Make me cry
I dont care why
Please, talented writer,
Just make me cry ♥
Sorry.
Poetic moment XD
Now:
Make me cry.
I don't care why.
I don't care how.
Just do it.
No erotica.
No adult categories.
Nothing crappy that I won't care about.
Nothing over 1,000 words. Makes it harder and easier for me.
Prewrites allowed.
Newbies adored.
Now what are you doing? Enter already.
I dont care why
Please, talented writer,
Just make me cry ♥
Sorry.
Poetic moment XD
Now:
Make me cry.
I don't care why.
I don't care how.
Just do it.
No erotica.
No adult categories.
Nothing crappy that I won't care about.
Nothing over 1,000 words. Makes it harder and easier for me.
Prewrites allowed.
Newbies adored.
Now what are you doing? Enter already.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 20, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 12 people
- Final notes: ALright.
This was sooo hard to judge.
If you won an HM, that means you made me cry or come close to it. There were a LOT of stories here that were amazing, but just weren't sad enough to win. I hope that makes sense.
For third place I had two that I really wanted to win: the bronze winner and the poet of Four Poems. It was VERY hard for me to decide. But there yah go. I finally chose.
Thank you all for the great entries.
PS: I'm sorry, I didn't COMMENT on every entry, though I assure you each was read at least twice. If you'd like me to comment now, I would surely be willing to do that Just send me a PM! Thanks so much, everyone!
Contest Winners
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My world is entirely painted in black and white. I'm lying in a pocket in the depths of an unknown forest, snow falling into the ivory whitby Dreams of Insanity 500 words, 20 comments, on Aug 28 6:50 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression
Gold trophy winner
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I walked into the hospital, my face dazed. Looking forward, I walked to the front desk, cradling the freshly picked roses carefully in my a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 111271, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Withering Iris~
What becomes of a shattered heart? A heart that has gone through so much pain and despair... A heart that thinks to itselfby Ghost of a Siren 1500 words, 10 comments, on May 11 11:56 PM 2005. In <200 lines, Depression
Honorable mention
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The urgent phone call awaited me when I got to the room. it was John, my brother-in-law. "Terri, there has been an accident." he said, his• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Images swirl through the brilliant mind of the master. Thoughts race as the stream begins to form in his head. Trees start to appear as the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Death exists -- this is my experience with it.by OkapiShomapi 1000 words, 11 comments, on Oct 1 9:50 PM 2007. In Death, First person, Pain, Personal Honorable mention
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The final thoughts of a suicide bomber.by slashinguk 800 words, 193 comments, on Dec 1 4:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, First person Honorable mention
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"I'll always love you, no matter what," my mother told me, when I approached her shyly, and announced that I had something important to tel• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by hiGh-on-happYness 700 words, 16 comments, on Nov 3 10:01 PM 2007. In Depression, Other, Sad, Young adult Honorable mention
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Jessie was a new girl at school, she just moved to this town where she nows lives. She has only been here for about 2 weeks maybe 3 but her• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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by artemis the hunter 1300 words, 17 comments, on Aug 20 2:54 AM 2007. In Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Miss Hanako Cullen 800 words, 7 comments, on Oct 28 5:46 AM 2007. In Fiction, Love, Sad, Young adult• Commented on by judge.
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They say that it's hard...to put so much meaning, so much emotion, into such few words. I disagree. With three words, you lifted me. "I lov• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by beezy92 100 words, 11 comments, on Jun 6 6:52 PM 2007. In Depression, First person, Teen, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I felt like my heart had found paradise / for I could see a beautiful sunset / everytime our eyes would meet / and I was lost in your beaut• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel like something is clouding my vision. But it’s only the fog. I didn't realize this until I blinked several times and still couldn't see clearly.1 / "Damn it," I whispered to myself. This• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is a song about a friend who told me she was sick of life and how she hated the "race" she was in. Don't do it K. we all love you.by Fervent-Author 200 words, 2 comments, on Sep 17 3:16 PM 2007. In Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A girl who changes everything / To fit in in this world / Cannot change a single thing / Without a new world unfurled. / A girl who's fat, thin, or spotty / Is cast away from her school. / She'll lose weight,by ChristineDaae 100 words, 6 comments, on Sep 2 2:35 PM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I stare up at the ceiling in the darkness. There is a little light coming from the flickering television beside me and quiet voices whispe• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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will you DQ us if we make you cry with laughter? lol jk (= cool contest (= sadly i don thave any tearjerksers. event hough i made my english teacher cry once. but that was an essay and it was crappy. believe me. lol (= aybe thts the secret reason she was crying (=
xoxo
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hehe i foudn something to add. it wont actually make you cry (i dont think) and i know it wont win but i just had to prpove i have SOMETHING sad lol (=
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Questions
1)Can we enter more than once? 2)I have a saturation research paper that made me cry as I wrote it. It is from the point of view of Terri Irwin the day that steve died. Would you take that? -
I don't know if my story is very sad, I certainly was teary when I wrote it, but then again it is about me. I was wondering if we can enter two entries, as I have a second I think is pretty sad. I also wanted to apologize because my story is a little over the 1000 word limit, but not very much.
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PS I'm a newbie, adore me! Just kidding... or am I?
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Okay guys.
54 stupid words I wanted you to read before you entered.
5 of them saying, excatly,
"No erotica," and "No adult categories."
And I still get erotica and adult categories!?
How lazy could someone be! Or they just want to be DQed.
*shake my head ashamedly* Poor Barbara.
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