Does that make Sense?

Okay, this is my first contest and I'm a little nervous....

For this contest I am looking for short pieces that take me to another place. This will be achieved by ensnaring the sense's through sight, smell, hearing, taste, and touch. You have a limited word count to describe yourself to a gold trophy. I want to see what the piece is describing, hear it, touch it, smell and taste it on the air.

The piece can be about anything you want; a moment in time or an actual object. Let your imagination burst through the levee's of your mind and drown you in sweet creativity. I will be commenting on every entry.

A few rules though:

1. Please no CrAzy cAPs

2. Word count is a minimum of 100 but a maximum of 300

3. Use the 5 senses.

4. I must be able to find out what you are describing. You will be automatically DQ'ed if I finish the piece and just stare that the screen blankly murmuring 'What the Hell was that about?'

5. Please you proper spelling and grammar. I myself am not perfect, but if I can't read it, I can't judge it.

6. Have fun and if you have any questions just ask.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 15, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Wow, when I created this contest I had no idea how hard it was going to be to judge. There were so many wonderful pieces. But I am confidant in my final order. First place was utterly breath taking in description and word choice. It literally transported me to a different place. Everyone did so well! Thank you guys for making my first contest a memorable one!

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 173196, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. “What are you looking for?” his charming blue eyes had sparkled like the summer sky.
    “A perfect shell.”
    by Sanchara 200 words, 3 comments, on Jun 2 1:23 PM 2008. In , Love, Pain, Sad, Third person, Tragedy
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Running my hands through the tall grass, golden, my fingertips catching the tops of the reeds. Placing one of the tops between my thumb and forefinger I squeeze, enjoying the release that spreads up my arm as I loosen my grip
    by DreamSpace 400 words, 2 comments, on Jun 10 4:53 PM 2008. In Inspirational, Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 173244, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [7]

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  • It feels so soft, it runs through your fingers like string. 1 / So fishy, it smells like carpet and milk.2 / It runs swiftly like a cheetah
    by NinjaMegami 100 words, 5 comments, on Jun 2 6:55 PM 2008. In
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Darkness cast its shadow over the vast forest as the last bit of daylight dissapeared behind the white-topped Idaho mountains. With the last bit of daylight gone, her desperate optimism was crushed. She was screwed.
    by moonwriter 300 words, 3 comments, on May 15 12:48 AM 2008. In Fiction, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The sweet, seducing fragrance of the blood red flower spread in the cold afternoon air.1 / The dark petals whispered as they brushed agains
    by Peachy 400 words, 25 comments, on May 3 4:48 AM 2008. In Blaaah love writes, Death, Love, Romance, Sad, Short story
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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Comments

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 1, 2008
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    I went over by one hundred words...feel free to d/q


    • FallenShade
      June 1, 2008
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      Feh. I am not a fascist government; I'll give you 100 words. 300 is an ideal goal but not set in stone. Now if it were over 500 we might have had to exchange a few polemical tones..... ^.^

      -Kat-


  • Midnight-Engaged
    June 1, 2008
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    I went over by 200 points and had entered one of my shortest stories......9 to 10 says I'm DQed.


  • DreamSpace
    June 2, 2008
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    Is there a limit to how many entries one person can have? Only I have a few ideas in my head!
    Great idea for a contest as well! I like working to word limits!


    • FallenShade
      June 2, 2008
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      Hmmm.... Feel free to enter two pieces!


      • DreamSpace
        June 2, 2008
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        Thanks I am really sorry to be a pain-I just wanted to know before I started writing!


  • stargirl
    June 9, 2008
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    Is poetry ok or is it just short stories????


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 15, 2008
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    Thank You~~~

    Wow! Thanks for the gold, points and applause! I appreciate it very much~!durian


  • Tiger-Lily
    June 18, 2008
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    O.O I wish I'd noticed this before...but I got caught in exams...

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