Somethign Dark

hey guys! this is my second or third contest, not really sure, but whatev!

ok so i want something dark, gothic, emo.
i have some basic rules:
1. no weird writting AdAjdjfkdSdFDJjkdFJDJ
2. try ot keep it under 1000 words, but i give or take like 500. anything over 2000 will be dq'd
3. poetry is allowed, (hint:i love poetry)
4. and a number four just cause i like the number
5. oh and try to keep the spelling good. i know i suck at spelling, but try please, it will not count aganist you, but sometimes when i read i am more interested in how many words you can mispell that i dont look at your story.

tips:
-you can have gay/lesbian storys
-you can include sex and erotica (it might help you a little)
-try to have a relationship gone wrong/but make sure to explain why it goes wrong. anything with parents is good
-try to have fun with it
-oh and if you have a good ending that either make me want to cry/laugh/or want more it will help you a lot!
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A note from the Shorty:
Hey guys, another thing that might help you is this: make sure the text is readable! That means no weird text colors or crazy backgrounds. Thanks for saving my eyes, and good luck in the contest!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 18, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 25, Bronze: 5, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    thanks you guys for entering my contest! you did some great writing. some made me laugh, others made me think or cry. i loved it! and sorry it took me so long to judge the contest, but here are your point! i hope you join my next contest!

Contest Winners

  1. The White Room
    It's not my eyes that burn you, but the fire behind them. The rage that comes from my very soul. It ignites the hatred and sends flames thr
    by darkangel7567 600 words, 4 comments, on Oct 2 6:28 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Sin or Salvation
    by Summer Lion 800 words, 6 comments, on Nov 23 7:16 PM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Erotica, Sex, Short story
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. The Masquerade of Broken Hearts
    A crimson sunset / To reveal to us all / A darkened masquerade / For the world to recall / A blackened ballroom / A hated sight / A vile orchestra / To play to their fright / Fires light the floor of
    by nightmare-lestat 800 words, 6 comments, on Jul 19 5:32 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. My God of Death
    by Deijinn 400 words, 8 comments, on Nov 27 6:21 PM 2007. In Action, Dark, Science fiction, Young adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Secret Admirer
    by BluesMan 900 words, 7 comments, on Dec 2 10:27 PM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Erotica, Vampire
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 112341, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [23]

1 - 23 of 23
  • Barking Dog
    The final thoughts of a suicide bomber.
    by slashinguk 800 words, 193 comments, on Dec 1 4:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, First person
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Theodore
    Nurse Alison worked in a physch. ward, in what was affectionately called "Children's Hall." Nobody in there was under 17, but all the adult
    by callthexylophone 300 words, 27 comments, on Sep 1 10:58 PM 2007. In , Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Offering
    This is one of the more horrifying poems I've ever written.
    by Delfishie 300 words, 16 comments, on Aug 3 1:07 AM 2007. In Dark, Horror poetry, Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Gone
    I dreamt of you1 / When you had gone,2 / When you had turned away3 / I thought of you4 / How you were wro
    by Friesian 100 words, 10 comments, on Nov 10 6:17 AM 2007. In Depression, Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Gone Crazy, Be back Soon
    Was I Ever Normal…1 / Before it started when I was a little girl 2 / Who hadn’t seen what the world could do3 / To innocent bystanders
    by frostany 1100 words, 13 comments, on Nov 21 5:07 PM 2007. In Hurt , Life, Mental illness, Pain, Psychosis, Schizophrenia, Verse
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My hole. ( poem )
    I crawl into my hole again, / The walls so cold and safe, /
    by Xtclozer- 200 words, 2 comments, on Nov 26 7:18 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My hole. ( poem )
    I crawl into my hole again, / The walls so cold and safe, /
    by Xtclozer- 200 words, 3 comments, on Nov 26 7:18 PM 2007. In Dark, Emo, Room, Spirits.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Leda and Her Demon Lover
    LEDA AND HER DEMON LOVER1 / By Robert Davidson2 / Mirrors are living lies, Leda Angelopolos thought. They reflect only the
    by robert davidson 1100 words, 76 comments, on Nov 26 1:04 AM 2007. In Crime, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Unblinking Eye (2nd draft)
    Darlita slowly descended the mahogany staircase. She was lightheaded and short of breath. Her dainty, yet weathered hands shook uncontroll
    by hllykat 1300 words, 24 comments, on Oct 16 1:11 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, Horror, Short story
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Case Number 619
    Dust flew every where as her small hands picked the box up. The blank box sat on the third shelf, had been sitting there for twelve years. The box was placed on a cleared, brown table; its lid making an audible pop as it came
    by Assura 300 words, 2 comments, on Dec 6 5:29 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • To Walk Alone (Working Title) Chapter One
    The Start of something much bigger, based on a dream enjoy
    by Ghost of a Siren 1600 words, 5 comments, on Dec 1 9:27 AM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, Sad
    • Viewed by judge.
  • When She Left
    She cried out when he struck her / She screamed into those deaf ears / She had always thought he loved her / He had once taken away her fears1 / She knew she shouldn't love him / She unde
    by FreeStyleBlue 100 words, 1 comment, on Oct 22 4:35 PM 2007. In Crime, Dark, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Death Is My Wish
    Death is my wish1 / Let me lay still2 / Don’t try to save me3 / This is my final wish4 / Lay me down hard
    by Dark Emo Koji 100 words, 3 comments, on Nov 26 11:14 AM 2007. In , Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Let me suffer
    by Dark Emo Koji 100 words, 4 comments, on Feb 4 10:21 AM 2008. In Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • no title
    A dark, dimmed light1 / I can barely see2 / Constant pain flows3 / As I walk silently4 / alone.
    by lillixbebe192 100 words, 6 comments, on Dec 6 10:57 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Victoria Locket
    December 3, 2007
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    Note: the saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadddd "spelling mistakes" and etc like, aaaaaaahhhh are because.. It shows the long note that the person is singing. ...