What lies behind them?

UPDATE: not one person entered, so I'm reopening this. Come on, it's a great chorus, try it

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Don't turn away
(Don't give into the pain)
Don't try to hide
(Though they're screaming your name)
Don't close your eyes
(God knows what lies behind them)
Don't turn out the light
(Never Sleep, Never Die)

Whisper - Evanescence


This chorus, particularly the 5th and 6th line, has always stuck with me, and I can really relate to it. Now I want to see your reaction.

No poems
No bashing

Other than that, it's free reign. I'm not setting a wordcount, and I'll even allow erotica! But if that's what you enter, it must be relevant to the chorus.

Please note, when people write a story or poem 'prompted' from songs, they usually end up including some of the lyrics, word for word, within the work. Often, that is very tacky, and a huge pet hate of mine. If you think you can pull it off go ahead, but if it's tacky, you're out

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 23, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 250
  • Final notes:
    You were the only entry, but even if there were others you would have been a finalist. Great work and thank you for entering. I said most of what I needed to on the comment.

Contest Winners

  1. In here it’s frightening, and I don’t think I’m okay. 1 / “Here” would be my mind and to put it simply, I’m scared out of it and I can’t go back inside there. 2 / “D
    by sugarrrainbow 200 words, 4 comments, on Apr 1 9:05 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • beezy92
    March 27, 2008
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    A reaction to the song? Like a story inspired by the song or just a story similar to the song or where a character in the story can relate to the lyrics?

    • abba12
      March 27, 2008
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      anything you want really. just be inspired by the lyrics. if they inspire to you write a similar story, go for it. if they inspire you to write something the character can relate to the lyrics, go for it, if they insipire something differant completely, go for it lol just be prompted by it


  • Iris Doyle
    April 9, 2008
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    this is kind of more of a poetry prompt....i think....it would be better that way.