Enter your most emotional piece. I want to be able to put myself in the character's place and truly feel what they are feeling. If they're happy, make me feel it. If they're sad, make me want to cry along with them. It can truly be any emotion. Just make it good.
My comments will be honest opinions. All will be commented on. So enter away.
I don't care if it's fanfiction or original, but I only want stories (sorry).
So give me your most emotional pieces.
RULES:
No erotica, please.
Keep swearing to a minimum, please.
Nothing over 7,000 words.
My comments will be honest opinions. All will be commented on. So enter away.
I don't care if it's fanfiction or original, but I only want stories (sorry).
So give me your most emotional pieces.
RULES:
No erotica, please.
Keep swearing to a minimum, please.
Nothing over 7,000 words.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 15, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 8 people
- Final notes: Thanks to all who entered. Everyone wrote such amazing stories! The story that won gold brought me to tears. It was amazing.
Great job to all! Good luck in future contests!
Contest Winners
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by Forgotten Anomaly 2000 words, 57 comments, on Jun 26 10:49 PM 2008. In Death, Depression, Fiction, First person, Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Tragedy, Young adult
Gold trophy winner
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The final thoughts of a suicide bomber.by slashinguk 800 words, 193 comments, on Dec 1 4:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, First person
Bronze trophy winner
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by Tiger-Lily 3600 words, 149 comments, on May 29 6:48 PM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Romance, Young adult
Honorable mention
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Danny had a way with life, it was as if the world could do no wrong to him. Despite most determined efforts, no matter how hard it tried toby MelodiousDreaming 1100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 4 1:34 AM 2008. In Death, Personal, Tragedy Honorable mention
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If only the doctor had discovered a child instead of a tumor.by TheFemmeFatale 600 words, 9 comments, on Jun 23 2:24 AM 2008. In Death, Depression, Fiction, Love, Third person Honorable mention
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136. There were 136 tiles on the ceiling in the living room of my house. I had lost count twice, interest once, and a mix of the two on varby Midnight-Engaged 500 words, 55 comments, on Oct 7 7:01 PM 2007. In Inspirational, Teen Honorable mention
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by IxLovexElphiex 2000 words, 14 comments, on Mar 20 8:14 PM 2008. In Fiction, First person, Love, Romance, Young adult Honorable mention
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1I awake to the movement in the bed as he tries to sit up on the side of the bed. I wait with halted breath to see if he can stand up by hiby skye01 2000 words, 25 comments, on Nov 26 6:40 PM 2006. In First person, Inspirational, Love, Spiritual Honorable mention
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Zera's eyes began to well with tears as she stared at his picture. He had been so happy, so young, and so full of life. She began to sob un• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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They met under horrible circumstances and were pulled apart by the same circumstances.by xXSongxxofxxLifeXx 500 words, 7 comments, on Jun 25 4:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A boy who feels lost in the world ends it.by WritersEffigy 600 words, 42 comments, on May 27 10:11 PM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Drama, Suicide, Teen, Third person• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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For Trevor Deck. A full explanation will be in the author's notes section.by Nienna Calmcacil 800 words, 22 comments, on Jul 2 10:05 AM 2008. In A story in a poetic form., Love, Memory, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Her hair covers her face, black and long, casting shadows under her eyes. She walks the hallways with her head down and her eyes focused onby Hellcat Metal 700 words, 7 comments, on Apr 22 8:51 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Depression, Other, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by robert davidson 3000 words, 52 comments, on Dec 29 3:41 AM 2007. In Love, Short story, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The minute Kiara walked into her usual homeroom class, she knew something was out of the ordinary. The dark brown desks with the chairs con• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Noisome. 600 words, 30 comments, on May 18 4:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My breath was lost somewhere in the chilling air.by RealitysAStory 500 words, 4 comments, on May 14 7:46 PM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Death, Depression, Horror, Love, Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He’s hiding in the recesses of a hallowed, decaying oak tree. Nervous and bouncing on the heels of his feet, he rocked back and forth. Taking in the sting of the chilly air, he looked around for a sign of her.by imagist 500 words, 7 comments, on Jul 2 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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1 / I sit cross-legged my limbs melting into the dry powder. I watch the oncoming walls of water crash up onto shore only to perish in a hiby Writing0Freedom 1500 words, 6 comments, on Nov 2 8:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Living Death
It is a cold, autumn day. I stand there as I have every day since…since then. No words break the silence. The brisk wind wafts my curly blondby kidchameleon 1600 words, 28 comments, on Feb 16 5:40 PM 2006. In <200 lines, Depression, Fantasy, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An upper class teenage girl tries to over-come a monsterous disorder that threatens to ruin her whole life.by Doll Faise 3200 words, 6 comments, on Jan 7 9:08 PM 2008. In Death, Drama, Pain, Personal, Sad, Short story, Spiritual, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Psstt..
Are we limited to one entry here? Because I am having a hard time deciding between two pieces.. Either way, I'll enter. I just..have to pick. =o
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