beaten up (option contest)

hey everyone. For this contest I want stories about someone getting beat up. Here are a few options that should give you an idea what I am looking for.

1. a gang robbery
2. gang rape
3. loosing a fight
story starters:
4. They held my hands behind my back and held me steady as their leader approached with a baseball bat.
5. The bully cracked his knuckles gleefully as he looked at the helpless boy he had backed against the wall.
6. The man got the whip down off the wall. His boy was going to be punished sevearly this time!

rules:
1. put your option number in your authors comment box

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 26, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 100
  • Final notes:
    well, this wasn't a very popular contest. Only one of the entries actually qualified for the finalist list, the others didn't follow the rules. Fortuantly, the one who did follow the rules was going to get first place anyways, so congratualtions, you are the one and only winner!

    I hope my next contest is more popular, and I will try to think of a more interesting topic.

Contest Winners

  1. Nothing To Tell
    by Andy Stephenson 1500 words, 8 comments, on Jan 21 3:01 AM 2008. In Adult, Crime, Dark, Depression, Fiction
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    January 26, 2008
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    Thank You!

    I am honored that you chose my story for the Gold trophy. I really appreciate it. I'm sorry you didn't have more entries. I wrote this story for your contest. Maybe that is why it fit so well. I hope your next contest is more satisfying.

    I held a contest that only got two entries and I was offering 1,400 points. It was disappointing, but I awarded the two entries anyway.

    Thanks again.

    Andy