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Prompt
Points will go up on this one.
This is a descriptive paragraph.
Just look at something and describe it. The weirder, the better. Like if there is a crack in your desk or something, describe it. I won't be judgeing on what you describe, just how well you make me see it. I want to totally see what you see
Rules:
One or two Paragraphs...nothing over 700 words.
Center around one object, but describe it well enough for me to see it.
One entry per person.
Any subject matter, i don't care. I don't offend easily
That's it.
This is a descriptive paragraph.
Just look at something and describe it. The weirder, the better. Like if there is a crack in your desk or something, describe it. I won't be judgeing on what you describe, just how well you make me see it. I want to totally see what you see
Rules:
One or two Paragraphs...nothing over 700 words.
Center around one object, but describe it well enough for me to see it.
One entry per person.
Any subject matter, i don't care. I don't offend easily
That's it.
- This contest was judged on Jan 14 2009 11:52 AM.
- Awards 1500 for gold, 100 for silver, 90 for bronze. 7 honorable mentions.
- Categories: Big points stories, Contest stories. 1 views
- Anonymous - host reads via 'read all'
- Prewrites were not accepted.
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Peel Me A Pomegranate - Lonesome Dove • New write, • commented I love the feel of your smooth leathery skin beneath my fingers. Your redness tells me that - T
Lucky Number Seven - Chason Thunder • New write, • commented I'm sure that at one point every number on my fax machine was visible, though I cannot pictur 
Old Toy Horse - owlish • New write, • commented Wow. Huge rant. Don't comment. So bad. Weird. I'm out of the weird mood now. Also very, very 
Snowdrops Patter - B1oodvamp • New write, • commented It’s snowing outside. There’s ice on my window. Tiny, tiny droplets of frozen water, purest w- M The Last Reminder - Midnightgaze • New write, • commented So beautiful, so alone, so marvelous. It stands in the center of a grassy field, a long forgo
- N my neighbor's bathroom - Claudia Norman • New write, • commented It's really, really not my bathroom. /
Fancying the Mansion - Mag the Chodja • New write, • commented Alas, he had arrived. A mansion of beauty and riches.- S Cemetery Angel - Ghost of a Siren • New write, • commented Once manicured spaces of green, fade beneath a tangle of thick undergrowth. Tombstones, like
- Peel Me A PomegranateI love the feel of your smooth leathery skin beneath my fingers. Your redness tells me that you’re ready to be devoured. I take hold of you firmly but gently and spread you open, surrendering your fruit for the taking. Lik
- Lucky Number SevenI'm sure that at one point every number on my fax machine was visible, though I cannot picture it now; the buttons have long deteriarated i
- Old Toy HorseWow. Huge rant. Don't comment. So bad. Weird. I'm out of the weird mood now. Also very, very short. Not even a story. What the heck.
- Snowdrops PatterIt’s snowing outside. There’s ice on my window. Tiny, tiny droplets of frozen water, purest white, frothy as the most intricate lace. Their small and fragile forms shatter into particles as more snowflakes come and replace th
- The Last ReminderSo beautiful, so alone, so marvelous. It stands in the center of a grassy field, a long forgotten battle-field. The stone was once a polished silver, more alluring than anything I’ve seen before. Yet, now it stands crying out
- my neighbor's bathroomIt's really, really not my bathroom.
- Fancying the MansionAlas, he had arrived. A mansion of beauty and riches.
- Cemetery AngelOnce manicured spaces of green, fade beneath a tangle of thick undergrowth. Tombstones, like jagged teeth, protrude from the ground, their
Entries
- Snowdrops Patter - B1oodvamp • New write, • commented It’s snowing outside. There’s ice on my window. Tiny, tiny droplets of frozen water, purest w
- T Lucky Number Seven - Chason Thunder • New write, • commented I'm sure that at one point every number on my fax machine was visible, though I cannot pictur
- Broken-Hearted Pieces - Namine Ritsu • New write, • commented Broken-hearted pieces scattered in memory.
- Comfy chair - DreamMage • New write, • commented The chair is one of those typical cheap office chairs. One that is supposed to resemble leath
- Old Toy Horse - owlish • New write, • commented Wow. Huge rant. Don't comment. So bad. Weird. I'm out of the weird mood now. Also very, very
- M The Last Reminder - Midnightgaze • New write, • commented So beautiful, so alone, so marvelous. It stands in the center of a grassy field, a long forgo
- SMy Vexatious Alarm Clock. - SaccharineMini • New write, • commented My vexatious alarm clock lingers on top of my old beat up nightstand. Laying, eyes wide open,
- N my neighbor's bathroom - Claudia Norman • New write, • commented It's really, really not my bathroom. /
- Bird's Egg in Wax - Sammiannnz • New write, • commented In our kitchen island we have a small bird's egg in wax. It is small, no make that tiny and i
- LHer Right Eye - LadyLionnir • New write, • commented My mothers right eye causes her to stand out in a crowd of normality.The lid is usually marke
- Peel Me A Pomegranate - Lonesome Dove • New write, • commented I love the feel of your smooth leathery skin beneath my fingers. Your redness tells me that
- Yellow to Gold - Kept As A Shadow • New write, • commented The fire was burning the last remains of our small town. It really wasn't big. Just your typi
- Leave me - Amaranth Dihdzere • New write, • commented I once had a friend because I needed one, she gave me more than I would have guessed. Unknowi
- Fancying the Mansion - Mag the Chodja • New write, • commented Alas, he had arrived. A mansion of beauty and riches.
- S Cemetery Angel - Ghost of a Siren • New write, • commented Once manicured spaces of green, fade beneath a tangle of thick undergrowth. Tombstones, like
- Autumn (description) - Savage • New write, • commented Black branches reaching out above the green grass. You can't see much of the grass though, ju
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