Endless, perfection, absence

Okay you got a lot of thoughts you keep to yourself and want to let loose? Then this contest is for you. If you have loneliness, betrayal, regret, guilt, sadness, anger. Just let it all out. Make me feel what your feeling.

Rules.
1.Give me detail
2. No less than 500 words.
3. Put your favorite lyrics, line of a poem, actor/actress's line, quote and put in the 2 line preview.
4. In the author's notes put why you entered this contest.


This is the poem I've been thinking of a lot lately:

I am standing upoon the seashore
A ship at my side,Spreads her white sails
to the morning breeze and starts for the blue
ocean.

She is an object of beauty and strength,
I stand and watch her,
until at length she hangs
like a spec of white cloud
where sea and sky come to mingle
with eachother.

Then someone at my side says
"There she is gone."
"Gone where?"
"Gone from my sight that is all.
She's just as large and massed
and lar and spar, as she was
when she left my side, and she is
just as able to bear her load of living
frate toward desting port.

Her dimminsh sizes in me
Not in her."
and just at the moment when someone
at my side says,
"There she is gone."
There are other eyes watching her coming,
and other voices ready to take up,
the glad shout "Here she comes."
and that is dying.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 7, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 10 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to everyone that entered
    I could tell a lot of thoughts and feelings were picked into it
    Congratulations to the winners.

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  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. "It's midnights late reminder of the loss of her, the one I love."
    by darkangel7567 500 words, 3 comments, on Feb 20 3:32 PM 2008. In
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 142762, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. “You alright, son” utters a weary old priest in a coat and jacket.1 / Sean raises his head from his hands. He sits on cold stone steps, but
    by clichedriven 800 words, 3 comments, on Feb 9 12:27 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Thedamned77
    February 14, 2008
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    I would enter if you allowed prewrites