Song Lyric contest

I love reading lyrics. I am a sucker for metaphorical basises in words, so aim high in the metaphor department for a better chance at winning. It's not a guarentee at winning, but it will give you a better chance.

I was kind of dissatisfied with Cameron William's winners - that was why I started this contest. Cameron's winners weren't bad, but some of the other writers who did not place were simply the better writers.

You can put in as many entries as you please. Please note that if you wish to remain anonymous - and if you know me and I know you - you should use the default backgrounds and colors, for I am already pretty knowledgable of customized backgrounds and who they belong to.

Please leave heavy swear words ("F"s, "S"s, "P"s, etc.) out of the picture. Swear words do nothing to a song except make it inappropriate for kids. I do not consider "hell" a swear, it's a curse. I also don't like suggestive (in the sexual sense) lyrics, so leave those out as well.

It can be any genre: love, war, dark, spiritual
- anything not filled with swear words or suggestive lyrics. I appreciate if you point out the verses, choruses and bridges, etc., but are not required.

I probably should tell everyone entering this contest that I heavily dislike mainstream music lyrics, just to be fair - most of them are cliche and overused lines (the general idea of them, anyway).

Best of luck to you all.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 9, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Great work, all of you! It was a thrill to see all of your works portrayed so well. I am sorry I cannot award you all trophies and points - I can only offer such to the ones I found to be the best.

    But you were all good, so don't stop writing! I look forward to more great work in the future!

    1st Place: Nothing New Under the Sun
    2nd Place: This is a Revolution!
    3rd Place: Lightbulbs

    Honorable Mentions:
    I Am Alive
    My Beautiful Star
    Without a Fight
    Light of Me

Contest Winners

  1. Verse one: / All this technology, / It's all just rehashes / Of old, used concepts; / ideas pre-perceived. / They insist that it's new, / But don't be deceived. 1 / Pre-chorus:
    by DoozerDan 200 words, 19 comments, on May 27 9:09 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Thought provoking
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Raise up your fist for this generation's revolution!
    Cause, if we want to change it, we're the ones that gotta do it.
    Ain't nobody gonn
    by Six-Feet-Underwater 300 words, 26 comments, on Oct 7 9:15 PM 2008. In , Angst, Life, Other, Poem, Society, Teen, War, Weird
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Trying to see the good side of all of life's hard journeys.
    by lunarserenityrose 200 words, 2 comments, on Sep 29 4:22 PM 2008. In , First person, Inspirational
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. This is not a story - Its a song!!!
    by NekoFelix 300 words, 3 comments, on Sep 26 6:02 PM 2008. In Christian, First person, Love, Other, Song
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. As I stare into the midnight sky,1 / I pull you closer, I can't deny.2 / This feeling I have when I'm with you,3 / Is more than great a
    by Brightest 200 words, 20 comments, on May 13 12:54 PM 2008
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. by DoozerDan 200 words, 9 comments, on Aug 7 9:04 PM 2008. In , Lyrics
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Once again/Amazement fills my eyes,
    My mind,My heart,my soul.
    by Raeyle 200 words, 3 comments, on Sep 25 10:27 PM 2008. In , Love
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • NekoFelix
    October 9, 2008
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    Thanks so much for HM! ^^