It is wonderful to see you have qualified to continue on this journey with us. It really pleases me and the other judges to see you all here ~ The last round was your qualification, you just had to enter a pre-write, however, this time you write a new story ~
The challenges will be tough, and this is not a partiality contest and rather a talent contest, so do not expect any favors. The judges and I are completely impartial on judgment, seeing as we really can’t see your names ~ Moving on ~
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Before we begin, let me tell you something.
In Round One, you earn one of three passes. These are:
~ The Originality Pass – Adds an extra 15 points to your score. You can use this one incase you think you have not done very well on your assignment.
~ The Immunity Pass – Saves either you or someone else form elimination.
~ The Creativity Pass – Adds an extra 20 points to your score and similar as the Originality Pass.
The passes can only be used once. They may go to anyone at anytime, as we look into more than your writing friends. Please, use these wisely and the person who gets the pass, -- must not -- tell any one else he has it. If I hear otherwise – eliminations can be early. Ahem ~ Once you use them, they will be forwarded to someone else. You may use the ‘extra points’ passes only before we judge the contest and once you do, please inform us through instant messaging. IM.
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We have with us, ten extremely talented writers. I am going to divide you into groups in this contest. Each group will be given a specific package. Each of you have to create your own poems though, but you must help out your team members okay!
Now, you’re team members will be giving you marks out of ten that shall go into your points as a bonus, they’ll give you marks for friendliness and sportsmanship ~
Team Pianissimo
~ Delfishie
~ Black Dragon14
~ bowmore bill
~ Aya Uchida
~ Celestanford
Your prompts is:
Chose one of these ~
A spoon
A bowl
A comb
A tie
A tissue
Theme is:
Dark only ~
Team Calando
~ TheBaronVVV
~ The Celtic Bard
~ ChristineDaee
~ litolhumster
~ KiNNky Angel
Your prompt is:
Chose one of these ~
A laptop
A monitor
A robot
A key
Ductape
Theme is:
Romance
Remember, help each other out, it may save you from leaving! Plus, it’s fun. Remember, each of you must chose your own prompt, but the theme is the one given only ~ Three of you will be eliminated in this round, and nine will go onwards to the next rounds. Do your best, guys ~ ~*~
Rules
~ No erotic, adult or abuse categorized stories . It is only for one-year guys, as soon as I turn fifteen, I shall allow those categories.
~ Please submit within time
~ As I said in Round X: You must keep continuing, or I shall ask Barbara to strip your points and trophies from the contests.
~ Read suggestions and judging rules: they help a lot.
~ There is no word or line limit. BUT remember, sometimes the shorter the poem, the more it speaks. REMEMBER THIS but that does not mean you shoudl take away from your poem and become greedy with spending lines ~
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Suggestions
~ Please proofread, two mistakes will cost you one point in the structure category.
~ Originality is a must and is the most important thing here; creativity second.
~ Replying to comments is advisable. It might make us give you the Immunity Pass. Winks ~
~ Be sure to read all rules.
~ Render us speechless. ~
Write something in the author’s notes that tells us about you, your personality, your favorite quote. It advisable to write something deep and effective, which explains your compassion for those in need. It is the key to getting – the passes.
~ Remember – These prompts are very deep. There is a lot to shuffle and budge. Take your time and give us beauty ~
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Co-judges
The renowned and beautiful ~
Senorita callthexylophone
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Grading System -- Our Rubric
~ Originality – 25
~ Structure – 20
~ Depth – 15
~ Plot – 15
~ Feeling – 15
~ Flow – 10
~ Total – 100
~ Now you know what you need to work on here. ~*~
DEADLINE
3rd November 2007
Last time was extremely tough guys. Every little point does matter, immensely. Most of you are going to be left behind by mere decimals, so perfection is required. If you need to ASK ANYTHING, just ask! ~*~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 10, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 100
- Final notes: I have been very engrossed in my own problems, issues and examinations. PLease, except my humble apologies for not judging this on time.
I have chosen a winner --
This person is safe:
The rest, will face the elimination rounds.
And the poet ....
is the person that penned the poem:
Wet Cement
Congratulations Aya Uchida! You are safe from the eliminations with the highest score.
You worked this beautifully, each word was stunning, the imagery was engaging and beautiful ~
The rest of you --
Some of you have got to be shown the door.
Who will it be?
We'll see that in the Eliminations Round.
Contest Winners
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Cardboard cutouts in my shoes1 / standing on the sidewalk2 / with a cigarette between my fingers3 / and a briefcase half full of borrow• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Summon demons from the Dark! / The witches gather! / Spirits summoned, / Gods invoked / and Satan called!2 / The time is come for Magic Spe• Commented on by judge.
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Thine lips art so tender / That meet my rosy cheek. / The embers of your heart / Are felt in your kiss.1 / Your harmonic love keeps time /by saphFIRE13 100 words, 8 comments, on Oct 28 11:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I sit at my laptop all day long / waiting for him to get on. 1 / he is this wonderful man / who is sweet and chivalrous / yet he is sophomo• Commented on by judge.
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Why do you walk away from me? / My beautiful angel / turn your face so I can't see / your tears, your dark, you're lonely 1 / Somewhere in the hidden forest / I forgot the sound / of yo• Commented on by judge.
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When can we expect Round II?

