Make me cry T.T

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 10, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 115, Silver: 65, Bronze: 55, Honorable mention: 4 people
• Final notes:
  Thanks for entering guys, and sorry about how long it took, and sorry again for not commenting on all of them like i said i would...oog length limit next time...
  Thanks again

Contest Winners

1. Just Four Words

   by gezza 900 words, 19 comments, on Jul 6 7:51 AM 2008. In Emotional, Sad
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Twisted

   I'm not a bad boy.
   So why are you crying?

   by cole3313 300 words, 30 comments, on Sep 25 4:26 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Strange, Weird
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Thank You For Shopping At...

   Everyone is safe inside a department store--until the lights go out.

   by Matthew-Maldonado 3400 words, 28 comments, on Jun 4 5:52 PM 2008. In Dark, Horror, Other, Strange, Weird
   Bronze trophy winner

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4. If I Die Now, What Will I Miss?

   by beezy92 500 words, 42 comments, on Dec 15 6:31 PM 2007. In , Death, Diseases, Fiction, First person, Young adult
   Honorable mention

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5. Till Death Do Bind Us

   I stared down at the small mound of dirt that served as a shallow grave, before my feet. 1 / "1942-1961."2 / The small numbers were etched

   by Seshat Kitty 2400 words, 43 comments, on Jun 13 5:06 AM 2008. In Death, Hope, Love, Romance, Sad, Short story
   Honorable mention

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6. Andrew

   I had loved Andrew my whole life it seemed. We met in college my freshmen year. He was a junior,and he had just transferred to KU from the

   by crosscountry07 1400 words, 16 comments, on Oct 23 3:14 PM 2007. In Love
   Honorable mention

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7. Never Again

   Never again1 / Never again will we be broken / Our voices silenced by the pain / Never again our cries unspoken / Our tears washed away by

   by Writing0Freedom 6100 words, 20 comments, on Jul 20 2:52 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

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Entries [19]

• View from an Outsider

  by Eddie 4000 words, 80 comments, on Sep 14 11:24 AM 2008. In Fiction, First person, Love, Nuke, Romance, Tisaumi, Young adult

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• Battle Field

  I was too weak to drive away from the field. My mother had followed me, and now was giving me a ride home. I looked out the window at the long barn that had been used as a hospital during the battle, and the brown and yellow

  by Thorn-on-the-Rose 400 words, 13 comments, on Sep 3 3:59 PM 2008. In Death, Pain, Personal(in a way), Tragedy

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• The Human Fruit

  It was a morbid gamble every time he setfoot into her chamber just to see her eyes flutter open. Someday those eyes wouldn't open.

  by Ghost of a Siren 6200 words, 22 comments, on Sep 1 1:05 AM 2008. In Dark, Romance, Sad

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• Different

  by Just Breathe. 1000 words, 11 comments, on Feb 14 11:33 PM 2008. In Depression, Fanfiction, Naruto, Sad

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• Cameron Makes Nine

  An introduction is the most engaging portion of a conversation. It is full of mystery, expectation, and excitement. It can be between two enemies about to engage in debate or it can be the introduction of two lovers at the be

  by clichedriven 1700 words, 1 comment, on Sep 20 2:05 PM 2008

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• Uncharted Streets

  “I’m just gonna go for a walk.”1 / Those were the last words that Sean said to his roommate. He loved to go on walks. Whether they were on

  by clichedriven 1700 words, 3 comments, on Apr 9 4:01 PM 2008

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• Unforgettable

  My footsteps quickened on the wet, paved concrete as the rain persisted in even heavier and longer bursts than before. My breath blew out i

  by Seshat Kitty 2900 words, 11 comments, on Jul 15 8:42 AM 2008. In Death, Drama, Life, Love, Romance, Sad

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• Other side of the Wall

  It is always cruel to be trapped in an earthquake debris, and it definitely doesn't help if you are a deaf-mute...(edited to make it suitab

  by Kirin 900 words, 46 comments, on Dec 7 1:50 AM 2008. In Death, First person, Horror, Life, Pain, Sad, Short story, Tragedy

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• Mopy Milly

  Milly Smith sat there on the swings. Sadly looking down at the ground. The other children ran arround and played, but she ignored them.1 / "Hey, mopy Milly, where's your hankey? Why don't you

  by Elvenfairy 1400 words, 2 comments, on Feb 15 11:26 AM 2008. In Child abuse, Depression, Sad

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• Exchange Places

  I am Addie. My soul-sister: Glaw. I love her. I would do anything for her. And that's what I did.

  by Much-Dipstick 2100 words, 17 comments, on Jul 7 1:43 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Love, Romance

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• Losing Control

  by Ambrea 1500 words, 4 comments, on Oct 5 9:21 PM 2008. In Adult, Crime, Dark, First person, Personal

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• ... And you bid this mortal world adieu! (Poetry)

  by Kartz 100 words, 5 comments, on Oct 7 1:11 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Death, Depression, Life, Love, Pain, Poem, Poetry, Sad

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Comments

• By me, right now

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• Writing0Freedom
  October 1, 2008
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  can it just be really sad throughout the entire story? Can it be 6000 words if it fits and is full of emotion?
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    MoraKpon
    October 1, 2008
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    um...sure...
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  KitterBean
  October 1, 2008
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  ooohhh...really great contest! I don't have anything to write, but great!
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    MoraKpon
    October 1, 2008
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    lol thanks
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  Noisome.
  October 1, 2008
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  One entry only?
  Cause I have a sad one, but I'd love to write a new piece and develop some new characters.
  I'm also a character lover...
  
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    MoraKpon
    October 2, 2008
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    i unchecked one entry only xD so go ahead..but this'll sure take a while...soo many stories lol
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      Noisome.
      October 2, 2008
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      You're my hero!
      *bows*