Give me your best work! If you want me to favour you, I like:
- ORIGINALITY above all. Show me something weird and unexpected!
- Twists and shocks
- Complex characters and relationships
- Good grammar is a plus, but if it's a good story, I won't care.
- Thought processes and intensity
- Genre doesn't matter, but I usually like fantasy (not necessarily medieval) and action. Any sort of mystery is cool though.
- Avoid hard-core erotica
- Dark is fine, and if anything more interesting.
Rules: (sorry, it has to be done)
- Try to keep spelling and grammar problems to a minimum. I just want to be able to read it.
- Please be open to my constructive criticism, but most of my comments are raves anyway
- If you give me a part of a series, make it the first chapter so I can read the rest if I have time. Shorts stories are also good.
- No paying out other people's work
Please don't give me multiple entries from the same writer, because I don't think it would be fair.
I WILL COMMENT on your stuff and be an unbiased judge.
So give me something to read! Hazzah!
- ORIGINALITY above all. Show me something weird and unexpected!
- Twists and shocks
- Complex characters and relationships
- Good grammar is a plus, but if it's a good story, I won't care.
- Thought processes and intensity
- Genre doesn't matter, but I usually like fantasy (not necessarily medieval) and action. Any sort of mystery is cool though.
- Avoid hard-core erotica
- Dark is fine, and if anything more interesting.
Rules: (sorry, it has to be done)
- Try to keep spelling and grammar problems to a minimum. I just want to be able to read it.
- Please be open to my constructive criticism, but most of my comments are raves anyway

- If you give me a part of a series, make it the first chapter so I can read the rest if I have time. Shorts stories are also good.
- No paying out other people's work
Please don't give me multiple entries from the same writer, because I don't think it would be fair.
I WILL COMMENT on your stuff and be an unbiased judge.
So give me something to read! Hazzah!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 8 people
- Final notes: There were SO many amazing writers in this contest; it was incredibly difficult for me to judge!! If you didn't get a trophy, don't feel bad because pretty much any of the stories in the contest could have won - I can not begin to tell you just how close it was.
Inspiration to all, and to all a good write!!! (terrible joke I know, but I couldn't resist )
Congratulations to everyone!
Eph
Contest Winners
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Floating… / Floating in darkness… / Alone without light… / Nothing glows… / Nothing stirs… / It’s just me. / I breathe in cool sea air. Thby water-spirit-ryuu 1500 words, 24 comments, on Dec 18 4:41 PM 2007. In Fantasy, First person
Gold trophy winner
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by AlwaysTheQuietOne 1000 words, 10 comments, on Dec 20 7:49 PM 2007. In Drama, Fiction, Mystery, Young adult
Bronze trophy winner
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by beezy92 300 words, 13 comments, on Jan 18 9:22 PM 2008. In Starting idea, Young adult
Honorable mention
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1 / My eyes opened to pitch black: black void after black void, enveloping within them, consuming each other into an even darker void. I had no idea where I was or why I was here. I heard the occ• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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"Praise be to Allah! May all bow before your glory!" / Five times a day I face Mecca and pray to Allah, the one almighty God. I ask how mby Andy Stephenson 1600 words, 77 comments, on Aug 17 9:32 AM 2007. In Fiction, First person, Inspirational, War
Honorable mention
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Beware the wrath of lucy, maneating orange...eternal
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The pen scribbled quietly across the table, as the pale moonlight shone through the window upon the victim of such a very sad fate. Tearsby saphFIRE13 1000 words, 31 comments, on Oct 10 8:34 PM 2007. In Death, Short story, Spiritual
Honorable mention
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Entries [19]
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Waking up with the bright shining fluorescent lights in her eyes, from the high ceilings above Madeline moaned and tried to move her restrained wrists. They had experimented on her again. When woulby asthray.heart 5600 words, 6 comments, on Oct 4 1:32 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by amaranthine lover 300 words, 3 comments, on Jan 23 10:28 PM 2008. In , Fantasy, Fiction, Prose, Science fiction, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It seemed only yesterday when you were in my arms. Feeling the warmth from your body. Breathing in your sweet scent. Hearing your angelic vby ShannieDannie 600 words, 2 comments, on Jan 22 12:03 AM 2008. In Death, Depression, First person, Love, Pain, Romance, T, Teen• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by xBitterxSweetx 900 words, 15 comments, on Nov 21 2:30 AM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Other, Short story, Spiritual, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Doll
She sat up on the shelf in a room long neglected. A happy child had once lived here but now she was all grown up and living in her own house. Her parents hadnby elfflower1989 2000 words, 15 comments, on Mar 10 7:18 PM 2006. In <200 lines, Depression, Fiction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
WHERE THE BUFFALO ROAM1 / This was the stuff of kid’s dreams when I was growing up back in the day.2 / “Make your play.”3 / Almost as oby Maninblack 6400 words, 13 comments, on Jan 24 6:33 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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A sad story that has to do with the tightest frienship of all time. A story about a young girl, that i invented and i put me in her place,by Xtclozer- 4400 words, 16 comments, on Jan 19 1:13 AM 2008. In Contestentry, Friendship, Horror, Sad, Story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Here you go
I guess that I'm teh first entry... cool! ^_^
I hope you like it, it is just eh begining and I only have section 2 up, (not that I think you'll like it much).
Anyway, here you go, good luck with your contest! ^_^ -
heh heh, dont say I didnt warn you. *smile evily*
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Hehe i've entered that story into 2 other contests, and it got quite a bit good comments, so I figured, why not enter it in this contest too?
I hope you like it.
and i hope you get alot of interesting stories!
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Thank You!
Thanks for the honorable mention and points. I appreciate them. I'm glad you had a good contest. Thanks for hosting.
Andy




