Unbareable Depression



As said in the summary, I like to read 'in nice, descriptive detail' a nice plotted story of aching emotions, that makes you feel as though no one can save you from the unending pain that you are/were feeling... It doesn't matter what other genres you would like to add to your story as long as you can pull it off and make a nice, decent depressing story. The length doesn't matter, as well as the point of views, but please try to refrain from having any grammatical, and spelling errors. I will comment and rate all the posted entries, as soon as possible or as soon as i get online.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 21, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 50 people
  • Final notes:
    (I honestly have no idea what to do here)
    Judging this contest was so hard. Many people submitted amazing stories, but I need to choose only 3 of the best so here they are...

    Ignored
    I'm Sorry, I Love You
    Tears

    Thank You For Entering My Contest

Contest Winners

  1. by DuchessAura of Brie 300 words, 10 comments, on Jun 14 11:10 AM 2006. In Dark, Fiction, Young adult
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by sky black 500 words, 19 comments, on Jun 14 10:30 AM 2006. In Depression, Erotica
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 47171, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. by Cannonsfire 400 words, 10 comments, on Jun 14 8:57 PM 2006. In Depression
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. A suicide pushed on by a mother.
    by demoninfluenced 200 words, 8 comments, on Jun 20 4:29 PM 2005. In <200 lines, Depression
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. by ladynigritude 1600 words, 21 comments, on May 4 7:17 PM 2006. In Dark, Depression, Lesbian love story, Suicide, Symbolic
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. by Cacophony of Chaos 500 words, 5 comments, on Jun 14 2:39 PM 2006. In Depression, Self-injury, Suicide [remove]
  8. by my--i u--k i 900 words, 8 comments, on Jun 13 8:59 PM 2006. In Depressing, Young adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. The Linen Walk
    She sat in the hospital waiting room. Waiting. She had been waiting for an hour. People went in, people came out. Different
    by SlickNick 2200 words, 8 comments, on Apr 10 3:41 AM 2006
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [16]

1 - 16 of 16
  • It was the eve of a cold December’s night. Not a soul patrolled or paraded on the streets, for fear of losing one’s limbs in the bitte
    by Red Death 900 words, 8 comments, on Jun 17 10:51 AM 2006
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by 3400 words, 4 comments, on Jun 5 1:46 AM 2006. In Crime, First person
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dear James,
    The apartment was still on fire when your girlfriend kissed me. I had been almost to the door, coughing the fumes of the sufficateing smoke in my lungs. I was r
    by 300 words, 1 comment, on Apr 15 11:11 PM 2006. In Dark, Romance
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by 3000 words, 1 comment, on Jun 20 3:58 PM 2006. In Pastor
    • Commented on by judge.
  • They are killers. Deadly things. They could rip you in half with a single bite.
    Sharks. They are the best killers, or are they. Is it man,
    by metcher 700 words, 3 comments, on Apr 29 3:35 AM 2006. In First person, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by 400 words, 1 comment, on Jun 21 11:01 AM 2006
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Trust
    The driveway seemed longer than usual as I pulled my car into the garage of my newly purchased home.  Home. That sure did have a pleasant ring to it.  It was
    by Silent Drifter 3100 words, 8 comments, on Feb 7 2:35 PM 2006. In <200 lines, Crime, Fiction
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    June 14, 2006
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    Lol, your lucky you have so many points! with my last contest, im down to 28! well, ill try and write something...i already have something in mind.
    ~Aurora


  • Cacophony of Chaos
    June 14, 2006
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    I have something for you. I will get it up for you! It's short but I wrote it when I was going through a rough time last summer. I never posted it. I was waiting for someone to hold a contest for depressing stories.


    Rayne


  • ladynigritude
    June 26, 2006
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    Thank you so much for the honorable mention, it was such a pleasant surprise to see after I came back from my vacation yesterday! And I would also like to thank you so much for holding this contest!

    Lady