poetry

ok
so heres the deal, this is my first contest.
this contest is about art, i love poetry, love it love it love it.
so you will give me any poem, that you deem worthy(lol)


rules (whats wrong? there arent that many...)

1. It has to be more than 2 stanzas

2. It doesnt have to rhyme, but it can

3. brownie points if it has to do with these pictures:
FIRE DANCE: http://cosmosue.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Dance-68883302
DANCE: http://anisprodigy.deviantart.com/art/Dance-32984779
DANCE: http://naturalborncreative.deviantart.com/art/Dance-50799833


4. It can be about anything, even fish, I dont care, as long as its good.

5. ****THE MOST IMPORTANT***** no adult stuffs peas and carrots? i dont care if it is violent, but nothing inappropriate, mmmmk? please im only 15

6.*****OK, I LIED, THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT!!!*****
pleas put ur username in the authors notes and what you would do if you had a random banana



***!!!this is the chance to revive the lost art of poetry!!!***

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on October 8, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 100
• Final notes:
  good job to everyone! this was hhhaaarrrddd....
  you guys did really really well.
  snaps and congrats to all!!!
  Alyana

Contest Winners

1. Soldiers of La Vida Loca

   Tribute to those still running 1
   

   by Writing0Freedom 300 words, 5 comments, on Sep 28 6:45 PM 2008
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Mirrors

   by lunarserenityrose 100 words, 5 comments, on Sep 29 4:02 PM 2008. In Just my perspeption of what eye, Other, Young adult
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [25]

• ☺ Mother ☺

  Mother,
  When will I stop feeling bitter when I hear that word?
  When will tears wash my cheeks?

  by Be.Your.Own.Hero 200 words, 49 comments, on Feb 26 1:08 PM

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• Twisted

  I'm not a bad boy.
  So why are you crying?

  by cole3313 300 words, 30 comments, on Sep 25 4:26 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Strange, Weird

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Am I Cute Or What?

  A poem for my nephews
  

  by tonialoise 200 words, 10 comments, on Aug 21 1:13 AM 2008. In Brothers, Life, Poem

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Gorilla and The Banana

  A poem about prosumer mentality. Consumers don't always lose, if they play their cards right.

  by angellove 200 words, 2 comments, on Sep 27 2:51 PM 2008. In , Contest entry, Finance, Life, Poetry, Society, Strange, Weird

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Importance of Colors

  by Sgs 200 words, 13 comments, on Sep 21 1:11 PM 2008. In Depression, Family, Poetry, Sad, Tragedy

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Blue Jeans at Seventeen

  Do you remember1
  

  by Sgs 100 words, 5 comments, on Sep 4 12:23 PM 2008. In , Poetry

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• WIth Love

  by Sgs 100 words, 14 comments, on Sep 20 3:58 PM 2008. In , Love, Poetry

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• Forgotten

  by Just Breathe. 100 words, 8 comments, on Sep 27 11:00 PM 2008

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• empty

  by tonialoise 100 words, 9 comments, on Sep 18 1:29 AM 2008. In , Depression, Poem

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Death of a Broken Planet

  by robert davidson 200 words, 17 comments, on Sep 14 5:19 AM 2008. In , Life, Poem

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• the secret

  I have a secret
  That I keep to myself

  by Flaire Rain 200 words, 12 comments, on Sep 27 4:07 PM 2008. In Horror, Hurt.

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dance

  by detty 100 words, 1 comment, on Sep 28 11:43 AM 2008. In , Dance, Inspirational

  • Commented on by judge.
• Loving You

  by bakermiddle 100 words, 7 comments, on Nov 21 2:46 PM 2007. In Love, Poetry, Young adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Into Black

  Attempting to hold on tight1
  

  by Living.Disaster 100 words, 5 comments, on Sep 28 7:09 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Rain Dancer

  Masses of flesh and bone1
  

  by Raeyle 100 words, 6 comments, on Sep 29 10:28 AM 2008. In Poem, Poetry

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Inevitable Act

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 5 comments, on May 22 7:14 AM 2008. In , Crime, Dark, Horror, Subliminal point of life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Your Hidden Secret

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 5 comments, on May 24 10:41 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Lies

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• 5 Haiku about Love and Life

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 2 comments, on May 24 10:52 AM 2008. In Dark, Life, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Tick - Tock: the Clock

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 4 comments, on May 27 6:59 AM 2008. In Clock, Onomatopoeia, Other, Poem, Poetry, Time

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• Bang (Hit the Wall)

  by Envy the Sin 200 words, 7 comments, on May 28 7:07 AM 2008. In Anti-gov, Crime, Dark, Horror, War

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• The Longing

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 2 comments, on Jun 9 10:49 AM 2008. In , Love, Romance

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• One Night, One Fight.

  by Envy the Sin 200 words, 1 comment, on Jul 31 11:14 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Other

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• Self-Destruction

  by Envy the Sin 100 words, 6 comments, on Sep 2 11:45 AM 2008. In , Dark, Other, Poetry

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Comments

• By me, right now

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  perfect paradox
  September 27, 2008
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  How many times can we submit? One, two, three?
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    Alyana
    September 27, 2008
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    however many times as you want, i dont mind a bit