I saw BitterIrony do this contest. And I liked the idea, so here i am. I just want to change it around a little.
Just give me the first three lines of a story. YES, it can be prewritten but I will ONLY judge the first three lines.
There are NO RULES.
I will only judge the first three sentences of anything you enter. You can enter as many times as you want.
Okay leave now. Make it suspensful. Make me want to read more.
xD
Just give me the first three lines of a story. YES, it can be prewritten but I will ONLY judge the first three lines.
There are NO RULES.
I will only judge the first three sentences of anything you enter. You can enter as many times as you want.
Okay leave now. Make it suspensful. Make me want to read more.
xD
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 24, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 30, Bronze: 15
- Final notes: Congrats to the medal winners. Out of my 5 contests..this was by far the hardest contest i have had to judge.
for once i actually got what i asked for! and i used the smallest amount of words. lol.
lol. everyone impressed me. good starts. now go make good endings! ;-)
Contest Winners
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This is just the beginning of an idea for a story that's been floating around my head, but I thought it might work for this contest.by HeatherRoseBrown 200 words, 5 comments, on Dec 22 3:30 AM 2007. In , Dark, Teen, Third person
Gold trophy winner
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The pen scribbled quietly across the table, as the pale moonlight shone through the window upon the victim of such a very sad fate. Tearsby saphFIRE13 1000 words, 31 comments, on Oct 10 8:34 PM 2007. In Death, Short story, Spiritual
Silver trophy winner
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So little. So tiny and fragile, and breakable. It was a shame to see its once proud form left uncared for and discarded.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [24]
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Once you're engaged, there's very few things you can do to excite you. You feel locked, the key thrown away. You'll never again feel the freedom and flutter of love, you'll never again feel the right to talk and breathe on yoby ChristineDaae <100 words, 5 comments, on Nov 23 12:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Prodigious.Mirth <100 words, 9 comments, on Dec 15 8:47 AM 2007. In Drama, Fiction, Life, Other, Weird, Young adult• Commented on by judge.
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Bridger parked the old Mustang beneath the ladder and got out. I crept up to the ladder when Sandy said to me, "Hallie are you sure this is safe it's surrounded by police tape." I looked to her and shook my head no and beganby SayNope2Dopex14 100 words, 3 comments, on Dec 15 9:12 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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He walks his life among us,breathing in our hate and demise of him,exhaling only his utmost well-wishes for us,which we quickly steal,and shatter.He feels only pain and still protects our sound minds with his life.But now,heby Ninja Bubble <100 words, 5 comments, on Nov 19 10:37 PM 2007. In ?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The cold winterly breeze hit my cheek as I walked in my dad's restaurant with three of my best friends. The restaurant was covered with Christmas decoration from top to bottom. I grasped my badge-colored coat and walked side• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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On the edge of a cliff on a warm Sunday afternoon, she stood there with her arms stretched outward. The wind blew soft kisses and caressed her hair. The sun sank below the horizon in a bed of pink and gold...by Lawlight <100 words, 1 comment, on Dec 15 2:51 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You don't need to have read the rest of the story to read this short interlude - it belongs between chapters IV and V.by IrishYndina 900 words, 15 comments, on Nov 23 4:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Chapter One / I watched in pure terror as the man standing before me froze, as if he himself were one of the gargoyles positioned atop the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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DAMN, but she was good.by Hermanator1 <100 words, 4 comments, on Dec 15 5:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Sometimes the line between being perfectly angelic and being Satan's favorite minion is a very thin one. I'm not quite sure on which side o• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by ThinkOfMe 600 words, 4 comments, on Dec 15 8:50 PM 2007. In First person, Suspenseful, Unfinished, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They say that it's hard...to put so much meaning, so much emotion, into such few words. I disagree. With three words, you lifted me. "I lov• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The final thoughts of a suicide bomber.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Will you accept a story that you've previously commented on?
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Can I submit a story and just have you look at the first three lines of it, or do you only want the first three lines posted in a new story?
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yes i will look at just the 1st 3 lines.
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