So, in this contest, I will give you lines I like from songs. They are from many varied songs and bands, and there will be quite a bit of them. Feel free to use as many as you want, but please put which ones you used as inspiration in your author notes. You can write anything at all, but please watch out for grammar and spelling, as well as other things that make stories good.
Some quick rules;
~No word limits, but try not to make it much longer than 2000 words or so, else I'll die of short attention span-ness.
~Please name which line(s) you used
~Don't worry about swearing or anything of the sort, just don't use too much.
~I adore stories that are deep and meaningful, as well as ones that make me laugh =)
~I reserve the right to DQ any story for any reason, but don't worry, you will be sent a message first with the option to fix it.
BONUS POINTS: If you can name the song or band, or both, from which the line(s) you used are from. I'll applaude your story 3 times!
THE LINES:
♥♥♥♥♥♥
♥Life is but a dream for the dead.
♥Say goodbye to the hearts you break and the cyanide you drank.
♥We are coming to a tender age of miracles and robbers
♥With legs too weak to carry on, we fall apart like falling stars
♥Ever get the feeling that you're never alone?
♥I have been searching for traces of what we were
♥I wake in the night to find there's no one there but me
♥Give into ghosts that haunt you
♥I feel so alone, heart-strings pulled on broken bone
♥You hold onto the promise you'll see him again
♥Look softly into her eyes; a figurine of bluish green
♥Sometimes evil eyes are comforting, cast spells on our hearts; we dont mind.
♥I know my church is not of silver and gold, it's glory lies beyond judgement of souls
♥Every breath we need to stay alive
♥You make this all go away, Im down to just one thing and Im starting to scare myself. I just want something I can never have.
♥How different am I from a wooden boat that barely stays afloat?
♥You see my ghost and you'll never forget it. My face is as white as the snow that haunts me. Sometimes betrayal can make you happy
♥I started blurring the lines, cause I didnt care. I started crossing the line, cause you were never there.
♥When the papers crumpled up, it can't be perfect again
♥I'll be just fine, pretending I'm not, I'm far away from lonely but its all that I've got.
♥We'll show the world they were wrong, and teach them all to sing along
♥Generations disappear, washed away as a nation simply stares.
♥Existence is a fraud, who says you should play God? The future is at stake, a new life to awake. A life of every wish, perfection for the rich. Attempt to fight disease and put our souls at ease. Programmed lethality, destroyed mortality.
♥On the shore we sat and hoped
Under the same pale moon
Whose guiding light chose you
Chose you all
♥Search for beauty, find your shore
Try to save them all, bleed no more
You have such ocean's within
In the end
I will always love you
♥If you believe in love at first sight, nothing's impossible.
♥ Can music save your mortal soul?
♥When I'm choking on words you'll never say, and you'll never feel the same.
♥So if I had it all again, if I could start from the first words I ever said; I'd do it all the same.
♥And Im a million different people from one day to the next, I cant change my mind.
♥Sometimes I feel like I trusted you too well
Sometimes I just feel like strangling you myself
Sometimes I'm in disbelief I didn't know
Somehow I need to be alone
♥War between him and the day
Need someone to blame
In the end, little he can do alone
♥The never-fading rain in your heart
The tears of snow-white sorrow
♥Looking down at the ground to hide
the sorrow drawn on your face
Speaking words from your dreams to disguise
the lies painted in your mind
I'm your pain
you are my hurt
Take me as I am
Believe I am yours
Listening to angels singing to fade
Your screams echoing in my ears
Watching the sun for too long just to
blind myself from the mirror
(with this one, thats the entire song. It just fits together too well to be taken apart. I love this song.)
♥lose another day here
lose another year here
i'm with you
you are the fire, on my apartment floor
sixteen stories, i'd rather burn then fall
and it isn't fate, that took us all by storm
it's just the turn of a card
♥Counting down
Make that sound
Break the silence
Pretend it's not forever
I'll pull myself together
I'll say that I'll forget her
I'll breathe
And I'll say she never hurt me
And look at it as learning
And laugh about the good and the bad
Because I will live forever
We don't belong together
I know I'll feel better
One day when I can make it through
(yup another long one)
If none of these inspired you enough to get you writing, message me and I'll give you a few more =) Im full of them.
Some quick rules;
~No word limits, but try not to make it much longer than 2000 words or so, else I'll die of short attention span-ness.
~Please name which line(s) you used
~Don't worry about swearing or anything of the sort, just don't use too much.
~I adore stories that are deep and meaningful, as well as ones that make me laugh =)
~I reserve the right to DQ any story for any reason, but don't worry, you will be sent a message first with the option to fix it.
BONUS POINTS: If you can name the song or band, or both, from which the line(s) you used are from. I'll applaude your story 3 times!
THE LINES:
♥♥♥♥♥♥
♥Life is but a dream for the dead.
♥Say goodbye to the hearts you break and the cyanide you drank.
♥We are coming to a tender age of miracles and robbers
♥With legs too weak to carry on, we fall apart like falling stars
♥Ever get the feeling that you're never alone?
♥I have been searching for traces of what we were
♥I wake in the night to find there's no one there but me
♥Give into ghosts that haunt you
♥I feel so alone, heart-strings pulled on broken bone
♥You hold onto the promise you'll see him again
♥Look softly into her eyes; a figurine of bluish green
♥Sometimes evil eyes are comforting, cast spells on our hearts; we dont mind.
♥I know my church is not of silver and gold, it's glory lies beyond judgement of souls
♥Every breath we need to stay alive
♥You make this all go away, Im down to just one thing and Im starting to scare myself. I just want something I can never have.
♥How different am I from a wooden boat that barely stays afloat?
♥You see my ghost and you'll never forget it. My face is as white as the snow that haunts me. Sometimes betrayal can make you happy
♥I started blurring the lines, cause I didnt care. I started crossing the line, cause you were never there.
♥When the papers crumpled up, it can't be perfect again
♥I'll be just fine, pretending I'm not, I'm far away from lonely but its all that I've got.
♥We'll show the world they were wrong, and teach them all to sing along
♥Generations disappear, washed away as a nation simply stares.
♥Existence is a fraud, who says you should play God? The future is at stake, a new life to awake. A life of every wish, perfection for the rich. Attempt to fight disease and put our souls at ease. Programmed lethality, destroyed mortality.
♥On the shore we sat and hoped
Under the same pale moon
Whose guiding light chose you
Chose you all
♥Search for beauty, find your shore
Try to save them all, bleed no more
You have such ocean's within
In the end
I will always love you
♥If you believe in love at first sight, nothing's impossible.
♥ Can music save your mortal soul?
♥When I'm choking on words you'll never say, and you'll never feel the same.
♥So if I had it all again, if I could start from the first words I ever said; I'd do it all the same.
♥And Im a million different people from one day to the next, I cant change my mind.
♥Sometimes I feel like I trusted you too well
Sometimes I just feel like strangling you myself
Sometimes I'm in disbelief I didn't know
Somehow I need to be alone
♥War between him and the day
Need someone to blame
In the end, little he can do alone
♥The never-fading rain in your heart
The tears of snow-white sorrow
♥Looking down at the ground to hide
the sorrow drawn on your face
Speaking words from your dreams to disguise
the lies painted in your mind
I'm your pain
you are my hurt
Take me as I am
Believe I am yours
Listening to angels singing to fade
Your screams echoing in my ears
Watching the sun for too long just to
blind myself from the mirror
(with this one, thats the entire song. It just fits together too well to be taken apart. I love this song.)
♥lose another day here
lose another year here
i'm with you
you are the fire, on my apartment floor
sixteen stories, i'd rather burn then fall
and it isn't fate, that took us all by storm
it's just the turn of a card
♥Counting down
Make that sound
Break the silence
Pretend it's not forever
I'll pull myself together
I'll say that I'll forget her
I'll breathe
And I'll say she never hurt me
And look at it as learning
And laugh about the good and the bad
Because I will live forever
We don't belong together
I know I'll feel better
One day when I can make it through
(yup another long one)
If none of these inspired you enough to get you writing, message me and I'll give you a few more =) Im full of them.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 6, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: This is by far the hardest contest I ever had to judge. I think that ALL ten finalists deserve gold, and the rest deserve silver. I simply couldnt decide. All of the stories were so fantastic and amazing! This contest has been a huge success, and I have to thank everyone who entered. All you wonderful authors made me want to scream, cry, and laugh along with your characters. It makes me so sad I can't give gold to everyone =( Im sorry!! I wish I could! It was IMPOSSIBLE deciding what order the gold, silver, and bronze should go in. Thanks again for a wonderful contest!!
~Aura ♥
Contest Winners
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Two best friends unite...on opposite sides of the line. Inspired by a collection of songs, this is a tale of fantasy, romance, and friendshby Tiger-Lily 7400 words, 22 comments, on May 13 5:00 PM 2008. In Action, Fantasy, Fiction, Fragment, Love, Romance, Shor
Gold trophy winner
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by Melancholic Smile 1600 words, 24 comments, on Apr 29 3:17 PM 2008. In Fiction, Mental health
Silver trophy winner
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The probably completely un-awaited new story by some peoples favourite author DoozerDan!by DoozerDan 3300 words, 113 comments, on May 19 2:35 AM 2008. In Humor, Just plain funny, Parody, Rule breaking, Zombie
Bronze trophy winner
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What better way to get to know him than to aid him in a dangerous robbery?• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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As she walked down the wrap-around staircase, her heart began to beat a little faster, a little harder. She dreaded this corner, the next• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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♥Dear Emilia Faint-heart ♥ / ~♥~ / As we journey through the times / Experience I have grown iby Prodigious.Mirth 100 words, 6 comments, on May 4 2:46 PM 2008. In Contest entry
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Once upon a time, there was a girl who loved a boy. They were happy and the girl felt as if she were on top of the world. He’d given her• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Snow blanketed the ground as she jogged through the streets. She anxiously checked her watch. She had a half hour left to find him. A ha• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Click it to find out about it!by Scaramouche. 500 words, 5 comments, on May 11 12:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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She had always wished he was gone, until she realised how much it hurt when he actually left.by Paragonz Shadow 1800 words, 25 comments, on Mar 18 7:21 AM 2008. In Angst, Death, Depression, Other, Short story, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My life has been absolutly terrible since my boyfriend moved away. He said he needed some space, but all I needed was him. Maybe I was being too clingy. Either way, he's gone now and all I have left is the feeling that somehoby ApathysEnemy 900 words, 4 comments, on May 28 11:23 PM 2008. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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Ach... So many of these are familiar, but I can't place the song!
No doubt I'll enter... I love these lyrics <3 -
I absolutely love these lyrics...
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Im joining!



