Finish the story

This is my first contest so I decided to experiment a little bit. I will give you the first paragraph of the story and you can take it any way you please.

I will also add more points and maybe some more honorable mentions depending on how many people enter. 


Rules
- swearing is allowed as long as it is not used excessively.
- It can be really long just as long as its not a novel and it keeps the readers interest the whole way through
-no sticky caps even though I have never seen any one use it

other than that have fun! =)

Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don't know anything, how could they know the story as to why. But I have to tell the story to someone, that's why I'm telling it to you.

 

Thats the paragraph I got it from and old story of mine but I thought it will be cool to see other people's versions.

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 24
  • Rewards: Gold: 160, Silver: 80, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to everyone for entering my contest! Every entry was so good I found it extremly hard to judge the contest. I have been re reading and reordering the entrys over and over again untill I have finaly came to my conclusion. Congradulations to everyone in the contest even if you didn't get anything. Keep on wrighting and good luck in the future!!!!

Contest Winners

  1. The Mind of a Suicidal Killer
    To anyone whose been hurt by there "friends"1 / Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did
    by Distancerunner19 700 words, 3 comments, on Jul 1 10:32 AM. In Death, Murder
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Chained Regrets
    Sometimes one mistake can have drastic consequences.
    by Stegofreak 700 words, 1 comment, on Jun 29 3:38 PM. In Dark, Tragedy
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Idle Hands are the Devil's Playground
    by KayZee 1300 words, 2 comments, on Jun 29 3:22 PM. In Boredom, Death, Letter, Young crime
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. The Guilt
    Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don't
    by BruisedConfessions 1400 words, 11 comments, on Jul 5 1:42 PM. In Death, Fiction, First person, Life, Sad. Reward
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. forsaken innocence
    Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. they knew i did it and they all hated me for it. but they don't
    by missrenee 400 words, 5 comments, on Jun 27 10:48 PM. In , Dark, Depression, First person
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. They Don't Know Me
    by NightTime-Fox 200 words, 2 comments, on Jul 9 8:12 PM. In Other, Short story
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [8]

1 - 8 of 8
  • forty to life
    Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. They don't kno
    by missy18 7500 words, 2 comments, on Jun 27 4:39 PM
    • Commented on by judge.
  • "Justice"
    Walking down the row of accusing faces was the worst feeling in the world. They knew I did it and they all hated me for it. But they don't
    by Sailor Moon 500 words, 1 comment, on Jul 6 3:09 AM. In , Crime, Dark, First person
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • KayZee
    June 27
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    "They don't know anything, how could the know the story as to why."

    It's in the paragraph we're suppossed to use. That doesn't make sense :\


  • esimbf
    June 27
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    sorry typo