Okai there is big points up for the winner, 2000 to be exact. I have been saving for this, so read the rules and make sure you can handle this.
Also the second best will get a HM just becasuse they were good enough to get there.
I want the best, I want to read the masterpeices of SW that flood the most popular for this week and for all times.
Give me your best story, best chapter, best poem or best anything.
(no plays) you will be DQ'd.
You can enter anything, just please hold back on War stories, I am a hippie, please no horrible Wars. x.x
There is no word limit, as I said enter your best but please give me the chance to read them all, I need to get through them, so don't expect a comment straight up.
And yes I will comment and applaud. There are no brownie points here. Sorry but you get no hints today, just enter and wait and see.
Rules
1. Spelling and grammatical errors will be dotted on, use word doc to check them out. Spelling is a biggy, it must flow and make sense.
2. In authors notes you MUST tell me why you think your story is the best of the best and why you think you need to win this.
3. I am the owner of this contest, do not have a bitch if I DQ you. I have mi reasons, don't complain.
4. iF u EvehN daRe tO wRiTe lYk DiS I will DQ ur ass like theres no tomorrow.
5. Do not complain about my commenting, if I give a small one, theres a reason, a long one, there is a reason. A critiquing one, ther is also a reason.
6. NO SECOND THIRD SO ON PARTS OF STORIES PLEASE.
Okay so if you think you got it down, a story to match this then go ahead.
Outies,
Ebb
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Also the second best will get a HM just becasuse they were good enough to get there.
I want the best, I want to read the masterpeices of SW that flood the most popular for this week and for all times.
Give me your best story, best chapter, best poem or best anything.
(no plays) you will be DQ'd.
You can enter anything, just please hold back on War stories, I am a hippie, please no horrible Wars. x.x
There is no word limit, as I said enter your best but please give me the chance to read them all, I need to get through them, so don't expect a comment straight up.
And yes I will comment and applaud. There are no brownie points here. Sorry but you get no hints today, just enter and wait and see.
Rules
1. Spelling and grammatical errors will be dotted on, use word doc to check them out. Spelling is a biggy, it must flow and make sense.
2. In authors notes you MUST tell me why you think your story is the best of the best and why you think you need to win this.
3. I am the owner of this contest, do not have a bitch if I DQ you. I have mi reasons, don't complain.
4. iF u EvehN daRe tO wRiTe lYk DiS I will DQ ur ass like theres no tomorrow.
5. Do not complain about my commenting, if I give a small one, theres a reason, a long one, there is a reason. A critiquing one, ther is also a reason.
6. NO SECOND THIRD SO ON PARTS OF STORIES PLEASE.
Okay so if you think you got it down, a story to match this then go ahead.
Outies,
Ebb
x o x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 27, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 3135, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Well then,this was certainly one of my betetr contests. Best and longest I have ever had, and I must say, I am kind of glad to be rid of it.
I acheived the 100 mark Id been hoping for, lol. Siby you should be glad I managed to get that far.
I am sorry for those who never recived comments, I have been trying since the beginning to read all entries but some are just better then others, and some just didn't seem to attract me past first few words.
Congradulations to the luck Gold Winner, thats 3000 points just for you
The winner was What Colour are your Wings? By Abba12 =]
Runner up: Have you...? By Siby Anan.
Tnks for all brilliant entries.
~Lady Madeline.
Contest Winners
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by Zsadist Gates 55100 words, 6 comments, on Aug 9 12:19 PM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Dark, Erotica, Fan fiction, Fiction, Gay• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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By myself / I buy myself / Purchase a head / with eyes / and brain / and headaches, too / (I like the pain / it’s one thing I can truly own• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Hug.Trees 500 words, 5 comments, on Aug 12 1:43 PM 2007. In , Life, Sad, Short story, Teen, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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At the crack of dawn the grand city of Tigerian was up in flames as a giant dragon flew above, setting the city a blaze with blue fire. The• Commented on by judge.
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“Yes, finally a case that’s not just any old boring murder! Jen yelled excitedly, jumping up and down. “And the best part is,” she lowered• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Had a stranger approached you from the streets and said, “Dolls can talk,” would you have believed him?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This how the world will end.by sodancewithsoda 1500 words, 61 comments, on Jan 20 12:22 PM 2007. In Death, End of the world, Extremely dark, Second perspective• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by artemis the hunter 1100 words, 20 comments, on Aug 20 3:09 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love: / My definition1 / 2 / 1. Love is something that binds two people together, what some might call almost spirituallby Lethal Contessa 200 words, 3 comments, on Aug 18 3:04 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sequel to SHOGO - Era of the New Beginning, this story continues Saito's life, and ultimately, to his downfall...by SaitoKojima 4800 words, 39 comments, on Sep 18 2:07 PM 2007. In Crime, Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is Combat, the first part thats already been posted, and the second one. Please tell me what you think.by EnemyOfAll 1800 words, 15 comments, on Aug 9 12:16 AM 2007. In Action, Combat, Drama, Fiction, Sci-fi, Science fiction, Unfinished, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Forgive and Forget / I stared at the white plain ceiling, blankly. I was lying on my bed, sighing now and then. I hadn’t slept all night anby Ayesha Raees 1200 words, 15 comments, on Jul 28 7:00 PM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Byesiree Kitchen / (by the way there are no paragraphs. sorry) / It was Monday. A fresh new day of school thought Ryan as he went off to scby sweetberry7 1900 words, on Jul 28 8:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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December 13th 1940 / Today was horrible, I spent my moments alone wondering about my children. My wife, God rest her soul, I miss her so. Tby Miss Hanako Cullen 800 words, 10 comments, on Jul 7 4:23 PM 2007. In Depression, Journal entry, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I dreamed I was a flower, / In the middle of a valley, / Blossoming, flowering, / Beautifully / I dreamed I was the waves, / In the middle• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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At age fourteen she stood adjacent to the massive sliding double door on the high rise apartment complex. She was just out of view listening to her father, and her mother exchange heated words outside on the balcony /by NeoVersifierGB 400 words, 2 comments, on Sep 29 1:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by DancingRed 900 words, 16 comments, on Sep 4 6:58 AM 2007. In Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A Pastor is troubled by his role in the oppression of women; filled with symbolism and metaphor.by bambam1252 2500 words, 2 comments, on Sep 27 11:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Similar to the first one, but with a different ending.by Dark Wanderer 900 words, 1 comment, on Oct 20 3:11 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Mikeypilk 1800 words, 6 comments, on Feb 26 11:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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“I haven’t even got a quarter,” he muttered, more to himself than to her.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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BODYBUILDER / By Robert Davidson / ‘Can I give you a hand with those boxes?’ / The upstairs flat had been let at last andby robert davidson 4600 words, 19 comments, on Oct 9 6:05 AM 2007. In Angst, Life, Love, Romance, Short story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I've broken / the pieces scatter / like falling rain / that never reach the ground / I reach out / to grasp at nothing / and fall into darkness / into imaginary arms / They hear me cry out / but can not respby FreeStyleBlue 100 words, 4 comments, on Sep 5 4:30 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They say that it's hard...to put so much meaning, so much emotion, into such few words. I disagree. With three words, you lifted me. "I lov• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Originally I thought she was joking because we had just suffered a loss in the family.However, this was no joke.by BlackWingedAngel.xo 1600 words, 10 comments, on Oct 28 3:36 PM 2007. In Depression, First person, Hope, Inspirational, Love, Personal, Tragedy• Viewed by judge.
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When You Thought I wasn’t looking / When you thought I wasn’t looking… I saw you hang my painting on the refrigerator, and I immediately wanted to paint another. / When you thought I wasn’t looking, I felt you kby demon-kun 200 words, 11 comments, on Oct 9 9:28 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Troubles like a whirlwind spin around my head, / I try to do what's right but mess it up instead. / I don't know why this happens, / I'm really quite a joy, / My daddy says it happens, / 'Ca• Commented on by judge.
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"If my hearts broken, how can i feel?"by ChristineDaae 1200 words, 17 comments, on Aug 13 5:38 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hearing your voice / It’s so sweet to me / I get delusional and weak to the knees / You can tell me anything / And I’ll believe you / I nee• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When my brother and I were nine and a half years old our dad was arrested, but unlike the previous times he was arrested this time he isn't• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I can still remember my days in primary school. It was a torture, a pain for me to come face to face with all the peopby Dark Wanderer 1400 words, 5 comments, on Oct 20 3:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by The Racing Snake 1400 words, 32 comments, on Oct 4 5:47 AM 2007. In Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"If my hearts broken, how can i feel?"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by abba12 200 words, 7 comments, on Oct 27 10:44 PM 2007. In , Depression, First person, Inspirational, Memories, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A murderer after the murder as he makes his final kill.by EtherealButterfly 300 words, 18 comments, on Apr 27 10:56 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Eyes drip / Tears full of blood / Lonely thougts / Inside my head / The pain hits hard / In my heart / You're breathe / Of discust / And sw• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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These vilolent delights have vilolent ends, and in their triumph die like fire and water which as they kiss, consume. / The sweetest honey• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Once upon a time, King Bob turned into a girl..He / she... It flirted with all the men and women...All in all it was a slut..It love being• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Her heart is broken / But she can still feel / How she loves him / And how they used to / He wants her back / But shes affraid / That whenby angel.of.mine 100 words, 2 comments, on Aug 19 12:50 AM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I ache to feel / Your touch again / Those soft lips / On my skin / I hear your voice / Singing my name / Joyfull tears / Fill my eyes / Inby angel.of.mine 100 words, 4 comments, on Sep 2 1:36 AM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Taking the blade / She puts it in her draw / A smile / Croses her face / The scars are fading / From the times before / And now she is strong / Strong enough to realise /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Just breathe / In and out / Breathe / Don't stop / One more time / Breathe / Just breathe / Keep it going / Don't leave / Just breathe / Li• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Quickly honey / Before it's to late / Sneak out the back / And meet me at the gate / I'll be waiting for you / With my rusty old car / We'll drive all night / Come on sweethear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"When you said you loved me, I thought you meant it, I believed every word. I forgave you so many times, thinking maybe y• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Are you serious?" Jay said to his brother, excitment rising in him, Kale just sat there staring at his drink, turning his head slightly heby angel.of.mine 3300 words, 5 comments, on Nov 7 12:16 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Adventures of Katie Hatchett 1 / The Cat’s Graces2 / The sun rose above a grassy knoll, suddenly flashing a brilliance of yellow lightby Summer Lion 7000 words, 19 comments, on Nov 7 6:04 PM 2007. In Fantasy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Jouven 900 words, 9 comments, on Nov 25 2:43 AM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Erotica, Fantasy, First person, Sex, Short story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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“Another day begins” James thought sadly as he tramped on his way to school. The sun was shining, bathing the world in wonderful warmth and the birds were in full song. Yet, he was not happy. His Parents and two older brotherby Mreynolds058 6200 words, 1 comment, on Nov 21 3:35 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The story follows a contract killer through the stages of planing and executing a hit.by daza07 2400 words, 7 comments, on Nov 20 4:24 PM 2007. In Action, Contract killing, Crime, Death, Fiction, Hitman, Murder, Third person• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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As I walk in the shadows
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All those dreams dumped to the waste side. All those unforgiving memories scarred upon my wretched flesh. How could you hurt me in such a wby Ghost of a Siren 4100 words, 23 comments, on Oct 31 4:14 AM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Fiction, First person, Horror• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey, did you know that the name of your contest is the SaMe as an BIG Killing/War movie???
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Also the name of a game show on TV here.
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Goodluck!
seems like a great contest!
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Good Contest
And this will be the last time I enter that particular story in any contest at all. It's retired. -
85 enteries?
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anyway, awesome contest!
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Yes I plan to read, comment and applaud them all
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amazing then!
do read my entry and tell me that you liked it or not...
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That's a lot of entries to read That will include mine in a little while ^_^
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IM GETTING THER
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I think I've got just the one.
But you're gonna have to wait a little for it
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How many times can we enter?
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Once thank you.
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Hey, Ebb, how's it going? You tired of reading yet? XD
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A bit lowl.
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How many more do you have left?
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Heyyy, have you been stretching the deadline? xD
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lol still extending?
you know you can close the contest and take a few weeks to read the remaining entries if you want hehe, so that people stop adding new things.
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hey, did you extend the deadline again? ^_^
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Haha yes I did, and its 71 now I think
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71, eh?
Will you actually wait until there's a 100, or will you end the contest when you've finished all the entries?
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Congratulations to the winners.
And congratulations to you, Madeline. That took a lot of reading lol.
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