Poems of Emo-ology

I want Emo poems!
they have to be poems that I can read, so no TyPiNg LiKe ThIs! Also, please try to spell as well as possible, as long as I canget what you are trying to say, I'll be ok.
Nothing more than 500 words, anything else I will not read. There is no minimum of words.
Please nothing overly erotic. Swearing is fine if you see fit.
That is everything for me, so good luck.
Also if you read these rules, write something about how pancakes rule.(I won't penalize someone who doesn't, I just want to see how many of you actually read my rules)^_^

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 1, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 40, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering, it was hard to choose, but I picked what really struck me in this contest. thank you again.

Contest Winners

  1. [Vs: 1] / Long gone our misery departs / we try to break fights and not hearts / as physcotic lust trembles under / we try to stay strong a
    by MyZeroForever 100 words, 1 comment, on Aug 20 4:17 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. He looked out the window as he pulled away1 / His phone began ringing he didn't know quite what to say2 / Remembering now all of those days
    by J-Menz223 400 words, 9 comments, on Oct 24 1:13 PM 2007. In
    Silver trophy winner
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  3. Eyes drip / Tears full of blood / Lonely thougts / Inside my head / The pain hits hard / In my heart / You're breathe / Of discust / And sw
    by angel.of.mine 200 words, 3 comments, on Sep 1 9:16 PM 2007. In , Depression, Love
    Bronze trophy winner
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  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 120323, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. This is for the guy who crushed my heart for the first time, hope you're proud.
    by ARtIfIcIaLrOsE 200 words, 3 comments, on Oct 23 8:08 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Love
    Honorable mention
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  6. here is the hurt / here is the pain / handed to me on a silver platter / by a waiter / that couldn't care less / weather i live or die / and is cursing me under his breath / here is the day / here is the
    by lexiconsthedevil 100 words, 2 comments, on Aug 31 11:00 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Love, Poem, Weird
    Honorable mention
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  7. I am the untitled book 1 / of sorrow and playdough smiles, 2 / the only thing keeping myself 3 / from my happily never after.
    by hiGh-on-happYness 100 words, 5 comments, on Oct 25 10:24 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, First person, Other, Poem, Sad
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  8. Since I saw your eyes / Since we talked that night / Since I felt your heart / And since you broke mine / Since you held my hand / Since we
    by lillixbebe192 100 words, 4 comments, on Sep 26 9:53 PM 2007. In Drama, Love, Personal, Romance, Sad, Teen
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Entries [18]

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  • Wait for them1 / to tear you into shreds2 / hand you the gold3 / or pass by, indifferent,4 / which stings
    by JLPreston <100 words, on Oct 23 6:26 PM 2007
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  • despite all I've done1 / I can't get over you2 / I'm so weak and powerless3 / there's nothing left to do4 /
    by Ebyru 100 words, 4 comments, on Oct 24 12:04 AM 2007. In , Angst, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Poem, Sad
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  • I can see you killing yourself / Tossing away the life you've fought so hard for / Can't you see how you're killing yourself? / And breaking the hearts that love you / I can see the lies that you're telling /
    by elfflower1989 100 words, 2 comments, on Sep 9 11:50 AM 2007
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  • I look in front and I look behind,
    but not one soul my longing eyes find.
    by ZackTruel 200 words, 7 comments, on Oct 11 9:17 AM 2007. In First person, Life, Poem, Poetry, Sad
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  • Happy Halloween (Happy Samhain -Blessed Be)
    by Michael 200 words, 1 comment, on Oct 24 9:50 AM 2007. In , Dark, Horror, Poem
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  • putrid / crumbling / dying inside / failing / fading / feel me die / consummation / corrosion / body decay / rotting / ruination / I cant f
    by Prodigious.Mirth <100 words, 3 comments, on Oct 24 9:49 AM 2007. In , Death, Horror, Other, Pain, Poem, Strange, Weird
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  • I woke up and the room was hollow. / Hard to swallow. Lacking value. / Thinning substance spread on shallow. / Nothing left for me to long
    by Delfishie 100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 21 2:54 AM 2007. In , Angst, Poem, Poetry
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  • Why must I feel so alone, 1 / so afraid, 2 / in this world of everyone, 3 / and everything, 4 / with love
    by Dillweed 200 words, 3 comments, on Oct 25 9:34 PM 2007. In
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  • I'm shaking hands with insanity / Death has become my new best friend / Life has become my enemy / And happiness has come to an end / I've
    by Yi Yin <100 words, 9 comments, on Jul 3 12:27 PM 2007. In Poem
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Comments

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  • Siby Anan
    October 23, 2007
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    The beginning of my poem is a bit...boring, but the second stanza gets more to the point. I entered "He's Back."

    ^_^

    Hope you like my poem!!


  • elfflower1989
    October 24, 2007
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    I'm better at emo stories than poems

    Anyway...I read your rules, just couldn't be bothered to edit, sorry ><'

  • abba12
    October 24, 2007
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    www.allpoetry.com
    its the sister site to this site. as far as i can tell on your profile you dont have anything on it so i guess you mightnt realise its there
    good luck with the contest, i dont put poems on here sorry, else id enter


  • CactusJack silver member
    October 24, 2007
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    Hmm

    emo? I've been trying to figure out what that is...


    • Springs gold member
      October 25, 2007
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      Oh for God's sake, tragic Hero, DON'T ASK THAT QUESTION; We'd be here for months arguing about it.


      • CactusJack silver member
        October 25, 2007
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        LOL. I take it you haven't seen my question on the social board.


        • Springs gold member
          October 25, 2007
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          o.o
          Oh God.
          If only I knew where the social board was to go mental about it...
          Link me?


  • Oleander
    October 25, 2007
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    How come you removed my story from your contest?


  • bird-mad girl
    October 26, 2007
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    you'd probably get better poetry if you went over to allpoetry... it's just a suggestion...

  • contrast
    October 30, 2007
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    pancakes rule man!
    I want to enter my poem ^_^
    Not sure if it falls under emo-ology, but it's about death.

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