Hypnotize me!

My second contest. Hope it goes ok.

What I want you to do:
I want you to write me a story that I will read over and over. It should get me hooked and never let go. It can be about anything. Your peice can be a story, a poem, lyrics, ect. If you want to know what genres I like message me.

Rules:

1. No erotica!
2. No text talk or things LiKe ThIs
3. only use foul languge when nessesary. You don't need to use the F word in every paragraph.
4. no less then 150 words.
5. Don't write the longest story in the world. I won't read it if it is REALLY long.
6. HAVE FUN!!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 27
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 30, Bronze: 15, Honorable mention: 10 people
  • Final notes:
    this contest was more of an opinion judging. There is no way I could judge this wrong. I had david help me because there was ALOT of stories and his opinion had a say in the judging. The 10 stories after the three first finalists are not in order how I liked them I just put them in honorable winners. Thanx to everyone who entered and sorry if I didn't comment on ur story. I just wanted to get it over with before more stories were entered. Thanx to everyone again. loved the stories!

    ,
    Chey-Bear

Contest Winners

  1. A BRIEF EXISTANCE - AGAIN1 / Words have power. Whoever said: / ‘Sticks and stones may break my bones, / but words will never hurt me,’ was
    by Tomereader 700 words, 13 comments, on Jun 20 12:39 PM. In Death, Fantasy, First person, Life, Short story
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by Tiger-Lily 3400 words, 130 comments, on May 29 6:48 PM. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Romance, Young adult
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Sometimes its the little things you don't know about that bother you the most.
    by WritersEffigy 3600 words, 41 comments, on Jun 16 1:20 AM. In Fantasy, Romance, Werewolves
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Love means giving up your own desires for their well-being.
    by moonwriter 1500 words, 30 comments, on Jun 17 3:27 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. They say you see your whole life again just before you die. Mine had better hurry up, I have about half a second left.
    by slashinguk 800 words, 137 comments, on Dec 1 4:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, First person
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Sometimes girls Don't Understand girls
    by Sanchara 400 words, 8 comments, on Jul 16 5:53 PM. In Dark, Death, Depression, Drugs, First person, Lesbian, Life, Love, Teen
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. A wrinkled green freak in a top hat reveals the horrible and beautiful truth of the world to two downtrodden kids.
    by Matthew-Maldonado 10800 words, 34 comments, on Aug 27 1:03 AM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Fantasy, Horror, Novel, Personal, Science fiction
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Diane Waltridge flipped over the page of the magazine idly as she relaxed by the warm fire. Sighing contentedly, she wriggled her toes acro
    by Sekhmet Kitty 1800 words, 10 comments, on Jul 11 11:18 AM. In Death, Life, Love, Sad, Short story, Spiritual
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. by Audric Beaumont 1700 words, 55 comments, on Dec 6 5:46 PM 2006. In Dark, Fiction, Horror, Love, Murder, Romance, Tragedy, Vampires, Young adult
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. by FallenShade 800 words, 9 comments, on Mar 5 12:41 AM. In Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Young adult
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. He burst through the door and ran and ran. His turquoise eyes gleaming in the moonlight. He clutched his hand towards his stomach; he pulled it away from him and stared at the blood that stained the sleeve of his sweater. A c
    by Cheerful-Panda 1000 words, 5 comments, on Jan 14 7:07 PM. In Drama, Other, Sad
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Stryke Greeters member
    July 18
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    No pre-writes allowed?


    • Darkhearted
      July 18
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      well it matters on the story u r entering. it can't have been in other contests

  • Oh seriously, can't be in other contests?


    • Darkhearted
      July 18
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      now they can be in other contests I really don't feel like dealing with it all right now... just write something extremely good! please

      chey-bear


  • Elmeresia
    July 18
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    I'm confused.... I can't enter a pre-written? You never said that.... *confused look*

  • HYpnotize!


  • Yi Yin
    July 26
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    my story says that it is around 144 words on storywrite wordcount, but on the word wordcount, it's more that 150... hope you take that under consideration, when you read mine...

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