Poetry(I'll add more points soon)

 

 Just a reminder, I made a group named ' Storywrite party place'

It's group where you can schedule and have party's.

 

 

 

I want poetry, and lots of it. Anything you want, but it has to be poetry. I will comment on every one.

That's about it.

 

Rules!!!

 

~No Haiku poems!!!!

~I would love to read metaphor poems  so if you choose to write a metaphor poems you will probably win something.

~No adult catigories please. If your poem is adult, you will be DQ, Mkay?

~The word limit is 200.

~I take profanity, but not too much of it or you will be DQ.

~I take romance and love poems, but no slash or gays ones please or you will be DQ.

        Enjoy!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 8, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 155, Silver: 20, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    This was so hard and I had to read and comment on so many entries!!If I did'nt comment on your poem,please let me know.
    Thankyou for entering and good job for the winners, but what I truly want to say is that even know that some people did'nt win a trophy or points, everyone is a winner!!

    Thanx and Keep on writing!!

Contest Winners

  1. by hiGh-on-happYness 200 words, 21 comments, on Nov 10 6:57 PM 2007. In First person, Inspirational, Other, Poem, Sad, Young adult
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. A poem about the wind using similies
    by artemis the hunter <100 words, 5 comments, on Nov 18 6:04 PM 2007. In , Nature, Poem
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by xxbri 100 words, 5 comments, on Oct 4 1:20 PM 2007. In , Inspirational, Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 106115, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. This was written over a year ago
    by Token Massacre 100 words, 12 comments, on Nov 18 5:11 PM 2007. In Poem
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Like a stained glass window,
    with a broken pane.
    by ZackTruel 100 words, 39 comments, on Aug 16 1:05 PM 2007. In Love, More, Poetry, Romance
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 112905, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [35]

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  • My love for you / Is a dove's wings / Flying above the heavens / Sailing the pure blue sky / And it is a fish / Swimming in our dreams / Flowing in the sea we cry / My affectio
    by Friesian 100 words, 2 comments, on Oct 13 3:51 PM 2007. In Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The wind howls as it swirls around me, harsh aginst my face, blowing my hair, causing it to run wild, spirling to my back, as if wanting to
    by Surreal Rhapsody 100 words, 11 comments, on Nov 1 9:11 PM 2007. In I guess..., Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Taylor Renee 100 words, 12 comments, on Nov 13 8:23 PM 2007. In , Inspirational, Love, Other, Young adult
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I was in a wierd mood, tell me what you think.
    by Fervent-Author 200 words, 4 comments, on Sep 28 3:12 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Covering the pain / with hair and candy. / Hair to cover the tears. / Candy to keep me happy.1 / It is fake happiness / I feel in a broken life. / Blood is dripping
    by Melissa Loves Jeffy 100 words, 4 comments, on Nov 3 11:52 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by wilko4523 100 words, 1 comment, on Nov 20 1:02 PM 2007. In Love, Romance
    • Commented on by judge.
  • In shades of quiet blue1 / The water sparkles2 / With the faintest glimmers 3 / Of your mind's deepest closets4
    by Felissa 100 words, 6 comments, on Nov 9 7:24 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Personal, Poem, Poetry
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • This poem is dedicated to my two best friends. They have always been there for me. I live hours away from them, but I love them to death!1 / I miss those days. 2 / D
    by Melli 200 words, 6 comments, on Jan 10 10:10 PM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Beneath the lies of deceit and hate / Shines a hope, to those who seek. / For God will shepherd the righteous, / the sheep of his flock. /
    by saphFIRE13 100 words, 9 comments, on Sep 8 10:38 PM 2007. In , Hope, Inspirational, Life, Personal, Poem, Poetry, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • 1 / Love is a masquerade2 / Possessive and consuming3 / Out of breath,4 / Out of mind,5
    by whichcraft 100 words, 5 comments, on Nov 19 10:19 AM 2007. In , Fiction, Love, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A child doesn't know he's dead / So he wanders, round and round / Lost in a cloud of fog / of loneliness1 / His voice is empty, he speaks /
    by elfflower1989 100 words, 7 comments, on Nov 14 3:12 AM 2007. In , Dark, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Barefoot on the beach / Foot prints in the sand / Memories of the sun / Baked slowly into your skin / Red skin burns from yesterday / But r
    by DemApples 100 words, 11 comments, on May 19 7:19 PM 2007. In Nature summer poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • His face contains secrets. / There the world is hidden. / Beneath his eyes lie the answers to desperate prayers. / Behind his lips lay the
    by Delfishie 100 words, 5 comments, on Nov 18 2:02 AM 2007. In Love, Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • i need you here tonight; / like the ocean needs the waves. / I love you as much; / as the stars love their sky. / I want you as much as; /
    by plurangel 100 words, 3 comments, on Sep 30 7:40 PM 2007. In , Love, Romance, Teen, Unfinished
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Brought to the pain of loss, / I weep over what I had, / But now that it’s gone, / I only just realise what I wanted, / Angels of despair,
    by nightmare-lestat 200 words, 2 comments, on Sep 23 10:04 AM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My friend and I walk the golden sands that stretch on for infinity1 / It is a paradise here2 / A paradise of our own creation3 / A para
    by jamieoj87 200 words, 2 comments, on Nov 21 9:32 AM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge.
  • When I first entered high school / It appeared to me very strange / Very different from my other schools / Man! Was that a change! / And as the days have gone by / I've made a heap of friends / But I have my
    by bakermiddle 300 words, 7 comments, on Feb 3 3:48 PM 2007. In , Love, Poetry
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • THIS IS FOR MISS ABBEY!!!!
    by caitlinstephanie 100 words, 1 comment, on Nov 21 6:36 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Id shatter fast and hard,1 / The pain would kill,2 / It would be your fault,3 / For making my pain spill,4 /
    by Ggaao 100 words, 2 comments, on Nov 22 12:19 AM 2007. In All ages, Love, Romance
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Running away from every pain / Trying to hide it all / Trying not to fall1 / Constantly losing at this game / Feeling the depression / Feeling compression2
    by Forsaken Unicorn 100 words, 2 comments, on Nov 14 5:01 AM 2007. In Depression, First person, Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Baed on White Wedding
    by ChristineDaae <100 words, 6 comments, on Nov 17 2:01 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Laugh all you want1 / I will not break.2 / When you point to taunt3 / me, I will not avert my eyes.4 / Wh
    by celestial.suicide <100 words, 1 comment, on Nov 24 10:07 AM 2007. In Cry, Dark, Depression, Emotional, Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The stones are wet and the mosses cover1 / Smell of decay. My hearse approaches.2 / The lanterns glow like little stars.3 / A red flag
    by Dennis1963 100 words, 1 comment, on Nov 25 6:46 PM 2007. In Dark, Death, Depression
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Only expirence under the circumstance,1 / love, lust, and kisses to boot.2 / Burned touches of smoke and asphat,3 / scrapes and bruises
    by Yours-To-Have 200 words, 2 comments, on Nov 13 3:54 PM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A foreboding caution tempts the hand / Its ominous message a foe ensnares. / Watch out! Its implication tells / To touch illicit dangers known. / Caresses lured cause reddened cheeks / And downward
    by OkapiShomapi <100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 29 2:57 PM 2007. In Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A poem for Rick Summer
    by Shadow06 100 words, 16 comments, on Nov 27 3:23 PM 2007. In First person, Personal, Poetry, Romance
    • Commented on by judge.
  • LOVE, what is love?
    by emperess27 200 words, 15 comments, on Nov 29 10:17 AM 2007. In Love, Poetry, Romance
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Mount the rider; spur the horse,
    by Chaz D. Wolf 100 words, 2 comments, on Dec 1 1:22 AM 2007. In , Contrast, Poem
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Flighty menacing display / Revealing lazily at first / Patience for / The eye to perform / The vulgarian within / This firing, booming whir
    by MaMa-2-be-Cindy 100 words, 6 comments, on Oct 15 10:49 PM 2007. In , Contest, Imagery, Nature, Poetry, Storms
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    November 18, 2007
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    I'm gonna answer when i get a diffrent commputer that isn't being diffecult.


  • Andrew Timothy
    November 18, 2007
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    What exactly is "slash"?


    • Andrew Timothy
      November 26, 2007
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      Could someone tell me what "slash" is, please?
      I'm really lost right now...

      • Myeisha
        November 27, 2007
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        its lesbian or gay stuff...

        • Andrew Timothy
          November 27, 2007
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          Really? I thought it might have had to do with bloody slasher films (i.e. Freddy Krueger).

          Well, thanks for that info...

  • ZackTruel
    November 19, 2007
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    Did she say something was wrong with it? Maybe she just doesn't like it... It is her contest so she can make whatever rules she wants to right?

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