Death

Ok, how are you? Good? That's good... Anyway, I like murder and death... stories that is ... So, I give you the challenge of writing a murder story (or one that involves some kind of death) that gives me chills.

Need inspiration? Just ask and I will give you some kind of prompt (eg, a picture or a quote, ect.) or try reading some of my murder stories *hint hint* (12 Kookaburra Court and Why are my favourites)

Ok so rules...

1. Word limit - Keep 'em shortish, perhaps under 1000 words?

2. Erotica - Some, perhaps not much as I am 14 and won't be able to read them...

3. Swearing - Again 14 so keep it to a minimum

4. Gore - Some, but don't go overboard (ie, Texas Chainsaw Masacre - Too far)

5. Make it original!!!

6. I will read and comment on them all

and

7. Have fun!

Oh and yer this is my first contest so yer I don't have many points... sorry

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on October 21, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 100
• Final notes:
  Contest judged by moderator

Contest Winners

1. Snow White; The true story

   Once upon a time there were seven dwarfs. Bashful, Doc, Dopey, Grumpy, Happy, Sleepy, and Sneezy. They worked in old diamond mines near the

   by Thorn-on-the-Rose 800 words, 72 comments, on Sep 1 6:02 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Death, Fairy tale, Fiction, Snow white, Weird
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Subito Morendo No. 7

   A conductor sees fit to use an entire city as his orchestra.

   by Matthew-Maldonado 2400 words, 83 comments, on Apr 28 4:24 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Horror, Sad, Science fiction, Society, Strange
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Every Rose Has Its Thorns

   Two women, one man and a lot of roses...

   by tallblondie 2400 words, 85 comments, on Jun 11 10:27 PM 2008. In Fiction, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
   Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [16]

• Feral Nights Part 1

  They slapped the handcuffs on her and pushed her head down so she wouldn't bump in on the door frame. It's not the first time she'd been i

  by tonialoise 1100 words, 58 comments, on Sep 6 12:44 PM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, Horror, Thrid person, Werewolf

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• Meat...

  I woke up yesterday with a terrible feeling in my stomach. I was hungry, starved, deprived of food. My stomach growled and shots of pain ra

  by cole3313 1200 words, 17 comments, on Sep 6 1:22 PM 2008. In First person, Gore., Horror, Murder, Pain, Weird

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• Immanuel

  by Boondock Saint 700 words, 5 comments, on Jul 21 3:02 PM 2008. In Dark, Fiction, First person, Horror, Young adult

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• Lies in the Mind

  He’s hiding in the recesses of a hallowed, decaying oak tree. Nervous and bouncing on the heels of his feet, he rocked back and forth. Taking in the sting of the chilly air, he looked around for a sign of her.

  by imagist 500 words, 7 comments, on Jul 2 7:11 PM 2008

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• A Game of Chance

  by EtherealButterfly 2700 words, 27 comments, on Feb 15 1:18 AM 2007

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• Interrupted Dream

  Hi everyone. My name is Leo Smith and I am a dreamer. 1
  

  by XVelveTxRaiNxDropSx 600 words, 2 comments, on Aug 16 7:34 AM 2008. In First person, Heartlessness, Inspirational, Love, Touching

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• By The Pricking of My Thumbs

  When the clock on the wall struck twelve-o’-clock, just before Mrs. Hutchins took lunch, there were twenty-one people in the room. Mrs. Hutchins, of course, whose blue eyes still sparkled with a vigor and youth most women si

  by saxmastadrew 1400 words, 2 comments, on Jul 25 1:16 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark

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• The Sweet Sound (il dolce suono)

  Ah, the sweet sound of your voice swells against my soul, so strikingly beautiful it chills me. It is not an audible voice, but a voice I h

  by Ghost of a Siren 500 words, 9 comments, on Aug 10 6:23 AM 2008. In , Dark, Depression, Romance, Tragedy

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• Awake

  It was on the news. No voice-overs. No sound bites. No captions or news scrolls. Just footage.1
  

  by toolenduso 800 words, 8 comments, on Sep 14 12:51 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Fiction

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• Monster

  I can't take it anymore, there are too many people!1
  

  by Peachy 1100 words, 5 comments, on Sep 2 2:22 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Death, Murder, Tragedy

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• Life Of A Self-Cannibal

  The bottle glistened as it sailed through the air, and fell into the waves with a small, hollow splash. I always thought that messages sent

  by xxxWhisper-Sorrowxxx 600 words, 11 comments, on Jun 23 12:12 PM 2007. In Dark, Death, Fiction, First person, Horror, Life, Pain, Short

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• In The Eye Of The Beholder

  A brief look into a physcotic killers mind.

  by demon.at.heart 800 words, on Sep 19 7:49 AM 2008. In Depression, Horror

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Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  Andy Stephenson
  September 6, 2008
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  Hi

  I don't have a murder story that short, can you accept closer to 2,000?
  
  Andy
• • 
    GattonDweller
    September 6, 2008
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    Yer that's fine just try not to go too wild and crazy
• 
  cole3313
  September 7, 2008
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  Um this is a little longer than you wanted its 1200 plus it may be a little to gory. But I'm 15 so it shouldnt be to bad... Anyway if you don't think I should have my story in your contest just remove it. I wont mind. =] My story is called Meat.