Okay, this is a quickie.
I was having trouble at certain parts of storywriting, and one of the main areas is a kiss scene.
What I want, basically, is a small scene, just a kiss scene. Nothing else. You may add a little info on who/how/where/when/why, but I only want to see how you'd write one, for the hell of inspiration.
Just give me your best kiss scene! I don't care if it was a part of a story you wrote. Just give me that part of the scene!
There are options here though:
- Passionate kiss scene (only kissing, no extreme making out)
- Involuntary (eg. your ex getting too friendly againts your will)*
- First kiss (different from Passionate, as this is something the character has never felt before)**
- Peck (describe to me the chemistry here more than the kiss itself)
- Near kiss (about to happen, but then at the last second, something happens)***
* indicates the amount of brownie points you get.
That's it. Word limit would have to be 500 words. It is only one scene, after all.
Since I've told you what I want, there's little need to indicate that:
- No erotica
- No gay/les/bi
- No cussing (why would you cuss in a scene like this?)
- No chat-speak/cApS typing, any of that stuff
- Grammar must be sane enough for me to understand (means no usage of ?! or !!!)
- Put option details in the Author Notes. No mix-N-match.
- Scenes only!
- Word limit 500 words
Enter as many times as you like!
Good Luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 23
- Rewards: Gold: 150, Silver: 100, Bronze: 30
- Final notes: I had a lot of awesome entries in here! And yes, all of you guys did help me get over this block in my way. I even wrote my own first kiss scene.
Congrats to the winners. I had serious trouble deciding and then based it off how many sparks I felt between the characters. It wasn't all action either. ^_^
Contest Winners
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by Immortal Obscurity 400 words, 7 comments, on Jul 5 6:55 PM. In , Love, Other, Young adult
Gold trophy winner
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by Prestige 400 words, 3 comments, on Jul 31 6:09 PM. In Fiction, Romance, Young adult
Silver trophy winner
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He threw his weight against me and I was trapped between him and the wall behind me. His lips covered mine, his hands pressing my wrists sby jessicakristine 200 words, 8 comments, on Jul 15 12:20 AM. In , First person, Love, Romance
Bronze trophy winner
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Throwing her arms up in frustration, Meghan Thomas glared at the boy across from her, finding the blank expression on his face to be highly• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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In my head everyone around me would have wings, fly away and I would be alone with him.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Kissing scene! ^_^by KalineReine 500 words, 15 comments, on Jul 5 5:28 PM. In , Fanfiction, First kiss, Humor, Love, Naruto, Romance, Sad, Teen• Commented on by judge.
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It is gentle, but captivating, a mixture of sweet root-bear and salty ocean water. Mesmerized lips press together time after time, transporby moonwriter 100 words, 5 comments, on Jul 5 5:07 PM. In• Commented on by judge.
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She's looking at me again. Her perfect eyes gazing deep into mine. Her perfect lips inviting me to kiss them.by Redtearstains 200 words, 7 comments, on Jul 5 5:20 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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by magicmonster00M 200 words, 3 comments, on Jul 12 1:15 PM. In Dark, Fiction, Love, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge.
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I sighed as I sat up on his couch and took the Mac and Cheese from his hand.1by poetry is soul 200 words, 1 comment, on Jul 30 10:22 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Sloan's strokes had never ceased. He had a gentle touch that said, everything will be alright, I'm here, and Rachel wanted to believe in that more than she had ever wanted anything in her entire life. She felt him move as hby NosferatuWoman 500 words, 4 comments, on Jul 30 5:26 AM• Commented on by judge.
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“Rachel,” he purred, “You look wonderful.” He strode forward to meet her and took her hands in his. The feel of his skin on hers was ele• Commented on by judge.
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I looked into the dark captivating eyes of the most hateful, most disagreeable man in the world. His eyes burned back at me with an equal a• Commented on by judge.
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The Stella and Adrian made their way over to the fountain. Adrian gently placed down Stella’s books, and stretched out along the side of thby vampirecutie669 500 words, 14 comments, on Jul 26 6:44 AM. In , Fantasy, Fiction, Inspirational, Love, Other, Romance• Commented on by judge.
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Twirling a curl around her finger lazily, Flynn tried her best to concentrate on the book laid out in front of her. When Noah had asked her on a study date, she had no idea that he literally meant there would be studying. An• Commented on by judge.
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i stare into your wide green eyes meeting the tint of my faded sky blue. The full moon's light illumimnated your soft pale face and my apoby Kiryuuofloveandhate 200 words, 1 comment, on Jul 25 7:12 PM. In• Commented on by judge.
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I could swear that he had attempted to grab my hand a few times, but I just wasn’t sure.by KayZee 300 words, 2 comments, on Jul 21 7:14 PM. In Boyfriend, Cliche, Cute, First kiss, Kissing scene, Nonfiction, True story• Commented on by judge.
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As he looked into her eyes, azure like the shade of the sun barely breaking the horizon, he was entranced with her beauty, her everything. They stand quietly, holding each other like this, lost in each other’s loving glance,by Chase Bourdeaux 400 words, 8 comments, on Jul 14 7:39 PM. In Dissapointment, Fiction, Love, Romance• Commented on by judge.
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A funny little kiss scene... well near kiss scene for the 'Scene: The Kiss' contest.by livingstorywriter101 200 words, 4 comments, on Jul 12 1:05 AM. In Family, Fiction, First person, Fragment, Humor, Life, Love, Short story, Teen• Commented on by judge.
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For 'Scene: The Kiss' contest.by livingstorywriter101 300 words, 3 comments, on Jul 12 12:23 AM. In Drama, Fiction, First person, Life, Teen• Commented on by judge.
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It was just after accounts class. We were finishing off a problem - ahead of everyone else in class, at a triumphant and thrilled pace thatby Armaan 400 words, 3 comments, on Jul 9 1:51 PM. In• Commented on by judge.
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by CrazySouthernGirl 200 words, 11 comments, on Jul 9 1:42 PM. In , First person, Love, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge.
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“Clichés aside.” A familiar voice spoke behind us. “Let the girl go.”• Commented on by judge.
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3 chapters in the first one and three more in the second. Then five in the last chapter.by StarLightVampire23 200 words, 6 comments, on Jul 6 9:19 PM. In , Abuse, Death, Depression, Hate, Pain, Romance, Short story• Commented on by judge.
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Part of my retelling of the Greek myth of Hades and Persephone• Commented on by judge.
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''No gay/les/bi ''
GAMER! =o
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xD That's cause I need it for my story specifically.
No offense intended. Plus, this is a more or less PG contest. xD
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Mehh .-.
I also liked how you lifted a pic that has 'copyright' plastered all over it xD
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Damn it...I forgot about that...O__O Think I should change it, Mal.
*cringes, laughing*
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Damn, I have like the perfect PW!
I'll see if I can come up with another one...
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If it's a part of a story,then you can extract that bit out and post it as a new contest entry.
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Hi! Um so when will you read more of the stories? I have been to crazy to sleep! lol
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I would enter, but I am too busy.
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May we enter for more than one option?
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Sure, enter as many times as you like!
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Oh, no mix-n-match though. Keep options separate.
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so we can enter more than once but they have to be diffrent entries?
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Yes. You can even enter two diff stories under the same option. Just don't enter a story with two options.
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awesome! I have some kiss scences from other stories I've written
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I have sort of a funny/sweet/cute kiss scene and I don't know what catgory to put it in :/
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im nervous
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im scared
i hope i win but i thinc everyones is awesome
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woooooo! theres no stoppin you and me ill be lovin your love eternally ..... i had a Mariah Carey moment sorry
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hmm, this is interesting and i may enter but I have a dislike for one rule... I can understand how you DoNt WaNt THis, oR this!!!!!!!! But when you use "!?" that then it is a real thing used in writing. Whenever "!?" is used, then it is intended that the reader know that it is indeed a question but it was spoken in an emotional voice, such as surprise or startlement. Like is someones best friend slapped them and they went "What was that for?!" Now you know they were both startled and wondering what the purpose of the slap was...
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Note in most books, you'll never find ?!. There are many adjectives to describe this emotion.
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Can it go over the word limit a smidge ?
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Sure. few words over is no issue. Just don't go fifty words over or so. xD
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Heh, okay, thanks !
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