Big Brothers

Ok, yeah I know this is my fourth contest open at the moment, but I had this idea and I thought what the heck I'll have a contest for it. So here it is.
I like stories about older brothers, so that's what I want you to write a story about. Write a story about an older brother, I'd perfer that you didn't make him this horrible, evil person, but if that floats your boat. So, yeah that's basically what I want.

Rules:
~No sex
~No bashing God
~No gay/lesbian stories
~Don't make it horribly long, as I have to read all entries
~So I knew you read the rules type this in your author comments "oogalie boogalie" or if you want just "I read the rules"
~Have fun

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 13, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  All the stories entered were very good. I loved reading them. This was honestly a hard contest to judge. Very nicely done, all of you. Keep on writing. God Bless!

Contest Winners

1. Never Let Go

   She sat by the window, staring out at the black sky flawed here and there with tiny dots of yellow and a great big circle of beautiful ligh

   by On.Cue 1100 words, 3 comments, on Aug 9 3:09 AM 2007. In Abuse, Life, Other, Pain, Teen
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. I'll Take Care of You

   by Greeneyes15 800 words, 14 comments, on Jul 29 2:13 AM 2007. In Fiction, First person, Short story, Young adult
   Silver trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. [remove]
3. Aniki

   8 year old Raph and Dave raised through the woods, ducking and dodging branches and bushes as best as they could. Their small forms struggl

   by ZionSpawn13 1200 words, 2 comments, on Aug 7 11:19 AM 2007. In Family
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. Every 28 Days

   Every twenty-eight days I would pretend to be asleep while my family prepared for bed.

   by Delfishie 700 words, 9 comments, on Mar 6 4:15 AM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, First person, Horror, Short story, Strange, Teen, Weird, Wolves
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Eyes of an Angel

   by jenni-veev 900 words, 3 comments, on Nov 30 7:12 PM 2006
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Don't Speak

   I can hear you. I'm not deaf. I just don't respond. My vocals work just fine. I just choose not to use them. My parents still aren't exactl

   by JuliaAlexandrovna 200 words, 15 comments, on Jun 18 10:28 PM 2007

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [9]

• [ Charlotte sat beside her mother's bed, knowing it to be the last time she would see her again. Charlotte's mother was dying of pneumonia, and had been ill with the disease for quite some time. Her mother's eyes were closed, and the only sound coming fro

  Charlotte sat beside her mother's bed, knowing it to be the last time she would see her again. Charlotte's mother was dying of pneumonia, and had been ill with the disease for quite some time. Her mother's eyes were closed, a

  by janeeyre01 1500 words, 2 comments, on Aug 4 5:27 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Brother Matthew

  by Ahava 1000 words, 7 comments, on Aug 8 4:07 PM 2007. In Fiction, Pain, Sad, Young adult

  • Viewed by judge.
• Tapped

  A story about bringing oneself to terms with more than the past.

  by hey incendiary 2900 words, 2 comments, on Aug 3 1:13 PM 2007

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

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  miles of smiles
  July 29, 2007
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  HAHA! I must enter this.
• QuestionSleep
  July 30, 2007
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  can it be fanfiction?
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  On.Cue
  July 30, 2007
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  Haha. Whoa. I was thinking about writing a story with a girl and an older bro yesterday. I wish I had an older brother...who wants to kidnap me and make me their little sister?? *hint. . . you have to be a guy to be a brothher....I think*