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Welcome to the Circusby Lady Nightshade 1200 words, 1 comment, on Oct 14 1:11 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, Inspirational, Murder, Mystery• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He stood across the street, watching her as he had for so many days. He put his hands into the pockets of his black pants, his white dress• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Eddie 4000 words, 80 comments, on Sep 14 11:24 AM 2008. In Fiction, First person, Love, Nuke, Romance, Tisaumi, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by perfect paradox 1700 words, 26 comments, on Sep 1 2:18 PM 2008. In Prompt, Romance, Second person, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by MidniteRockers 900 words, 12 comments, on Oct 13 11:06 AM 2008. In Back-in-time, Crime, Dark, Fiction, Other, Scary, Science fiction, Spooky, Teenagers• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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On a cool, cloudy October day, an 18 year old woman was walking slowly towards her house on Crocker St. Her frigid blue eyes were glued toby Just Breathe. 700 words, 6 comments, on Sep 15 6:13 PM 2008. In Death, Fragment, Murder, Suspence• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was a morbid gamble every time he setfoot into her chamber just to see her eyes flutter open. Someday those eyes wouldn't open.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Im screaming and pounding on the inside
I just want an escape from this lifeby xoxKokaygirlxox 200 words, 6 comments, on Sep 20 4:35 PM 2008. In• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The drone of the ocean's waves brushing the shore woke me. My head felt thick and fuzzy, like my thoughts were swimming in molasses. Thinkiby amanda vampiress 1500 words, 69 comments, on Sep 5 8:19 PM 2008. In Horror, Mystery, Paranormal, Short story, Werewolves• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In a system of dead intelligence, chaos is always in the mix. Though to say that the government is dense would be untrue, they are very ingby KristyBrainsikk 200 words, 2 comments, on Oct 15 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Envy the Sin 100 words, 2 comments, on Oct 17 11:36 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A long rant about our society
!by Much-Dipstick 1500 words, 31 comments, on Sep 20 1:17 PM 2008. In Contest, Hopeful, Society, Song• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In loving memory of Jeys Endleton1
by Much-Dipstick 1600 words, 77 comments, on Aug 8 7:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Reflections of a long car journey. Just the thoughts in my mind as they came. Not particularly edited.
by Much-Dipstick 600 words, 23 comments, on Sep 1 12:22 PM 2008. In Descriptions, Part rant, Personal, Thoughts, Unorganised• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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A car-crash, an explosion, and some explanations. Plus, for the first time in recent memory, Editing!by Ssmm 900 words, 6 comments, on Oct 6 9:29 PM 2008
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by Much-Dipstick 2100 words, 14 comments, on Sep 24 5:02 AM 2008. In Death, First person, Friendship, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He watches with tears in his eyes as his father is murdered. His dad dances a twisted dance of death as he is whipped around like a rag doll under the impact of the bullets. He hides behind a dumpster, paralyzed with fear. Thby urbanronin88 600 words, 8 comments, on Aug 12 2:17 PM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Drama, Third person, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Can you add a poem?
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Sure, I love poems!
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How many times is each person allowed to enter?
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As many times as you want
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Aww nuggets. I would enter one of my very bestest ones, but it has like two swear words.
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Well just change the swear words to something like sugar or flip!
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Hey Neolittlefish,
I appreciate your comment on my Trick Or Treat?! story. I wanted to let you know that I made some revisions. I corrected more of the spelling and changed paragraphs where the speakers changed. I also added a rich text effect in a coulple of places. Thought I'd let you know.
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Great, I like it when people make an effort. Your on the finalist list anyway!
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