I seriously want to cry.
If you're poem doesn't make me cry, then you basicly won't win :)
It doesn't have to be a true story, but if it is please say so in you're notes.
So yeah! it's simple.
Make me cry. o.O
-RULES-
~HAS to be a poem.
~no sticky caps.
~check spellings.
~please DON'T make it too long.
that's it.
Make me cry :D
Good Luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 31, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 100
- Final notes: Thanks for entering, I enjoyed reading all the poems, unfortunately there can only be one winner
but thanks and congrats to the winner.
Contest Winners
Gold trophy winner
Entries [13]
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No one can blame anyone. / I'm tired. / I've lost my mind. / Situation help, situation S.O.S. / I lost someone. / There are no more coordinates / That I can use to find you. /by JuliaAlexandrovna 100 words, 4 comments, on Aug 22 1:54 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Throughout the centuries they've seen all
They've even seen their old friends fall
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Why did you leave me, / alone in the darkness? / why did you leave me, / feeling so helpless? / I need you, here to guide me / I need you,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by LostShadow 100 words, 13 comments, on Apr 16 7:01 AM 2007. In , Depression, Pain, Poem, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I felt like my heart had found paradise / for I could see a beautiful sunset / everytime our eyes would meet / and I was lost in your beaut• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Great, Aching Hole In My Heart Where He Used To Be / The life drains from my fingers as it did from his heart / Tears fill with wordles• Commented on by judge.
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by jannieballiett 400 words, 8 comments, on Aug 28 7:47 PM 2007. In , Dedicated poetry, Depressive, Inspirational, Love, Poetry, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He’s gone forever / Out of my arms / His voice is evanescent / Alone I cry / A cliché story / That’s engraved in my heart / No one can help me / No one will start / Thouby I Lurv ETF 200 words, 3 comments, on Aug 29 4:34 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Heart broken, Other• Commented on by judge.
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OOOHHHH i must enterrrr...later..ha
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so, any poems that made you cry yet....
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Hmm, two of them almost have..
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almost...you said mine DID...lolz...it takes hard to make ppl cry!!!
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wait...
haha whoops, my bad.
maybe it did, idk what you wrote though.
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haha!! of course not!!!
that'd be cheatin!!!
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I love how you use smilies alot.
maybe I should try it.
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can it be free verse?
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Yupp
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i really wanted to enterrrrrrrrrrr
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