This is my first contest so I decided to experiment a little bit. I will give you the first paragraph of the story and you can take it any way you please.
I will also add more points and maybe some more honorable mentions depending on how many people enter.
Rules
- swearing is allowed as long as it is not used excessively.
- It can be really long just as long as its not a novel and it keeps the readers interest the whole way through
-no sticky caps even though I have never seen any one use it
other than that have fun! =)
Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don't know anything, how could they know the story as to why. But I have to tell the story to someone, that's why I'm telling it to you.
Thats the paragraph I got it from and old story of mine but I thought it will be cool to see other people's versions.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 24
- Rewards: Gold: 160, Silver: 80, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you to everyone for entering my contest! Every entry was so good I found it extremly hard to judge the contest. I have been re reading and reordering the entrys over and over again untill I have finaly came to my conclusion. Congradulations to everyone in the contest even if you didn't get anything. Keep on wrighting and good luck in the future!!!!
Contest Winners
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To anyone whose been hurt by there "friends"1 / Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Sometimes one mistake can have drastic consequences.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don'tby BruisedConfessions 1400 words, 11 comments, on Jul 5 1:42 PM. In Death, Fiction, First person, Life, Sad. Reward
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Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. they knew i did it and they all hated me for it. but they don'tby missrenee 400 words, 5 comments, on Jun 27 10:48 PM. In , Dark, Depression, First person
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Entries [8]
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Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. They don't knoby missy18 7500 words, 2 comments, on Jun 27 4:39 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don't• Commented on by judge.
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"They don't know anything, how could the know the story as to why."
It's in the paragraph we're suppossed to use. That doesn't make sense :\ -
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I presume the first "the" is meant to be a "they"
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sorry typo


